Lord of Beichen

Can I play a role?

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

How can I put it... I was originally on the Shuangwen track! I keep mentioning cheating, forget about being suppressed before becoming a god. I finally became a god and it's so good to have two gods. Another clone comes to continue to suppress... Just, double pressure... Akaashi who reads cool articles, Akaashi who is obscene, and Akaashi who is a developing farmer... It is not easy for Akaashi to let so many types of readers at one time. It's hard for you, author!

1. In the first case, I was fighting a woman to death. No one came to save me and she died. In the later part, I played with her that she appeared to be a prostitute, but she was actually a good woman. Then I forgive her for this. 2. The battles and conflicts are too intensive. The protagonist fights when he goes out. This is not a metaphor, he actually fights when he goes out. This can easily make readers feel tired. 3. At the beginning, the protagonist is still a little shrimp, and he is caught up in a plan to save the world. You can write it as a foreshadowing, but don't make it clear immediately. Everything that happens is directly stated to be someone else's plan. The impression is very bad. The protagonist is still an ordinary person. To sum up, the idea is very good, but it is very tiring to read. Moreover, there are two eunuchs in the front and one is unfinished. It is difficult for people to have the desire to follow up.

The most noble god position should not be. The Jade Emperor? Not counting Sanqing. Emperor Ziwei seems to be one of the four emperors. Not the most noble one.

Looking at this book now, except for the protagonist's character, which makes me have a tendency to be a money-splitting boy, everything else is fine The most incomprehensible thing is why those two brothers and sisters were adopted. The protagonist is considered their father-killing enemy, and the settings of their parents are not good. , He was also full of calculations towards the protagonist before his death. At least I don't like those two things. The protagonist himself said that he doesn't like children, but he still keeps them by his side. He should quickly send them back to the Taiyin Watcher. The girl who was originally said to adopt these two children, why did the protagonist adopt them again? 😓😨😰

The general direction of the theme setting is really good, but the small content becomes more and more stinky as I read it. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. He is cunning and sophisticated but doesn't understand it. For example, Goldfinger is very good at the beginning, but the biggest effect behind it is to kill monsters and upgrade to shorten the time, and other things cannot be reflected. Also, on the one hand, the author does not add Taoism to the protagonist, and on the other hand, he does not dare to offend others. As mentioned earlier, the setting is for the protagonist to be gentle on the surface but unwilling to suffer behind the scenes. To put it bluntly, he can make money and has a background, but he is also afraid that others are the disciples of some emperor or god behind his back. Even if others are just people in the Taoist temple and are not considered high-level people, they will definitely stand up for a small disciple. They always swallow their anger when they think of which god or emperor the other people are. If they want to become gods, how do you write about it? Just become a Ninja Turtle. I also want to write about pretending to be awesome. I feel that I am awesome for no reason. When I go out, I don't dare to show my dignity in front of others. I feel uncomfortable when I change to cool. I don't know where I am when I feel cool later. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I am. I really don't want to give these 11 monthly passes, so I'm going to skip to reading the subscribed chapters before running away.

I didn't know how to comment at the moment. I started writing a conflict plot as soon as it was published, and it took almost 50 chapters to finish it. The author has written several novels. I don't know what it means to be detailed and brief? Also, look at the title and introduction of the novel, and then switch to a fire-wielding swordsman? From the beginning, it has been repeatedly mentioned that the protagonist is familiar with various Taoist classics, but in the end nothing is reflected except Liu Ding Liu Jia. So what is the significance of the arrangement? Still laying the groundwork? By the time the foreshadowing is done, readers will abandon the book.

Game writing covered in fantasy skin. The career setting is not systematic and very messy. Each profession cannot be upgraded independently, which is very rigid. The relationship between gods and practitioners is very contradictory. I feel that practitioners are just vessels for gods to descend, and practitioners do not have the feeling of a reserve army of gods. The overall environment is fragmented, and the advantages of Shinto have not been brought into play. It is said that the unified front actually fights separately.

It's hard to get nervous every time I see this title I can't help but ask, is the protagonist Yu Beichen's master?🙂

The subject matter idea is okay, but it's too watery. Forty chapters of Liu Ding Liu Jia Gong Technique each require half a chapter to show off its superiority. After dozens of chapters, there is always a narration to introduce it. The plot is only a few hundred words per chapter, and the rest are all private goods.

The setting is pretty good, but the writing is so average and ruined.

After reading the introduction, I feel that the protagonist has traveled to Japan. The so-called millions of gods are millions of demons and monsters. Otherwise, how could there be so many gods protecting him in one corner?

It's a flood. Che Zhulu talked about a few things back and forth, but it didn't look good. He was busy eating some grains, and he couldn't serve them all grain porridge.

If you don't understand, just ask, if the protagonist has traveled through time, is it true that he is also an extraterrestrial demon, so it is actually the internal collapse of the extraterrestrial demon?

