Taoism on the Five Internal Organs: I Was a Heavenly Master in the 1990S

😎 It's the kind of pseudo-moralism that has five shortcomings and three shortcomings, and is self-righteous after watching some zombie movies.

It's really best not to write plots that mix with the official ones. You can be related but you can't join directly. If you do join, you can't say that this is an established organization, otherwise it will be difficult to achieve results. It's not a question of whether you like it or not. To put it bluntly, lone wolves are much easier to write than the official ones, and they are much more enjoyable. Most authors My writing skills just can't stand up to writing complex official backgrounds. Especially if you start to join, you will have to wipe out a considerable number of readers first. The current environment of Qidian is flying into the sky. Don't worry about whether this is reasonable or not. The problem is that if you can't attract readers in the early stage, there will be nothing later.

If there really are such expressive gods and ghosts, then China in your world view should not have the pain of World War II.

I am not a judge of Fengdu. Tiancao has no surname and Xuantai has no name. How can I control Fengdu's black body? Are you planning to forge the Jiuquan Order? I'm afraid that the West Tai Censor will kill you as soon as you inspect the black body.

The timeline is written in a mess, and good customs of the Republic of China are not written, but it is mixed with national martial arts and supernatural resurrection. Without the writing power, how can you be strong? What are you pretending to be? Author

Weird, then cultivating immortality, then practicing martial arts, then cultivating immortality, and then practicing martial arts. This kind of interweaving feeling is really uncomfortable. What I wrote before is lofty, even the rules have been mastered, and then I started to practice Xingyi Baji...

I just saw you being lied to by 749. You have practiced the Arctic Fengdu method and you are still lying. You really have no respect for the Arctic Ziwei Emperor. If you don't understand Arctic Exorcism Academy, don't be too harsh on it. If you write about Shenxiao Yufu or Tianshu Academy, even if it's not rigorous enough, I won't complain too much. But you are writing about the North Pole Exorcist Academy, which is famous for its strict laws. Are you not afraid of being registered in Tiewei Mountain if you slander the Arctic Fengdu method like this?

I just read a chapter or two. The author must be young. As a person born in the 1980s, I still have an impression of the mid-to-late 90s. In that era, even in rural areas, military uniforms were rarely worn. Writing the 1990s as the 1960s and 1970s feels really inconsistent.

Why does the author make so many foreshadowings? It's so confusing. What's the meaning of water numbers? You just go to the semi-invincible style. The protagonist just needs to defeat demons and eliminate demons. One word is cool.

The author's understanding of the official organization is the local police station. The procedures in the 749 bureau are similar to those in the capital. I asked him once on site and again when he returned to the bureau. In reality, the official organization becomes more formal as you go up. This does not mean that it is perfect and meticulous, but the process. From villages and towns to prefecture-level cities and then to provincial capitals, you can feel that it is getting more and more complicated. Every step needs to be guided. The larger the organization, the more afraid of chaos, so it needs fixed procedures. In the novel, the situation is exactly the opposite. It is too casual, even worse than the village committee.

Let me just talk about one thing, why did the protagonist become like an ancient person when he returned from time travel for the second time, and spoke in a polite manner? It didn't take long.

After seeing two chapters of "Flying on a Plane", I no longer have the desire to read any more... Five grains of rice make a bowl of porridge, which tastes better than water. Victims of the book famine can come...

It's well written. It's one of the best books I've ever seen among the two worlds. The flaws don't hide the flaws. The writing style is okay so far. It's very smooth and makes people sink in and read. Keep it up.

According to the way it was written at the beginning, this weird book will be directly conferred on the gods. Now it is estimated that it is difficult to finish the book. Qingyun has been writing for so long, and the readers have finished it.

The character of the protagonist is really unlikable

Almost every paragraph ends with an exclamation mark. No matter whether it is an exciting plot or not, it is always an exclamation mark. It's so uncomfortable to watch. Does the author not know how to use punctuation?

They're all good, but I don't like pig's feet because they are always startled.

The battle plot is very simple, without the Taoist calmness. It is always between life and death. It is boring to watch too much.

The character conflicts before and after the time-travel dungeon were written too bluntly. The protagonist was cautious before the time-travel dungeon, but ended up crossing it without asking why he did it. Wait, etc. You followed the old man to the city, and you were like a local. Then you suddenly came back like a normal person. The plot connection was too stiff, and there were drama conflicts between the characters. Why did you suddenly meet a few students, and suddenly saw the news that you had disappeared suddenly for 5 days? You disappeared from your classmate's house. The news spread across provinces?

The protagonist is not likeable, and the transition of the article is not good. The climax takes several chapters to come, and I feel like the whole world revolves around the protagonist. I don't know much about Dahei Lyu. I read in the comment section that it was correct, but I didn't see it from the protagonist.

Are you from the sword sect? Or a Taoist temple? The writing is quite good, but are you passing on too little? If you don't know any Taoist techniques, what about the inheritance of Taoism? Some are too simple. You don't even learn the talismans, refining alchemy, Taoism, Taoist scriptures. Why are you in charge of the sect? Even if you don't learn everything, at least you understand it. Otherwise, it would be better if you change the sword sect. Taoist things are not written down.

Originally, people who read books are ordinary people who want to read novels to feel refreshed. It's too frustrating to see the protagonist like this, so I blocked him.

He deserves it. He keeps making the protagonist feel miserable and the description is like the protagonist being a fool 🤮🤮🤮

I just saw Chapter 47, what about the conflict between the left and right brains? In the previous chapter, I just said that I would not join the organization, but in the next chapter, I joined? Can it be more poisonous?

A thief who is said to be at the end of his life with only a few kittens left, plans a big plan today, a killing plan tomorrow, and a certain death situation the day after tomorrow. Every boss has a scapegoat to kill him. Why did Buddhism and Taoism kill all the thief in its heyday? ? Your fighting power is not kept fresh.

I've read Chapter 53. I have never seen so many complaints in a novel. I think it's well written. But these weirdos don't read books seriously. At the beginning, I wrote that the protagonist is a fresh graduate of ancient Chinese, and he wore it on the subway on the way to apply for a job. Everyone said that the protagonist was in his forties or fifties and was not stable at all. Let me ask you. Then all kinds of complaints were made about the psychological shock of the protagonist. A 20-year-old boy traveled back in time and encountered ghosts and traveled back and forth. He shouldn't be shocked. If he was shocked, he would be unsteady and unworthy of being the protagonist. Do you really think that a modern young man is an old man with rich life experience? You will be scolded for being afraid of ghosts, and you will be scolded for being clumsy towards a master you have only known for two days. Anyway, nothing is right. The protagonist must be an awesome, decisive, ruthless, calm and extraordinary person. It's just that ordinary people can't have growth lines!

I haven't read it for a while. The previous content seemed very good. This book has always been in my favorites. It is a masterpiece. But when I read it again today, every word and every sentence revealed the rigid style of AI. I can't read it at all. It's like the delicious food has been poured over, it's hard to comment.

In the Qidian recommendation mechanism, reading data is extremely important. I hope you guys can see the latest chapters every day and don't keep books. Thank you for your support, thank you! ! !

Ultra-high unknown variables = potential threats to national security. You have abilities of unknown origin, whereabouts are unknown, and logic that cannot be explained. You are not under control or surveillance. Launching missiles and nuclear bombs against you is tantamount to counter-terrorism. Are you still cooperating with the authorities? The most basic logic is missing, and the entire book is wrong. Why are you still writing a trivial book?

What is written on the back? It's not as nice as the one on the front.