From the Undertaker to the Great Sage

Everyone else has reached the four realms soon, but the protagonist is still wandering in one realm. Now he is about to grab resources with the people in the four realms. How do you improve the protagonist's realm in one go? It's a bit slow. You don't have to be completely in the first realm to lay the foundation.

The writing style is actually quite good. It can be seen that the author is ambitious and has a great world view. However, I feel that the plot is too slow at the moment. The protagonist did not get rid of the golden finger properly. He hits here and there with a hammer and a hammer, which is also a bit overwhelming. Chapters that have been saved for a few days feel like they are over without saying anything. The plot advances too slowly.

This book is good, but I am dedicated to various industries, such as paper figurines, Feng Shui, ghost arts, supernatural arts, etc. Now that the protagonist is basically all martial arts, the appeal of this book has become mediocre. Have you never used paper figurines who are also advanced professional paper makers? Personally, I feel that these heretical or strange and strange magic techniques are the highlight.

The professional level is constantly rising, and I can do all kinds of professions, but the realm is not rising. In these hundreds of chapters, all kinds of gods and demons are about to come out, and they are still in the second realm. If this book is not adjusted, it will be unfinished sooner or later.

The plot creativity is okay, but the pace is too slow. According to the current era when the master, the grandmaster and the grandmaster are chess pieces, the pig's feet are still dawdling in the first level, and they are not qualified to be cannon fodder!

If you don't have a daughter, you can get thousands of orders. If you have a single woman, you can get thousands of orders. If you have many women, you can get hundreds of thousands of orders. If you have a group of wives and concubines, you can get platinum. The author should think more about it.

It's almost unfinished. It's obvious that the core plot is to upgrade each profession, with plot attached. As a result, the level did not go up and the plot started to mess up. Author, did you lose the protagonist's upgrade data? It's time to change the characters. It has always been too far away from the core theme. It has been updated to this point. The protagonist is only in the second stage. Important plots rely on external means to forcibly improve the protagonist. It's obviously the route of killing monsters and upgrading, but the plot begins to unfinished. Naturally, the data will be poor if you are unhappy with it. I originally followed the line of refreshing writing. Recently, the protagonist I have been writing is a pendant. I have been messing around in group games. The protagonist can be messed up, but why should you, the author, mess around?

The writing is okay, but it's 200 chapters and it's still the first scene. The protagonist is too stressed.

Good-looking and good-looking. It's just that the title of the book is a little confusing. There are really too many articles on professional martial arts. But the author has written a lot of new ideas, which is very good, come on!

Suddenly I realized that almost 200 chapters in, the protagonist is still a little Karami, who has many occupations and is complex but not very good.

It's too ink, it's almost 300 chapters, is it still the second level? I don't know what to write next? The time span is also slow. I wrote 300 chapters in just a few months. The Hundred Industries category is just too poorly written. Can I finish writing so many occupations? It's probably going to suck

The author has a great worldview and his writing is acceptable, but the protagonist's growth is too slow, and the protagonist's scenes before VⅠP are getting less and less. It feels like watching a group drama, where a group of big guys dominate the situation and live their own lives. After watching too many big scenes, watching the protagonist, the little Karami's scenes, feels boring. I don't know what's going to happen next, so I ordered a chapter and made a speech. I hope the author can write better and better. As far as the current style is concerned, it feels like the author can take things too far, which is not what I like. Internet articles are read in fragments. You don't get the entire finished product at once, and they compete for attention with thousands of works at the same time. Once the plot is not attractive or controversial (those who maliciously cause controversy are not included), it will cause some readers to stop reading, shift their attention, and forget after a while. To a certain extent, online articles are fairy tales for adults. Most readers who like online articles look forward to showing or experiencing their dreams in this virtual world, so the sense of immersion and excitement are very important. Some works are well-written, but these two are weak, which will also result in relatively few readers, which does not match the writing style. Personal opinion, for reference only

Why is it cheating? More than 180 chapters are still in the first scene.

