Exorcism from Xiangjiang 1911

The subject matter is good, but the atmosphere is not quite right. Most of the Feng Shui Supernatural is filled with proper nouns, which is a bit like a reskin of the urban superpower system, which is a bit of a waste of this subject matter. I think this kind of subject matter can appropriately create a terrifying atmosphere in terms of plot and description. Readers can't sleep while reading it. They can refer to some works of Chun Di Xiaolong and The Man Who Repaired the Air Conditioner. Adding some cool points along the way gives readers the feeling of walking into a ghost movie with Zhongli's shield.

The writing and concept are quite good, but it doesn't quite meet the appetite of today's readers. The plug-in seems to give several options, but in fact it's just one option, which is no different from the previous option of erasing the task if you don't do it. Then the incident was also too urgent. It could be developed slowly, but I had to fight the boss to force the plot. And there are so many hidden masters, it feels like the protagonist is the only one busy with everything.

Is this book another one of those exhausting exorcism novels where the protagonist is like a hapless guy who encounters ghosts endlessly?

Every time I draw a talisman with essence and blood, my heart bleeds every time. Are you a blood cow? How many lives does a person who is about to starve to death without even eating two meals have to do this?

In the early part - the protagonist saves the baby in exchange for food and then cures some problems for the neighbors, there is something rewarding, although the harvest is relatively small. I thought the protagonist was about to grow up and turn around, but the black boss came to him and "invited" him to risk his life. Then all kinds of heresy came one after another, risking one's life one after another. Before he even met the real master of Nanyang, he was beaten like a dead dog. How do you have the confidence to continue fighting with others? Just rely on golden fingers? But this golden finger didn't work to prevent him from being beaten to death.

Fight a ghost once, read Feng Shui once, vomit blood once, and have never practiced. Casting spells relies on qi and blood. At such a speed, even if the system continuously strengthens the physical fitness, it is useless! This author likes to write bloody torture, and every time the protagonist is half dead and left hanging. There is a system that makes it look like this, there is no hope in the whole process, and it makes people want to watch it.

Forcibly suppressing the combat power, right? Even if you gather enough merit, you won't be able to get rid of the poison. Just keep the offspring, right?

The events come one after another without stopping. It's very tense to watch, but it's not as exciting as a suspense novel. It just makes people feel irritated. And every time the merit is close to 100 and then it can't be passed. One problem is dragging, dragging, dragging, and the body is the same. I was originally quite interested in this kind of subject matter, so I read it again during this limited edition, but after reading about 90 chapters, I still couldn't stand it anymore. Defeated. In half a year, if I remember, I will take another look to see if I can still hold on.

The writing is okay, but I personally don't like the way the protagonist does things. How big is the pot and how much rice goes under it? He has to fight all the way to defeat monsters. The protagonist doesn't know how to die unless he has a halo.

The subject matter is good and the writing is okay. However, without grasping the essence of the starting point, the character faces an urgent existential crisis that cannot be solved. With an existential crisis, you encounter problems and characters that are bigger than the last. There has been little progress in terms of strength. It seems that the article is very frustrating to watch, not refreshing, and it is inexplicable to save the world and the people. No-brainer writing, pure cool writing, and weird writing can all survive at the starting point. If you feel aggrieved and mediocre, you will die.

Starting from the first chapter, the whole process is fast and high-energy. The protagonist is rushed to participate in one supernatural incident after another, and he keeps dragging his half-broken body to squeeze his soul. There is no time for the protagonist to recover his body as a buffer in the middle. Goldfinger also distributes rewards, which are just like supply packs. They are not superfluous at all, just enough to catch up with the rescuers. The author's pen is like a small leather whip, driving the protagonist to passively participate. The reader is exhausted and the strings are taut. It is recommended that after an event ends, the protagonist should be given some time to recover physically and mentally, as well as time to study and replenish his wealth (means).

It looks so tiring, the main character is always there fighting for his life

The content is excellent, but I find it contradictory. Every time the protagonist eliminates demons, there is no room for error. It all relies on the author to manipulate the protagonist to pass the level.

Folk customs to exorcise evil spirits are written as suspenseful cases. Bro, I hope you can make progress in your next book.

This book is not a good read. Don't be fooled by the introduction. Although it is well written, I really recommend the author to change the introduction.

I'm currently reading Chapter 5, and the first 3 chapters are pretty good. It unfolded too quickly. According to normal logic, if a dying person comes back to life and has money, he should take care of his body first instead of starting a new event immediately.

It's unnecessary. I don't want to see it like this at all.

A problem for new writers is that their writing will deviate from the main outline. You need to clarify what the core points are? Your core focus is on folk customs to exorcise evil spirits. If you change the general direction to detective, you will lose a large number of readers. You can focus on folk customs to exorcise evil spirits a little bit, which will increase the interest. If you focus on writing, you will put the cart before the horse.

Alas, this kind of book starts with fighting the big boss, which is very tiring. Just like if you open a canteen in a village, you have to compete with Ali for financial resources.

In such a big city, the protagonist can do it all by himself, right? . Out of place

If you say it is used to induce conflicts, then if your system has accumulated enough energy, you will not remove it first, but why bother sealing it? After all, the only connection between the protagonist and the subdued master is this sub-gu. This eliminates this hidden danger. Firstly, it eliminates the worries of having to suppress the poison if you no longer know how to fight. Secondly, it scares the subdued master. If the opponent does not understand how to remove the sub-gu, he will definitely have scruples and fight for the initiative. Thirdly, even if he is temporarily defeated, he can retreat and make a comeback. If the purpose of the existence of Gu worms is to limit the protagonist's strength, I personally think it is unnecessary. The 250 system does not give many advantages. The head-dropping master does not know how long he has been operating in the virtual Xiangjiang, but from the previous article, it is straightforward to be tough. It's not about the growth of life and the hatred of water and the east 🙂

Come on, come on, for a bookworm of more than ten years, you write well and have a promising future!

The writing is good, but the plot is not gripping enough, the climax of the plot is too far apart, and it is tiring to watch a lot of trivial and ordinary things; The protagonist is not clear enough, not even as good as Luo Sen, and the character arc is too facial, just like the second male lead in the ancient Wangdao anime; The writing is smooth, but the suffering male protagonist is always unsatisfactory, just like the male protagonist in ancient martial arts who is either poisoned or injured.

Hey, it feels like ten years ago

Let me put it bluntly, if you write about the 1960s or 1970s when gangs were prevalent and supernatural, it would be better than this.

Can anyone kindly tell me when the poisonous insects should be removed? I plan to skip ahead and read the follow-up. I don't want to see the Gu bug in my body.

Genius scientist, a bit like a sheepdog

The introduction is to be a foreigner's dog?

Speaking of which, Pig's Feet encountered a very difficult situation. Have you tried to move rescue soldiers to the Martyrs Cemetery?

After reading Chapter 19, I really can't stand it anymore! One sentence is repeated over and over in several chapters, and one thing is repeated over and over in several chapters. I can tolerate it, but these inconsistencies are not logical contradictions, but plot contradictions. I really can't bear it! I often forget about the plot I just wrote before, all kinds of contradictions! Really speechless!