Night Evolution

The writing is really not good to read, and it makes me feel uncomfortable when I see a group of people entering Hokage. Disgusting plot, disgusting protagonist. He is simply a stupid dragon Aotian with a golden finger. He thinks that he is smart even though some of his actions and choices are stupid.

The protagonist's abilities are too confusing. There are obviously many skills, and the talents are said to be very powerful when they are obtained, but they are of little use later on. It is a bit uncomfortable to watch and does not form a system.

Isn't China's mythological ability stronger than the Japanese ninjas? Why do some books always write about Naruto?

The author, I don't know if I can let you see it. ... ... ... I learned about you from Infinite Darkness. To be honest, when I first started watching it, I found it quite amazing, very strange, and very thoughtful. Later, I don't know why I was eunuched by you, and I couldn't stand it anymore. Personally, I think it's because you are too eager to express yourself, have a lot of ideas, but don't write them in detail. You take your time, too many settings are thrown out in one breath, and the readers are confused. If you read for a while, they will forget the previous ones.

However, the idea and setting are all very attractive, but it is really tiring to read, and there are a lot of bad sentences. What if the author wrote a novel based on speech recognition?

Why are four books with two million words only lv4? And each book can actually be written

The protagonist's growth rate is too buggy. In his previous life, the protagonist entered the game a year later, had no information and 300 years of experience, and still became a top assassin. Now that he is reborn and has the plug-in of time telepathy, his growth rate will be far faster than others. How to write the subsequent plot? He can only interact with plot characters, and other people cannot participate at all. This book should not be a stand-alone game. So the author will definitely let other people participate. So the question is how to write it? If other people can play rivals with the protagonist, then the relatively slow growth rate of the protagonist in the previous life will make it impossible for him to become a top assassin.

Chapter 23 The author's own spoilers are great

Rebirth novels are really boring. The earliest ones were about people who were reborn to buy lottery tickets, trade stocks, and join the class. Then they were reborn to play online games. Now they are reborn to play the apocalypse. They take advantage of every step, compete with Zhuge Liang before the war, and play Lingbo Weibu during the war. In a word, because they are reborn, they are so awesome.

I have just read dozens of them and feel that there are a lot of things that are not clearly written, such as three hundred years and the destruction of the human race by powerful individuals, such as the rebirth of the protagonist and the first wave of super-dimensional games, such as the origin of "Dawn". These should be written carefully. The protagonist's ability feels like it can change both energetically and qualitatively, which is a bit unclear. Because the details of the battle are poorly described, the protagonist's character seems reckless. The plot is very rushed, and the background of the story is not clear. The ability to swallow eyes was designed very carefully, but there was a problem with the entry point. It was created without any foreshadowing or foreshadowing because I was disgusted by the Eye Technique. Then the first pair of eyes felt like rushing to the protagonist. Generally speaking, the author's imagination is very good, but he is limited by his writing power. Maybe there are other reasons that I don't know about. But I think the author can write very good works. I hope the author will work hard.

This is a novel about games written in the name of science fiction

I hope the author will post more updates🤭🤭🤭

Didn't we agree that we should have a smooth start, and evolution depends entirely on swallowing?😏

I think we can combine the hell ringtone of the twin-tailed snake obtained in Hunter World with the kitchen heart, so that various emotions can be integrated into the ingredients.

Isn't that Xianglin better quality and cheaper? She is a natural wet nurse, has a large amount of chakra, and can handle the medical perception seal by one person. Her status is not as good as Haruno Sakura, and she is easier to fool than Haruno Sakura. She just needs to wait for the Chuunin exam to be delivered to her door.

It looks great, don't cut it off.

Is this considered dark? I think it's just stupid. . . The government raises hundreds of millions of people, but it is of no use. Really engage in the dark stream, and use the whole killing buff or growth props to make use of these hundreds of millions of people, and kill more than 100 million people a year. What can't be learned? Select those with good physiques, make puppets and zombies, and then connect the souls to the ghost formation Isn't the sustainable development of the entire human material more reliable than this?

