Lord: Sequence Master

I hope the main character in this book has less abilities. His brain capacity has shrunk as he gets older.

Chapter 150 is extremely poisonous. Two fragments of the godhead were actually handed over to the government in exchange for the title of hereditary duke. Author, are you serious? ? The protagonist is a little shrimp of Sequence 7. He is alone and weak. The government does not think it is reasonable to hand over fragments of his godhead! Why don't you stay to improve your strength, develop your power, and upgrade your divine buildings? You already have the title of earl, what's the use of having another title of duke? Does the picture look good and sound good? To satisfy vanity? What's more, in the extraordinary world, you are only Sequence 7, can you bear the title of Duke? ? The protagonist is a child holding gold in a busy city. If his virtue is not matched, there will be disaster. Author, if you write like this, you will poison many people to death. Strongly recommended to modify.

The main god space plan clearly shows that one can grow through the main god space, but in the end, he went to sea to become a hunter. I already have a spiritual mirror, and I don't know how to make money by developing it. If I don't develop it, I won't develop it. The key is to open up a wasteland first. The protagonist still has the ability to read, so forget it if you don't pay attention to it. I spent time contacting him, but in the end he didn't use it. I hit Sequence 9 and the painter skills were stacked to death. Then there's the Glory Secret, which says it can't be developed, so why would you give the protagonist something that's already available at the third level so early? It was said that the development of the main god space will soon upgrade spirituality to 12, but it has not been upgraded yet. I am still thinking about whether to go to sea or go to school. I am speechless. Do I still have to choose? You are a noble, and you are not gifted with combat power. Otherwise, your reading ability will not be developed well, so you still dare not go to Sequence 9 (although I have retired from Sequence 8), and you can hide in the study. With so many abilities, you still can't make any money. There are so many abilities, but if you don't upgrade them, what's the point of developing skills? A level 6 skill can be used as a level 9 skill at will. What's the use of using a level 9 skill without upgrading. Hammering here and there is too watery and illogical. You can still get the skills you want by spending money in school. In the Sea Spiritual Realm, skills that are useless are not just for sale. The key is to make money.

It's limited and free, so I won't watch it. It's not of high quality. The main character has a lot of good stuff, but it's useless. It's not managed well. It's just looking for trouble every day.

This author is just too greedy and wants everything! The result is that there is no sense of achievement when winning, and because of too many abilities, the protagonist who can be easily grasped by the readers' imagination has to work hard to win, which makes the protagonist extremely stupid. This is a situation where the author digs holes for himself. The more abilities and combinations there are, the more holes there will be.

The writing is too complicated and I want to write about everything, which makes it look like a mess and makes it difficult to read.

Why doesn't the author understand yet? What we want to read is a plot novel, not a setting explanatory text! The more abilities, the better. The more abilities, the more chaotic they become.

The author and the protagonist are enjoying themselves throughout the whole process, and they are playing a single-player game. There is no plot about Mao. They fight monsters and upgrade from one copy to another. I really didn't expect that this kind of novel would be read by people.

I look forward to the author's new book every time, but the author sets too many settings and gives too many good things to the protagonist. The protagonist is like a waste material. He has everything, but if everything doesn't work, he will be useless in a few days.

To read this author's novels, you have to dehumanize him, otherwise you won't be able to read it if you're a bit soft-hearted. His books don't end well for people who are good to the protagonist, and he shows his ingratitude more vividly than Gu Zhenren. This is not a dark novel. Dark novels are at least a human being. This person is no longer a human being. Although I am not a good person, I can't dehumanize him.

He wants everything. At the beginning, he is a noble, a painter, and a hunter. Goldfinger is also a study and a master computer. Even if he develops a weapon, he needs to combine cold weapons and hot weapons, as well as eye skills and space. Wanting everything means not allocating much in each aspect. At the same time, adding so many things also compresses the space that the plot can occupy. Coupled with the dryness of the author's own writing, the book is not attractive enough. After reading several books, nothing has changed at all. I don't know if I have stayed true to my original intention or if I have stagnated.

I couldn't stand it at all. I couldn't stand it after reading one chapter. The protagonist has three professions, and the main profession has doubled growth. In addition, the protagonist has been given a golden finger. You don't need to read the rest. It must be the way the manual is written. I thought it would be dark all the way and it looks very cool. In fact, the main profession has doubled growth, and there are two additional professions. Even a pig can be chopped at random. The original excitement is ruined. Whenever the protagonist encounters a setback, the protagonist will kill him.

It looks like there are too many good things, but few are actually useful. The protagonist uses the most resources to support the useless protagonist. He wants to imitate the Lord of Mysteries, but his imitation is not very good. It often takes months and years to practice a skill. Doesn't the spiritual golden finger have any good things to speed up the practice? Everything I take out from Hunter World is nothing but good ones.