Station B has two treasure UP owners: the "Cultural Heritage Transfer Committee" and the "Game, Film and Television Mythical Universe". It is very helpful for writing ✍🏻 novels. The author and teacher can watch their research videos. Neither "Journey to the West" nor "Fengshen Yanyi" describe Chinese mythology and the charm of cultivating immortals. Also, Gonggong Zhurong is a deity of our human race, not a witch race (most of the so-called twelve ancestral witches are the ancestral gods of the human race). Taiyi and Dijun are not demon emperors, they are the ancestral gods of our human race (Dijun's son Houji is also the ancestor of Jifa). It is recorded in "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" 😊 The origin of Dijun Type is the ancestral god of our human beings "The Classic of Mountains and Seas·Dahuangxi Jing" says: "Emperor Jun was born in Houji." Guo Pu's "Note": "Jun Yi is Ku." Hao Yixing's "Notes" ": "Emperor Ku's name is Kuang, and Kuang and Jun are both ancient and modern characters. There is no need to change Jun to Ku according to Guo. The Emperor Jun is the Emperor Ku." "Ji Xue Ji" quotes "Emperor Century": "Emperor Ku, The surname is also Ji. His mother was unaware that she was born with a supernatural power and said that her name was Kui. "The founder of Heavenly Court was the ancient Chinese god. The names of Queen Mother of the West and Houtu did not change. In addition to the Three Qing Dynasties, Taoism also has three ancestors (Xuanyuan Huangdi is one of the three ancestors of Taoism. It is also said that Xuanyuan Huangdi is the reincarnation of the Jade Emperor. Because one of the prototypes of the Jade Emperor is Xuanyuan Huangdi😋) and the Taoist Sanyuan Three Official Emperors are Yao, Shun, and Yu😎 The gods in the "Shan Hai Jing", Wuluo, Kaiming, Lu Wu, and Yingzhao are all officials of the heaven. Yingzhao is still the real leader of the Royal Horse Prison 😊😊 The following picture shows the introduction of the gods of heaven and the distribution of power of the heavenly palace guards ("Journey to the West" does not mention the Nine Heavens Xuannv and Bima Wen as The leader of the logistics management department must maintain the mounts of the three major battalions of Heavenly Court 😆) Many people don't know that the father-in-law of the True Dragon King of Heavenly Sea (father-in-law refers to the clan leader) was conquered by Yuanshi Tianzun and signed a contract (equivalent to Heavenly Dragon The inner court of the Heavenly Court (the gods of the Classic of Mountains and Seas were conquered and joined the Heavenly Court as civil servants) 😊 recorded in the "Tai Shang Dong Xuan Ling Bao Eight Powers Summoning the Dragon" The chief leader of the horse supervisor) Heavenly forces (including the three major battalions of cavalry in Heaven) Heavenly forces

What kept me reading this book was mainly the author's worldview and application of the Taoist system. Personally, I think it was a labor of hard work and quite exciting. There are many shortcomings to mention. Let me start with the most fatal problem of numerical expansion. The author may feel that he needs to quickly improve the protagonist's realm to save the world. This is correct, but the world view is too big and the author's writing power cannot be controlled at all. As a result, I saw that after more than 200 chapters, it is actually a cycle of practice-distress-opportunity, and then there are long paragraphs of settings, explanations, and nonsense. In fact, the most exciting part is the first 50 chapters, the sense of oppression that one may die at any time and the strange feeling of a new world. After becoming a god, the author still wanted to open up the world view of Zhutian, but it was no longer interesting. In fact, this book is suitable for writing when the protagonist becomes a god. It is too difficult for Zhutian to write something exciting. One final point to mention is that the author likes to ask questions after explaining large sections in the book, doesn't he? I don't know who this is for, but it feels like the author is immersed in his own world of interpretation, isn't it? Finally, I wish the author a smooth completion of this book🙂😁

The author was immersed in the self-righteousness of the book, and did not consider the reader's perspective when writing the book. He wasted a good subject in vain.

The subject matter is very good. . The storylines are all good. . It's just that the author talks too much. Every mental activity needs constant explanation. . Many can be taken away in one go. . If it can be changed. . He really has the talent to be a great person. . For example, add points to research. Just say what is most needed at the moment and add it directly. . You must analyze the advantages and disadvantages of all skills. It also needs to be analyzed in detail. This is no longer necessary. It's free before and after it's put on the shelves, no problem. If it is still like this after it is put on the shelves. It might not be worth the money.

There will be many gods under the protagonist's command, and the frog god Shanhe is just the first, and there will be many more later, so collect them and see if there are any good ideas (open! Hehehe~). For example, when the protagonist goes to the big city and has a place to stay, he will slowly get all the six gods of the house. These six spiritual gods will have special origins, and they will not be simply condensed from the power of incense and wishes like the six gods of the house in Yufu Village.

If there are book friends who want characters, just build a character building~ Brother Meng can write down the characters he wants, including: name, personality, race, origin, specialties (Taoism), etc. Because the protagonist will achieve several god positions, he will have a large number of subordinate gods (of course, the most numerous ones will definitely be Star Lords of all sizes). I will choose the character according to the situation, and then arrange which god he will become in the end~ Two book friends have already said what character they want, so I will paste it on the first and second floors.

Ever since the protagonist became a god, he either upgraded or died. Just talking about this back and forth is so boring.

The overall story frame and writing style can be explained but, just because it is the same as Stinky Foot Cloth, it can be explained in circles. I decided to give up. The storyline accounts for half, and explanations from various angles account for the other half. It's killing me, I decided to give up

You've asked for leave too many times, right?

It was very frustrating to write. After writing a hundred or two hundred pictures, I finally felt happy and he got it for you. The combat power was diluted too fast. As soon as I reached the top level, I immediately opened a new realm. In one sentence, the wheel of the car said in succession. No update every three days

How high does the author intend to set the status of the Four Saints of the North Pole?

Just finished chasing the latest chapter, you are free 😭

The world is so big, but I only venture outside my home. In a mixed society, people rely on their strength and I rely on their potential.

When I saw the protagonist choose a profession, I was confused. Swordsman? Farewell

I don't understand why Confucianism and Taoism have the most holy teacher (corresponding to Confucius), then why Taoism can't have the Three Pure Jade Emperors