The first part is actually quite good, but when it comes to Naruto later, the combat power evaluation and the evaluation of Sakura when I accepted her are in conflict with my personal understanding of Naruto, which makes me unable to pass that point. Of course, the main thing is to accept people who have hatred for me as subordinates.

After reading more than ten chapters, it was very uncomfortable. The first character design is inconsistent. The protagonist, the so-called number one assassin who has lived for three hundred years, is always startled. Compared with Master Gu who has lived for five hundred years, he can only say that the world is different. The second logic is too confusing. Shenma was wiped out by a god of death overnight, and the federal government, which has been developing for 200 years, wants to send the top five masters to hunt down a newcomer for a new map and equipment. The third kind of mysterious skills, Shenma used a dagger to peel off a human skin coat, read lips based on the jitter frequency of a person's shadow (this is really intolerable), etc. It made me look like a black man with a question mark on his face.

I can't stand this anymore. Do you go to every world just to take in a female slave? It is obvious that you can slowly develop and push forward, but you have to pretend to be B and survive the doomsday in the future. Will you be a person with a little loli mentality a long time ago? The author writes that all the strong characters are female characters and they are all mentally retarded and idiots.

The writing and plot are terrible, don't blame the author. There are a lot of skills that are written but few are useful, various world BOS forcibly reduce intelligence, and various BOSs can be killed by leapfrogging. Every time he is about to die, the protagonist will change places with the clone or throw a clone to replace himself. I almost vomited when I read it. The emotional clone also has teleportation and space displacement? The biggest poisonous point is the Naruto world. Hinata only likes Naruto because of her excessive hormones. . Sasuke forcibly changed gender? There are too many poison points to count, and the division of strength levels in the anime world is unclear. One moment, it is said that Liu Dao and his younger brother are both count powers, and the next moment, a count-level dream-making female insect is created to beat Kaguya? It's a chaotic batch. The two brothers were sealed by the combined strength of the Earl, but Kaguya still can't be killed. The protagonist can easily and casually kill him by cheating and killing all kinds of dead spots. The fight scenes are all left to the readers' imagination? Compared to Reincarnation Paradise, this novel was written by a child. After the poison test is over, non-old poisonous people should not fall into the trap easily.

After reading this book for so long, I really can't stand it. Taking Haruno Sakura is pure and simple. The lower limit of this character is the same. He inherited Tsunade's Yin Seal and it's almost the same as Tsunade. Moreover, this character is disgusting in the original book and I can't stand it. Just like the review said, the pocket can be closed. He is completely a hexagonal warrior. He has no shortage of intelligence, assassination, talent and loyalty, and he also matches the profession of the protagonist. Mainly, I am disgusted by Haruno Sakura.

Speaking of darkness, it doesn't have that kind of taste. From the Countess of Hunter World, we can see how a truly dark person can keep his promise, not to mention that everyone is dead, so why are they guarding the island. They say they are brave and tolerant, but they act arrogantly and violently, without any tolerance at all. Personal evaluation: The protagonist cannot be a conspirator, nor can he be a leader supported by everyone. He is not qualified to be a killer. In addition to completing the set goals, the killer will at least not do anything extra

I don't know why, the more I read, the more disgusted I feel with this protagonist. He has no lower limits and will do anything for himself. I guess he will kill his whole family as long as it is beneficial to him, and he also calls it for all mankind. Haha, I won't read it. It's annoying. I really don't know what the author means by writing this. Anyway, I can't accept it. By the way, I have already read the Death Chapter, and I really can't bear it anymore. Goodbye, such a dark book is not my cup of tea.

This is the end of this book. It is almost impossible to make a breakthrough. Let me talk about my biggest feeling. There are many props, many talents, many bloodlines, many characters in the book... I have written a lot, but none of them can catch people's attention. After reading it, it will pass. It is like an assembly line, without soul.

It's super ugly, so poisonous that you have no friends. Hunter World is so stupid that you hire a murderer to join the Phantom Troupe and use fear to scare you to death. 300 Years of experience as an assassin are nothing like anything else. You lived to the highest level of human beings in your previous life, but now you're shocked at everything in the LV4 world. The 360-degree joints have become stronger and it's completely like a joke. I suggest you don't read it if you're reading novels. I didn't want to read the first Hunter World until I finished it. Of course, if this is your first novel, just read it. It's okay.