The author's book is not bad in logic, has a grand narrative, and is very creative, but basically there is a problem. It is very attractive in the early stage, but falls apart in the middle and late stages, and the appeal plummets. Personally, I feel that the reason is that the skills are updated too quickly, the skills are too redundant, the skill development is too low, and they are thrown away after use. Every time I see a skill that is very powerful and very attractive to the readers, the protagonist basically throws it away after using it once. Just like there is a card in Tinder that is related to the emotions of mother and child. The production cost and requirements are extremely high, and it is also very powerful. The writing is very attractive, and the readers are full of expectations about how to upgrade or dig deeper into this skill in the future. However, after using it once, it is gone. , Full of disparity, and felt that the story had lost its continuity, and the subsequent plots did not feel that attractive, so I stopped reading this book after reading more than a hundred chapters; In addition, the sculpting skills that the protagonist acquired at the beginning of this book, practiced hard, upgraded, and then developed new applications later were definitely a highlight of the protagonist, so the appeal of this book in the middle period is also relatively strong; Personally, I think the biggest problem with the author's book is that the skills of each protagonist are not developed in depth, and there are too many skills, skills are replaced too quickly, are complicated, and have no system, and cannot complement each other. It is recommended that the author set up a skill system for the protagonist to specialize in various general directions, such as soul, body, blue bar, attack, defense, and escape. Each main skill should be updated from the initial elementary state. The new iteration (do not replace it), takes a skill from its initial state, continuously absorbs various essences, and continues to upgrade and update. It is very satisfying. In addition to keeping readers looking forward to it, it can also promote the development of the story and achieve multiple goals with one stone. In addition, the main skills should be complementary to each other, promote each other's gains, and develop in a positive direction. This will make the protagonist appear to be powerful as a whole, rather than just superficial skills. I have said so much that I hope the author will continue to persevere. When I first read Infinite Darkness and The Emperor of Truth, I was thinking that the author wrote such a good book, why is he not a great master? Maybe it was because the environment at that time was not suitable for the dark flow? But now, few readers want to see Our Lady, but the best of times is to rise up! Boss!

I feel that the author writes infinite variety comics that are more interesting than original ones.

The author has written so many books that I can't even figure it out. Every time, he gives the protagonist so many and complicated twists and turns. He gives him so many fancy skills that it's dizzying to read. The most important thing is plot, plot, plot!

1: Kill the demigod gray mouse, and then you can use the hunting drop to get clues for the protagonist's subsequent adventures. Otherwise you are simply insulting the reader's intelligence. A god of the rat race who has been around for tens of thousands of years, has been dealing with human beings for so long, and you just adopted him as a pet as soon as you lost your wits? 2 Continue to simplify the combination of the protagonist's abilities, and use more temporary props and abilities that will be useless after being used once. Don't make so many long-term things. We don't want to endorse the book. Understand? Call me instead. The part where you adopted mice as pets was simply too intellectual.

There are many and complicated settings, which makes it confusing to watch. It feels like there are a lot of branches under each sequence. How to write fighting scenes in the future? There are more than dozens of branches under just one artist. Everyone has completely different abilities. Basically, the author can't write well.

The protagonist is greedy and has no overall perspective, which makes people feel uncomfortable

It's enough to write about one profession, and at most add a side job. As for the protagonist, there are too many professions, it's so confusing.

The starting point of Infinite Darkness is too high, and it feels like the author has no ambition. Most of the old Infinite books are highly toxic now, but Dark Infinite will still be readable in ten years. Yuanxiao is so cruel. And his kind is really dark, and some books are about the protagonist having antisocial personality for no reason, which makes no sense. The best thing about Dark Infinite is that everyone the protagonist kills deserves a death, even himself. And there is almost no logical conflict found in the entire book.

I have read several of the author's books and I have a lot of imagination, but the author feels that he has been wandering around in one universe and cannot write about the vastness of the heavens. They are all fake worlds. The writing is obviously very awesome, but in the end it feels like it is all imaginary and there is no universe.

In the first chapter, it was written that not even a piece of paper could be taken out of the original study room, but only a few chapters later, more than 140,000 static paintings were taken out of the study? Isn't this a slap in the face? 😅

All the books written by the author want to add the ability to read, but I am tired of aesthetics and don't want to read them.

It seems like you won't be able to get good grades if you don't write Zhutianliu.

Damn it, why is your author level getting lower and lower as you write? Isn't it already level 5?

The author who eats books the fastest

High EQ: I hope that the author's abilities will not be too complex and too complex. He is too old to remember Low EQ: With one more ability, he can write more words, and the author can write unlimited words.

Another indistinguishable author

Suddenly I thought of the author to take a look.