Evolution of the Book of Heaven

I have read the author's three books so far, but have not finished them. The following is my personal experience: When I first read the author's book, I was attracted by the setting and imagination. The plot is also very good, and there is basically no problem with the logic. But why I didn't finish it: 1. Because I felt too tired after reading the book, there were too many settings, and it felt like I was memorizing the knowledge points in the textbook. 2. When writing a lot of settings, the plot is very thin, and I feel that it is not enjoyable, or I feel that I can continue to enjoy it. This plot is over and it is time to move on to the next plot. What impressed me the most was the author's previous book, which was about "Attack on Titan". I felt that I could write more and the length could be longer. I felt that the plot had just reached the middle stage and there should be a lot of exciting points. However, it ended very quickly, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic, but many plots that could have been written more were written in one sentence (I just felt that it could be written in a weak way, but the author simply streamlined it). 3. The taboo thing about writing a book is that the settings before and after are different. Although the author's settings are okay and there is no direct conflict, because the author writes too many settings, it gives me a feeling of leveling up too fast. I get a treasure in the front, which is awesome, but I encounter problems later, but I can't solve them easily. It's like the kind of pre-missions where you get a perfect score in a game, but it doesn't help much when you go to the next task, which is very uncomfortable. To sum up, the author's logic and ideas are great, but the plot is not rich enough, or I feel that the author is in a hurry when writing the book, and a lot of the content can be expanded.

Card levels and card production stars are confusing, which makes people's heads hurt.

This book feels better than the author's previous books. It has been improved a lot. The arrangement of the protagonist's skills needs to be improved. It won't have a bunch of awesome stuff like the previous one, but I feel like there are not many that can be used. Other aspects feel similar to before, with a slight improvement. How can I put it? I still can't say there aren't any cool moments, it's still relatively small. I feel like the protagonist has no abilities at all and doesn't have any pretense at all. It feels like he's just pushing the plot and nothing else.

The setting of the level is OK, but your way of writing it is wrong. For example, one star for white, one star for blue, etc., Readers will regard the color as the primary level, and the one star and two stars as the secondary level. Just like the late Golden Elixir and the middle Nascent Soul stage of cultivating immortality, no one will write about the late Golden elixir and the middle Nascent Soul stage. So the author should put the star rating in the front and the color in the back. One star is purple and one star is gold.

I feel like there are so few comments! (0X0)

The best thing is the infinite darkness

The shortcomings of each of the author's books are basically the same. In the early stage, the writing was good and attractive, but in the middle and late stages, it began to fall apart. The setting became more and more ambitious, but the author's writing power was really limited. As a result, the content in the later stages that should be more exciting turned out to be very boring, tasteless, and became increasingly unreadable.

After saving a 6-year-old girl, ten years later she has an undying love for the protagonist. Do you think this is reasonable?

I kind of know why the author's book wasn't popular. The cheats the author opened for the protagonist are really powerful. Go back in time and change your destiny. Use whatever cheat is powerful. It's so awesome that I felt bored even while reading this book.

A girl liked him so much that she faked her death to avoid him. Although it doesn't mean that you have to agree if you like it, but it is too cold to do so. I used to like movies without heroines, but now I really hate movies without heroines. A book with a female protagonist makes the plot richer and the icing on the cake.

The heavenly book? The heavenly book of ancient will?

Why do I give up every book of yours after reading it halfway? It's because you habitually pile up various abilities on the protagonist. There are too many and the focus is lost. It means constantly working hard to acquire a new ability, using it once or twice, then putting it aside, and working hard to acquire the next skill.

