Guixu Zhenxian

The writing is really cool, with dozens of chapters foreshadowing. The protagonist was beaten on the back by the midwife because he didn't cry at birth. Do you know this is a world of immortality? Then I had my Taoist body repaired, which made me feel good about myself.

Hello author, I have copied this book on other platforms. The feedback from readers is very good, it is very popular, and there are many rewards. I plan to pick up a new car in early July. I hope you can add a few more chapters so as not to affect my income or make my readers anxious.

This is not a classical fairy tale, this is a classical fantasy, right?

Thanks to the author. The time-travel plots in the previous chapters reminded me of the feeling of watching the sky-covering sky in high school. Ye Fan and his classmates gathered at Mount Tai, starting from ancient mythology, and started a story of group portrait practice. Just like Emperor Ye Tiandi gathered his classmates to meet in Mount Tai at the end, I was still very moved and had a sense of memories when I looked back. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write his own story.

But isn't the chapter on the three-year-old coming-of-age ceremony too much? The 3-year-old killed a pig with a knife... Forget it, I'll put my brain away first.

Obviously the rest of the writing is okay, but the first ten chapters of your book, emmm, I feel will dissuade a lot of people. The first chapter has the flavor of Long Aotian in the ancient city.

It's too exaggerated. Were those scenes at the beginning to show your sexual repression?

It's a sword energy and a flying shot, but the result is that the sword is thin in the hand, just like the missile is designed to transport you to punch you, which is ridiculous.

When you see the three top posts, you know the level of this article. The author has no brains at all.

The first eleven chapters have been deleted without affecting reading 🙂

After practicing for three months, you can't sit still and go home to see your parents? ? ? Are you a time traveler? Could it be that when I worked in my previous life, I went back to my hometown every day?

The most disgusting kind is the dual cultivation of Buddhism and Taoism. Otherwise, you should walk alone! I really vomited 😰

After the male protagonist was reincarnated, he gradually fell into the routine and went to the mountains to practice. He was ordinary and didn't know what would happen in the future. There are several suspense worth looking forward to. Have the male protagonist's classmates also been reincarnated? Are there monsters from the Classic of Mountains and Seas in the wilderness? Will the male protagonist travel to the wilderness?

Cheating, why do you need so many teachers? Are you trying to make up the numbers? They are all librarians. How awesome is my talent?

The first 12 chapters have been laid out for so long, so it would be better not to write it, or simply condense it into three or four chapters, especially the first three or four chapters, which are pure nonsense! It can be seen that this book has some traces of imitating Zhetian, but the first chapter of Zhetian is about the Nine Dragons Pulling the Coffin, which has already aroused the readers' interest, which is not the same as the beginning of this book. Moreover, Chen Dong is already a veteran writer, and the author is the first book. He has no accumulation of fans and fame, so he is not suitable for writing such a long-awaited book, which will lose at least 70% of the readers. It can be seen that there may be some foreshadowing ahead, but it is not too important. The author also has certain writing skills. I hope he can write well in the future.

The urban plot is very well written, but the time travel plot is draggy. I feel like I could just write an urban novel directly.

I haven't seen such a good book for a long time. Worth recommending. The three views are broad and not rigid. The inner description of the supporting characters is not rigid or sketchy! I have read a few books before that were good at first but were written crookedly or eunuch later. I hope the author will continue to write. Even if there is a breakdown in the middle, you must continue to finish writing. Only a complete life is worth learning from, there is no perfection. Only by finishing the book can more talents and thoughts be expressed in the next book.

The writing style is really good, the cultural background is also high, and the lines are fascinating. The part in the city is well written, and after time travel, it has the flavor of a classical fairy tale. The protagonist's personality is also good, and he is a genius without seeming naive. There are not three or two chapters where he jumps out as a supporting role and pretends to be a slap in the face. The characters currently appearing have their own personality characteristics, but there are many missing words and typos. I hope the author will continue writing.

The word "evaluation" doesn't have much new meaning. Is the only way to cultivate immortality is the way of the sword? The writing is good, but it doesn't break the boundaries of the writing. The plot is a bit dull, the conflicts are not strong, the genius flow, the whole shock flow is not exciting enough, and the protagonist is too relaxed. There is no suffering at all, no calculations, and not enough explosive points. These days there are too many sword immortals and immortal writings.

Run away. Did you change writers after joining the sect? Just like elementary school students' compositions, I don't know if people who praise good literary talents in the comment area are at the level of elementary school students. I would like to remind everyone to run away.

I haven't written any reviews on books. I'm a little tired after following this book. The good plot becomes more and more sloppy as I write it. I drank more than a dozen books and now it's about fighting... I can't understand it. I can't understand it. It's boring... The plot doesn't advance any further. I guess I'm going to give up the book

The plot before the time travel is well written, but the protagonist after the time travel feels like a different person, which messes up the tranquility.

This reminds me of a saying that Zhongyuan Wubai's writing style is very white. Then I ask you to write a very white novel comparable to theirs, but you really can't write it. I remember many people said that Liu Cixin's writing style was poor, there were too many long paragraphs, and some plot structures were problematic. Many people can point out a lot of shortcomings and shortcomings of the three-body system. Then, let him write a novel comparable to The Three-Body Problem. Many people will be silent. I really can't write it down.

Can the author update more every day? (The more I make, the more I make)

Just one question, can you read at the age of three?

To write a story, do you have to learn how to write group portraits? I can't even write the protagonist's character well. A little bit of nonsense can be written into tens of thousands of words. What a talent. What's the writing skills? There is so much nonsense, and some people praise the writing skills? 6000 Words of effective information are less than 100

Why write a panel? There seems to be no conflict between cultivating immortality and the panel 😭

I've read Urban Long Aotian and Xiaobai's novels, but they are more informative than this one.

The opening has the ethereal and legendary feel of a fairy, and the description is very artistic.

To be honest, the first few dozen chapters are quite interesting, but I can't read the rest. It's too boring. If you want to delete it, the writing is okay. But if you don't delete it, I won't be able to read it.