Practice Fake Tricks to Become a Real Fairy

After someone scolded the author for being too opinionated in a previous book review, the author added in today's latest chapter that the protagonist told Chen Guan these things. That paragraph is rambling, and it seems that it was added because of previous book reviews. But this is not important, because the author cannot change the subsequent plot. But here I want to mention a very important thing, Subjectivity. I believe the author should have seen that some people in the comment area said that the protagonist is selfish, and I also believe that the author does not understand why some people say that. Regarding the previous plot, when the author published it, he must not have understood why some people would say that the boss had a high opinion. Although I also mentioned that the problem must be considered from the perspective of plot logic, that is indeed a reason, but it is only a short-term plot problem. From the perspective of long-term plot development, the subjectivity of the protagonist is the biggest problem. Let's return to the plot. As of now, the biggest breaking point in the plot is that the protagonist slays the entire audience after Gu dies. Why didn't the previous plot explode? Why didn't the crab-leg leader explode when he was killed the first time? It's both because of your plot setting and because of the protagonist's subjectivity. Before death, the protagonist is always being pushed forward, faced with existential crises, and challenged by martial arts. After Gu's death, the protagonist takes the initiative to kill people and take revenge. This initiative is the embodiment of subjectivity. But unfortunately, after that, the protagonist lost his initiative and turned into a fully automatic anti-killing robot. The whole reading experience also takes a lot of fun out of it. The reason why some people say that the protagonist is selfish is because the psychological description of the protagonist that we readers see seems to be a good person, but in fact he does not have any subjectivity. It is understandable that the protagonist is driven by a survival crisis in the early stage, but after possessing extraordinary power, the reader knows that the protagonist cannot die, so the driving force of the plot becomes a nominal driving force. The protagonist still lacks motivation in his heart, and to put it bluntly, he is a hollow person. And what did this hollow man do under the impetus of the plot? After all the good words, all the benefits! The intention of passing the sword to Gu after his death is reasonable in terms of motivation, but in terms of plot, it is entirely due to the protagonist's inaction. Gu can't survive from the outline, because he will steal the spotlight from the protagonist. It is understandable that this book does not intend to write a dual protagonist, and it is not capable of handling a strong supporting role. But the way such a character exits is too bad, and the protagonist gets all the benefits. In the end, the protagonist does nothing and gets all the benefits in the end. Then in the follow-up plot, the protagonist becomes the Riddler, unwilling to take responsibility and advance matters. This certainly seems selfish. What's the next plot now? It is the revival of spiritual energy that opens the door to hell. Okay, the question is what is the protagonist going to do. I won't talk about the plot setting and the focus of writing here. These are all technical issues. The most important thing about the following plot is the motivation and behavior of the protagonist. If the protagonist is still practicing alone as the Riddler, and when a crisis breaks out, he is regarded as a savior to save the disaster, and in the process, he continues to take advantage of all the benefits and not touch the responsibilities. Then no matter how you describe it, the protagonist will be hated by readers. Author, you need to realize something. Now that the protagonist has escaped from the existential crisis, his subsequent behavior cannot be the same as before. There must be a clear change in his motivation and subjectivity. You can write that he is confused, or you can write that he is dedicated to seeking truth, but it must not be that what the author thinks is different from what the protagonist thinks, and what the protagonist thinks is different from what he does. The reader has a God's perspective, and can see not only the protagonist's psychology, but also the protagonist's behavior, and the author's behavior. This incoherence will result in your inability to describe the characters with a consistent motive and the inability to develop the plot according to plot logic, which will ultimately destroy the book.

I saw that it would be over after I saw Gu Linyuan's sword. There was a mess behind it.

It's very well written, I like it very much, and I'm offering you five monthly passes

I don't see much of this type, but it's still very fresh.

Big data is so scary. Not long after I was diagnosed with intracranial hemangioma, this book was recommended to me, and there is also a tumor sword fairy 🙂

Don't go into the back and write about subduing the female ghost, using a spell to restore her sanity, and later helping the female ghost avenge her, that's really poisonous, and don't mention anything about heaven, underworld, etc. Not many authors can write it well, and they don't want to please, so just write it according to the title of the book.