Does the author open new books so quickly (⊙o⊙)! , First raise a hundred chapters and then kill 😃

I just want to know that there is no heroine, but I have to write a character who is in love until death. It feels so uncomfortable to watch┌(

When the protagonist reaches 30,000 years in the physical body, he will encounter at least the following three problems: 1: Language problem. Will the language after 30,000 years be the same as 30,000 years ago? How does the protagonist adapt to the change in language? Let's just say that in reality, the languages ​​spoken two thousand years ago and today are not completely similar, and the accents and pronunciations are even more different. I don't think text is so advanced now that it can't be changed. 2: Life issues, what is the protagonist's financial source, and how to survive thirty thousand years later. Thirty thousand years later, when science and technology are developed, communism may have been realized, and there is no shortage of food. Maybe the country will provide free food, but this is involved in the third problem, and the protagonist cannot solve it. 3: Identity issue, I can't imagine the technology 30,000 years from now, but identity recognition must be very advanced, at least it can easily lock a stranger. Are characters with unknown origins like the protagonist not interrogated? Nowadays, everyone uses mobile phones to pay. In 30,000 years, genetic identification and DNA payment may be used. This is something that the protagonist cannot avoid. I just started reading it, and I haven't finished the first chapter yet, so I feel inspired.

Is there a group? By the way, can you please join us?

I've read about three hundred or four hundred chapters, and I personally think it's pretty good. It's not popular probably because it's a bit complicated. If you learn some simple writing and simplify some things, more people will read it.

Very disappointing, probably the kind of book I don't recommend reading.

Does it feel like the protagonist wants to aspire to be illiterate? You entered Void Academy and you still don't want to study? Because I was an orphan before, I only knew some basics about the world. Now I have the ability to learn more, but I don't want to learn. Moreover, it involves improving my future strength. It is impossible that so many big guys in the human race set up the academy just for fun and to cultivate talents. If the protagonist has the guts, he should drop out of school quickly. No one is forcing him to go to the academy. This brain circuit is also weird.

Why is the author's writing style so strange? It looks like a running account but upon closer inspection, it doesn't look like it. It looks weird.

Well, there are many settings in the Card Civilization Period that I really can't stand. I have to use my brain to read it, because there are too many settings. If I really need to use my brain, the brain capacity really cannot handle so much information.

Thank you very much. You can write each book according to your own ideas until the end. It doesn't have to be unfinished.

I found that there is a serious bug in the setting of Tudou's talent cards (I am not a troll, if Tudou sees this post, please read it carefully), and that is the specific type of talent cards. From the description in Tudou's later text and Chapter 49, talent cards refer to natal cards that can be upgraded simultaneously with the upgrade of the card owner. Each person only has one card in his life. In Chapter 4, talent cards include combat, auxiliary and special categories (for easy differentiation, I classify categories other than combat and auxiliary categories into special categories). The difference from other cards is that they can be upgraded as the card owner upgrades. But there is a chapter in the previous article that says talent cards are not unique, and the protagonist may obtain other talent cards. In Chapter 42, the protagonist gets a card, which is also a talent card. The meaning of this talent card is a "talent card" made by peeling off the talents of living things. It is completely different from the explanation of the protagonist's own talent card. Obviously, Tudou did not realize here that he named two cards with different concepts with the same name. Although both are called talent cards, they are two types of cards. For example, I think the talent cards that each card disciple has are more vividly called "natal cards", while the second type of talent cards made by depriving biological talents should be called "talent cards". I hope Tudou can revise it as soon as possible, otherwise it will not be conducive to readers (Put it up so Tudou can see it!!!)

I really can't accept this copy of Magic Circle. This is too much for Madoka and the others. Intellectually I know this will maximize my benefits, but emotionally I really can't stand it. They have worked so hard to get here and deserve the gentle treatment of the world.

Why doesn't the author understand that popular novels usually don't have heroines?

The problem is still the same old problem, every book has this problem. I just couldn't finish it.

There are no major poisonous points, but there are constant minor poisons. Basically, they are problems with description and writing. In addition, the character of the protagonist is not outstanding, he is just an ordinary person who has obtained the Wind Spirit Moon Shadow.

If you look at the Reincarnation Paradise, they only use one sword technique from beginning to end.

I want to know why Li Mengqi, Elsa, Ram, and Priscilla are all gone. . . . There's also Zombie Mo, which was mentioned but nothing came of it. I'm quite looking forward to the plot. . . . Is the first heroine such a loser? . . . . After all, she must have undying love. . . .

It's okay in the early stage, but it looks annoying in the middle and late stages.