Divine Origami: from the Spiritual House of Bliss to the Heaven and the Underworld

Has the author noticed that your setting is very good, but you can't control the big scenes? Every book collapses in the middle and late stages, so don't write too much about the Supreme Gods and Buddhas, just finish it almost, or refer to how other authors deal with it.

After reading Chapter 16, I don't understand at all what is the use of joining the officialdom when there is no shortage of skills and food? And you still have an emulator? Isn't it okay to grow in the jungle? It is enough to simulate dozens or hundreds of times a day 😅

Support, I hope there is some logic. The first few books are very good in the early stage, but they are weak in the middle and late stages. The cheats and ideas are good, but if you keep adding more in the middle and later stages, it will be too explosive.

Come on, I hope this novel has the same emotions and bottom line as the one on Tinder. The first few novels were all because they were too ruthless and I couldn't read them. Otherwise, the author's imagination is really good! ! !

I have basically read all the author's books, from Infinity of Darkness to Emperor of Truth to Evolution of the Night and Book of Heaven Evolution. I feel that the author's skill level is constantly declining. Thinking about Dark Infinity, until now I feel that it is a rare infinite book, which is simply the fairy grass among fairy grass. The setting has not collapsed from beginning to end. I can still finish reading Emperor of Truth, but by Evolution of Night and Evolution of Heavenly Book, I can no longer read it. Starting from the 500th chapter, these two books feel very boring to read. The author has set too many tricks for the protagonist. It makes me feel that the protagonist can be invincible even while lying down. There is no need to work hard at all and there is no sense of pleasure at all. I hope the author can improve in the future. After all, I recognize your writing skills.

It's a bit redundant to write, just wear it when you travel through time. Why else write this? What is this Coke? Why was he in Blue Star in his previous life and in Daxia in this life? Also, before time travel, an old man forced you to train not to be afraid of ghosts. The old man said it was so that you could travel through Daxia? What kind of drama is this? Anyway, my personal opinion is that it is redundant. The writing is not good.

What I admire most about you, author, is that your novels will never be unfinished. No matter how bad your subscription is, you will stick to it until the end. I'm so touched 😭

I read a few chapters, the subject matter is very good, but the writing is useless. Goldfinger has so many abilities that he doesn't need to grow up at all. The source of the Paradise Spiritual House cannot be explained (given by the master?), And the full-time professional directly replaced the whole body (this is too exaggerated), and the rules of the weirdness are not well written (the lethality is too high, and there are no withdrawal rules, sources and causes). After looking at the chapter list, I quickly started to cultivate immortals to fight against the weirdness.

Neither fish nor fowl There is a Bliss Spirit House that is very powerful once you use it, but in the end it is simulated, which is superfluous.

I found that the biggest problem with the novels written by this author is that the main character has such a big problem. He has been pursuing perfection in various ways. He wants to be the best in everything, even at fatal risks. However, he has always been suppressed and has never been satisfied. He is always jumping to challenges, and it is two or three levels. He is always pursuing better, the best, and then after getting it, he jumps to the challenge, and then continues. In this way, you can still read it at the beginning. The more you read later, the more tired you are, you have no expectations, and no feeling of pleasure, just like drinking boiled water.

After reading Chapter 15, I feel that having an emulator is a failure, and being able to redeem things from the emulator is even more of a failure. It's obvious that the profession of origami maker is very strong when it is developed. You have to get an emulator. How many people left after seeing the simulator?

I was attracted by the introduction I only read two pages, just one word: "Monkey" There is nothing attractive, I still feel upset after reading two pages, there are too many introductions The writing is very problematic.

I have been following Tudou's books since Dark Infinity. Personally, I feel that Dark Infinite is the most enjoyable to read. Then I read The Emperor of Truth and Dark Evolution, and Warship of Fire is not very enjoyable. I feel that the protagonist is not as cold and self-centered as the previous books. Tsk.

Now I feel that the writing of the simulator is too disgusting. I don't know how this book will be, because this thing is a future perspective, a point adder, and infinite rebirth. What kind of plot and various cuts are needed if you have such a complete idea? It doesn't matter if you have the skills. Take a look first, and I won't reply if you are poisoned.

A paper figurine that my buddy cut out by himself.

I was inexplicably tricked into acquiring a woman, and I was still complacent and extremely happy. It was time to stop the loss.

It feels boring. Every time the protagonist upgrades, he will encounter multiple n-level enemies. It's annoying every time. There shouldn't be so many differences between people if there are plug-ins. Otherwise, what's the use of the plug-in? Every time the protagonist upgrades, there will be more than n-level enemies, which means there is no difference without the plug-in. You see, you have to rush every chapter, and you don't dare to use invincibility. Even semi-invincibility. Everything seems to be based on trickery. In fact, there are too many weak others.

The writing is very good and interesting. The setting is very interesting. The writing is also good. The protagonist is not a virgin. The protagonist still has human nature. He will put himself first when doing things and will first detect information when encountering problems. It is very good. Looking forward to the follow-up performance of this book Forbidden strange objects appearing in the book: Bliss Spirit House (can evolve) Prison Suppressing Magic Lamp Earth Evil Nine Dragon Cauldron Customs Clearance Document Daxia Official Way (doubtful)

Why is the starting point of Infinite Darkness gone? Today I read Dark Infinity again, it's really a magical book

1.6 Million finale, are you kidding me?

Subscribe to the last chapter to understand. When you see Chapter 5, there is too much background introduction. There is half a chapter of background in one chapter. If you don't know, you think you are reading a paper. If you write like this, do I still have to take notes when reading a novel? I can't stand it any longer. I feel like the settings are okay, but it's better to just open one hook and walk one line. If I go too many steps, I can't stand it and I can't use my brain.

There are only two worlds, why are there so few superimposed worlds this time? I'm really convinced

The author hopes there will be less cheats in the next book, as there are too many plug-ins and there is no point!

Open a new book, develop less ability, coordinate and coordinate your abilities, and make them systematic, growth-oriented, and regular. Your thinking is enough.

It was really good in the early stages, but I always had the feeling of collapse in the later stages, that inexplicable feeling that I couldn't stand it anymore, except for this one.

The power system was messed up too much from the beginning! Looks so messy

In the past, I couldn't follow the first few dozen chapters, and I had no patience. Now I'll try reading from the beginning.

There is a novel in which the protagonist strengthens the paper figurines. The protagonist gets strengthening points from the dissolution of discarded magic weapons.

This book is great! No editor recommendations?

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