It's such a pity that this book, I really liked the first hundred or so chapters, but why did it suddenly change in the later chapters. The following points that I personally feel are as follows: 1. Originally, the fact that all the enemies are no longer in the world is a very good setting. It allows the protagonist to increase at will without the entire book's combat power system collapsing. It is very exciting to have one's own method + to show one's holiness in front of others. The Demonic Power is also made to be more restrained and has a strong character. As a result, he later became a powerful person and walked around in reality, but he fell behind. Moreover, many powerful villains have too low character development. They were originally Taoist bosses but were beaten to death by a few slaps in the real world. They feel very uneducated and have become the lowest-level system-level monster-killing and upgrading characters (see the second point). 2. Suddenly there are many highly repetitive systems with numbers added (for example: +50, +50, +50...), Which makes people feel tasteless 3. The text suddenly has a lot of repetitiveness and highly similar descriptions, which makes people feel that AI expansion was used and it was not used well. This book is really a pity. In my heart, it was a book close to being a god, alas. I wish the author better and better as he writes more

After reading the introduction, I thought it was just me, but after reading the latest update, it seems that there is no way to directly report a cult in a chaotic urban worldview. There are no capable officials in this worldview, and subsequent organizations, large and small, are basically a mixed bag.

The book is good, but when it comes to describing female authors, it's too vulgar! Is it that exaggerated? Has the author never played with a girlfriend?

It has been 18 years since she entered a mental hospital, and my sister is still studying. . . .

You've never been sick, right? People who are undergoing chemotherapy can't think of anything even if they see a woman naked and standing in front of her. The obscene flavor of your story show is coming out😦

I hope the author will stop describing women. It's all poisonous and just brushes it off.

Another author who insults the ancestors. Following the demonization of Nuwa in the ancient times, is there going to be a black version of Fuxi?

I said that I had become a golden elixir, but the doctor insisted that it was kidney stones and gave me an injection. Now I would not be able to become an immortal.

The subject matter is good, but the main plot is too messy. The reaction of the police and the government in the murder part is too embarrassing. Dozens of people died and it was passed easily. The dead people were also involved in cults. The inner demon appears a bit unexpectedly. I feel like it would be better to lay a foreshadowing first and then draw it out.

Let's talk about my latest review first. It's too watery. Only three chapters are actually being promoted out of the 7 books on the shelf. The three chapters that are being promoted are still filled with water. I thought that the release of this volume will push this volume to a climax. The actual review is neither fish nor fowl, and the small climax does not reach the end. If it is lower, you have you. The rhythm of the book continues to settle. A higher point can be regarded as the climax of this volume, and then the second volume with the theme of cult organizations is introduced, but there is no such thing. I see that you have an old book with 1.8 Million words in your introduction. You are not a newcomer. How could you make such low-level mistakes? Didn't the editor say anything? The rhythm was obviously wrong, and there was no release notice. I didn't check to see if I missed the first order. Let's talk about water. In fact, I personally don't have any opinions on water, as long as it is well written, but the water in these chapters is average or even bad. Now I have to take back the title. The writing of these chapters is very wrong. I feel that the author wrote it absent-mindedly. The deletion of many paragraphs and words has almost no impact on the meaning to be conveyed and the progress of the story. I will take the liberty to look forward to whether it is foreshadowing. Then I have some personal secrets, and I am personally not sure about this part. Author, you use AI, right? In Chapter 103, the protagonist's conversation with Gu's sister calls out "That's a trap…" In the context paragraph, first of all, normal people don't speak like that. Who can speak like this in spoken language? Secondly, this is a sentence pattern that AI likes very much. (By the way, the sentence pattern that AI likes, and what it is, I would like to call it AI's favorite) I have felt it before, but I am actually not disgusted with AI writing. AI is a tool, but AI's writing is very greasy. The author has to modify it to suit his own creation, because AI has not yet understood what you want, and it lacks spirituality. Anyone who has written a novel should know what I am talking about. Many times when you really start writing, the words you write will start to think about it and drive you to write further. So they are one in Shen Yun, but using AI will separate the original One Shen Yun. At this stage, AI is only suitable as a tool for reviewing data and expanding ideas. Sometimes it can also gain new writing skills, but it really cannot be used immediately. Don't use AI paragraphs without changing them again. (It may also be the author's identification error, because with the popularity of AI, some authors have used AI more and become accustomed to AI, and their own language and writing habits will be affected by AI)

I was really convinced. Every now and then he was shocked by thunder, every now and then he was shocked by huge surprises, every now and again he was struck by the impact on his forehead and entered his Tianling Gai, and every now and then his heart seemed to be caught.

