Lord of Beichen

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

How can I put it... I was originally on the Shuangwen track! I keep mentioning cheating, forget about being suppressed before becoming a god. I finally became a god and it's so good to have two gods. Another clone comes to continue to suppress... Just, double pressure... Akaashi who reads cool articles, Akaashi who is obscene, and Akaashi who is a developing farmer... It is not easy for Akaashi to let so many types of readers at one time. It's hard for you, author!

1. In the first case, I was fighting a woman to death. No one came to save me and she died. In the later part, I played with her that she appeared to be a prostitute, but she was actually a good woman. Then I forgive her for this. 2. The battles and conflicts are too intensive. The protagonist fights when he goes out. This is not a metaphor, he actually fights when he goes out. This can easily make readers feel tired. 3. At the beginning, the protagonist is still a little shrimp, and he is caught up in a plan to save the world. You can write it as a foreshadowing, but don't make it clear immediately. Everything that happens is directly stated to be someone else's plan. The impression is very bad. The protagonist is still an ordinary person. To sum up, the idea is very good, but it is very tiring to read. Moreover, there are two eunuchs in the front and one is unfinished. It is difficult for people to have the desire to follow up.

The most noble god position should not be. The Jade Emperor? Not counting Sanqing. Emperor Ziwei seems to be one of the four emperors. Not the most noble one.

Looking at this book now, except for the protagonist's character, which makes me have a tendency to be a money-splitting boy, everything else is fine The most incomprehensible thing is why those two brothers and sisters were adopted. The protagonist is considered their father-killing enemy, and the settings of their parents are not good. , He was also full of calculations towards the protagonist before his death. At least I don't like those two things. The protagonist himself said that he doesn't like children, but he still keeps them by his side. He should quickly send them back to the Taiyin Watcher. The girl who was originally said to adopt these two children, why did the protagonist adopt them again? 😓😨😰

The general direction of the theme setting is really good, but the small content becomes more and more stinky as I read it. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. He is cunning and sophisticated but doesn't understand it. For example, Goldfinger is very good at the beginning, but the biggest effect behind it is to kill monsters and upgrade to shorten the time, and other things cannot be reflected. Also, on the one hand, the author does not add Taoism to the protagonist, and on the other hand, he does not dare to offend others. As mentioned earlier, the setting is for the protagonist to be gentle on the surface but unwilling to suffer behind the scenes. To put it bluntly, he can make money and has a background, but he is also afraid that others are the disciples of some emperor or god behind his back. Even if others are just people in the Taoist temple and are not considered high-level people, they will definitely stand up for a small disciple. They always swallow their anger when they think of which god or emperor the other people are. If they want to become gods, how do you write about it? Just become a Ninja Turtle. I also want to write about pretending to be awesome. I feel that I am awesome for no reason. When I go out, I don't dare to show my dignity in front of others. I feel uncomfortable when I change to cool. I don't know where I am when I feel cool later. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I am. I really don't want to give these 11 monthly passes, so I'm going to skip to reading the subscribed chapters before running away.

I didn't know how to comment at the moment. I started writing a conflict plot as soon as it was published, and it took almost 50 chapters to finish it. The author has written several novels. I don't know what it means to be detailed and brief? Also, look at the title and introduction of the novel, and then switch to a fire-wielding swordsman? From the beginning, it has been repeatedly mentioned that the protagonist is familiar with various Taoist classics, but in the end nothing is reflected except Liu Ding Liu Jia. So what is the significance of the arrangement? Still laying the groundwork? By the time the foreshadowing is done, readers will abandon the book.

Game writing covered in fantasy skin. The career setting is not systematic and very messy. Each profession cannot be upgraded independently, which is very rigid. The relationship between gods and practitioners is very contradictory. I feel that practitioners are just vessels for gods to descend, and practitioners do not have the feeling of a reserve army of gods. The overall environment is fragmented, and the advantages of Shinto have not been brought into play. It is said that the unified front actually fights separately.

It's a flood. Che Zhulu talked about a few things back and forth, but it didn't look good. He was busy eating some grains, and he couldn't serve them all grain porridge.

It's hard to get nervous every time I see this title I can't help but ask, is the protagonist Yu Beichen's master?🙂