The protagonist is just a stupid young man. If he insists on writing a high-level killer profession, the character will collapse and it will be embarrassing to watch. The character of the protagonist will be automatically blocked so I can barely read it.

Halfway through, I felt that the protagonist was too evil, damn... It would be a waste to resurrect such a person!

First of all, to clarify my identity, I should have read the author's first book, a doomsday rebirth novel (it seems to be blocked now?). Of course, I still read pirated copies at that time, but I have made up for it now. Except for one infinite novel, I have not read any other novels (it seems the protagonist is named Yuanxiao?). However, I read them in Honor Reading before, and now I have started to switch to the starting point. The following words are not malicious or offensive, they are just my feelings. First of all, I would like to express my admiration for the author who has almost never updated it. You are almost the most dedicated person in the book I have read, but when it comes to the brilliance of the book, it is not as good as that. All of your books have this characteristic - changing from the small map in the early stage to the large map in the later stage, the combat power is greatly reduced, and only various once-in-a-millennium geniuses and old monsters who live in seclusion behind the scenes can be added to justify the theory, and these characters appear very abruptly. For me, the plots you designed often do not make me feel wonderful, but I feel that my IQ is insulted - the protagonist must be framed by some old monster when he is in trouble. Usually at this time, you have to change the map. Let's talk about the protagonist you portrayed. For example, in this book, the career set at the beginning was somewhat biased toward assassins, but then he started to become reckless. Looking at the ending of the book, is the protagonist still a little bit like the original? Not all assassins are assassins who can wield a dagger and use latent skills! It's troublesome for many books to revolve around a career, so many people don't specifically emphasize the protagonist's career when writing a book. The character of the protagonist is also very awkward. You wrote that the protagonist is a person with a dark heart and does not trust anyone, but to be honest, your writing is not good. It is not just about casually abandoning people of the same race that can make readers feel the character of the protagonist. Not every book needs a heroine. All in all, when the book ended, I barely remembered the plot of the book, it was like reading a running account. I vaguely remember that you said in a book a few years ago that you were writing books full-time, and that your life was pretty good (it was too long ago, and it seems you were in an inland city, so if I'm wrong, just complain). I wonder if your life has become better after writing books for such a long time. It seems that you have also said that you will write several books and have set a goal for each book, so I wish you to complete this goal as soon as possible. (Bold guess whether you write books just for fun🤔, if so, just pretend you haven't seen what I posted🤣) I wish you can write better next book. The above is a message from a humble old fan who has never written an article.

Why do so many people say the Sharingan ruined Kakashi? I really think it was the Sharingan that made Kakashi successful. How do ordinary ninjas become stronger? Sage mode, space ninjutsu, Eight Gate Dunjia, believe in science. . Kakashi has no talent for sage mode or space ninjutsu. . He is not a person who can indulge in science (most of the people in Naruto are scumbags (*￣rǒ￣)), as for the Eight Gates. . It seems that Kakashi has training in the original work, but he can only open the first few doors. In the final analysis, the eight gates are strong because the person who practices the eight gates is Kaihuang, and the rest of the training is basically self-destruction. Even without the Sharingan, according to the development of the original work, it seems that Kakashi will be the White Fang + the Third Generation in the future. Although it looks very strong, this is purely a quantitative change at the Kage level, and there is no qualitative change at all. At most, it is the same as the other four Kage, very strong at the Kage level. Facing Hashirama, Madara even has the Six Paths mode. He was directly beaten and reduced to a mere soldier, and human energy is limited. White Fang and the Third Generation are both geniuses, and they are most specialized in swordsmanship or escape techniques. It is still unclear whether Kakashi can become White Fang + Third Generation, and besides, without the Sharingan, Kakashi is missing one eye, and his strength will definitely be affected. Without the Sharingan, Kakashi has changed from a kage-level gatekeeper and jounin ceiling to a relatively strong kage-level. . But with the Sharingan, although it is not that powerful when fighting Jonin and even some Kage level, you can use Kamui to support when fighting Six Paths Madara, and you can use Susana to resist the sword when fighting Kaguya. . This really raises the upper limit