It's not about the pace, it's about the outline of the book. To use a game as an analogy, it only attracts stand-alone players at the beginning. After 200 chapters, various ancient powers appear. It's like stand-alone games suddenly changed to online games. Those who don't like online games and the original players who were attracted by stand-alone games are confused and at a loss. It is a huge leap from stand-alone to online games, and most authors are unable to make readers tolerate such a huge change.

The back part of this book is all written by Ai. In the first part, you have to achieve a small speed with fast punches, and in the later part, you need to reach a small speed as soon as possible to deal with the crisis. The descriptions are inconsistent, and most of them are Hi. This book is just a lousy article.

The interior world in this book is equivalent to existing before the protagonist awakens to Golden Finger, so this world does not belong to a purely demon-free plane. Readers of this book, such as me, expect to see the protagonist create a training system from scratch, and then in the process, others regard him as crazy, and he ends up I really succeeded; But after reading this book, you will find that he did not write according to this routine, but wrote that the protagonist practiced through the system caused by the disease, connected to existences similar to other worlds, and practiced evil and killed ghosts step by step, and finally achieved the extraordinary immortality step by step; This leads to a question. There is a big difference between the readers attracted by the title and introduction and the actual audience of the book. Before I read the book, I did not expect that the style of the book would be related to horror and ghosts. The protagonist seemed to be a monk who awakened the cultivation system to enter the ghost realm, rather than mastering a cultivation system from scratch; I don't know what other people think, but after reading it, I feel that I have been cheated; It is better to change the title of the book to a more appropriate one, such as I Kill Ghosts and Evils in the Interior World. If you think it is not gimmick enough, you can add four words: Refining falsehoods into reality, I kill ghosts and evil spirits in the Interior World!

What I wrote before is okay. Once you get started in spiritual practice, spiritual energy is actually formed by the strong resentment of human beings before death? This is too counter-intuitive and unreasonable. The setting is very novel but the logic cannot convince me. In short, I can't stand it.

There is a huge loophole in Lin Xiao's plot, and anyone who knows about autopsies knows that such a loophole is impossible.

Why does it smell like a dozens-year-old dick?

The first one or two hundred chapters were okay, but I couldn't stand it anymore afterward. It's good to practice falsehoods and make them come true. Believe it or not, it's not. It's good to practice inner scenes to map spiritual energy into reality. In the later stage, the interior world was regarded as a fairyland, a real world where ghosts would appear and immortals and gods were also there. What else could those immortals and gods cultivate? It would be better to commit suicide and enter in advance. There is also an ordinary person who can enter through deep meditation and stability. Those immortals and gods who have cultivated to ascend can't enter in advance? Anyway, the later writing was rubbish.

The logic of the plot is still rigid. In the early online novels, it was easy to say that the enemy would give time and the protagonist would come to the door on time. It's already 2026. Let's be more relaxed and leave this situation to some writers with flexible thinking. If this cult is discovered during the day, the police will come to check it before the sun sets, and it will be slaughtered by the protagonist at night.

Just a normal villain, slashing someone's neck with a knife leaves a blood mark? The bullets in front can split it. Even if someone else is some kind of practitioner, he or she is still a normal human being. The zhenqi in your body can't open someone else's neck with just one blow? Is this my own way? Those who didn't know better thought the villain was a physical practitioner

After reading more than 240 chapters, I feel that the plot is unreasonable, very abrupt, the combat power has collapsed, the characters have collapsed, and it is incoherent. I gave up...

The author writes well, writes carefully, and gives up using AI to polish it. The things written by AI are fake at first glance. It is a good subject matter, but it is a pity to write it like this... Except for the first more than a hundred chapters, the latter part is really not good.

Obviously no one mentioned it before, and the protagonist doesn't know either. He only knows that they worship a cult. Why do these three words suddenly appear? Or did it come out of the protagonist's mouth?

The beginning of the book is really excellent, but then it completely falls into a cliche. The setting of the living beings in the interior world being animated is a bit too much, and the suspenseful atmosphere that it should have is completely broken. The author fell into a cliché at the end of a masterpiece. I feel that the author may have just wanted to write something casually to test the waters at the beginning, so there was no outline. Who knew that when he got up later, he continued writing, but he couldn't grasp it and fell into a cliche.