How did it go from being in the top 100 on the monthly vote list to where it is now? The plot is really bad and the updates are unstable. It's really a waste of money, and the plot feels very childish. The protagonist's realm has been staked for 1.5 Million words. The protagonist is still in the 2nd stage, but the plot power has collapsed into a mess. There is no difference between the protagonist and a passerby. The author thinks about it carefully and doesn't want to write it. If he doesn't want to write it, he will be a eunuch. You may also feel uncomfortable writing it.

I don't allow this book to be without Shennong stickers. From now on, everyone will give Shennong stickers to Sanjiang's books 🙂 because there is too much history! Does this book contain Shennong?

It's strange. Many authors like to copy the template of the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. Basically, they all use it, but many people still use it. It's strange.

The more you get to the back, the more poisonous it becomes. I have tasted it for everyone.

Why is it that even though there are extraordinary people, the history is still exactly the same? Is this design lazy on the part of the author or something else?

It's pretty, but because of your name, I didn't even have the desire to click in and take a look at it before, and I almost missed it.

I've read more than 100 chapters and I really can't stand it. I'm so damn good at it.

The profession of the protagonist is more exciting than that of Dragon Fist, and it's more enjoyable to watch. There's only one monthly ticket left today, so I'll give it to you, and I'll give it to you when you get it 🙂

Ninety percent of it is about warriors, and the other professions are not introduced at all. The power of the three religions cannot be reflected at all. The protagonist's other professions are completely useless and only provide passive skills for the warrior profession. A Feng Shui master is such an awesome profession that can mobilize the power of heaven and earth when practiced to a high level. A warrior can't beat a horse. No matter how awesome he is, can he cross the power of mountains, rivers and heaven and earth? Throughout the book, you are bragging about how awesome martial artists are. The title and introduction of your book clearly show that various professions collide with each other!

It's a pity. I started writing very well, but then I stopped writing.

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I watched more than 200 games while I was still in the game, but I didn't feel that it was as engaging as the beginning. Let's not talk about the level. There were so many professions, but the strength was not reflected at all. In the game in the blessed land, I felt that any of the top eight would be more oppressive than the protagonist. Everyone is better than the protagonist. So what's the point of writing such a hook? The improvement of each profession level feels useless except for one more skill. There is no linkage between professions, and the protagonist feels like a mediocre person. Hope it can be changed later. Also, the plot follows one day after another. The protagonist does not have much time to work on his career, and the improved plot is not satisfying enough.

This book looks good at first glance, and the subject matter of Baiye is very novel. But now that I'm following the update, I can't understand it. I feel like my ability to write the protagonist has not made much difference as I've advanced! In the latest chapters, there is a ghost bride, killing ghosts and chopping up melons and vegetables! Not open, just chopping melons and vegetables. Does it make any difference whether it is turned on or not? Blushing? And you know that you will be assimilated if you open a meeting, but you still open it just to see a ghost? I can't understand...

Suddenly I'm in the underworld, are you excited? I feel like there are dozens of chapters that haven't appeared yet, right? The attractive part of this novel is the various professions, unlocked professional skills and characteristics, such as the Dragon and Phoenix Society, the Green Dragon Cave, and the Yin-Yang War. I really wanted to sleep while reading it, and it didn't feel interesting at all.

Of course, it may be because the author's experience is that intensive writing is no different from not working hard. All kinds of double quotation marks are misused. Adjectives are flying all over the place, and the words are written over and over again. There are various kinds of pauses, a few points, a trace, and various gleams in the eyes. It can be seen that he put a lot of thought into it in the early stage, but the author cannot change the issue of experience. The template is very stereotyped, and the protagonist has no personality at all. He is a pseudo-person and is the protagonist.

I can't stand it any longer. The background has been hastily changed and the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties is too dramatic. I can't stand it anymore and there is no logic.

It's a pity. The subject matter is good, the story is well written, and the world view is huge, but it's too big to control. There are hundreds of schools of thought, three religions and nine streams. The author has written twenty or thirty ways of practice, and has not brought any Western professions. There are many details that can be written about the advanced rituals and abilities of these practices, but the early world view cannot be set too high. The protagonist and the high-level planning and story are severely separated. The story of a major event is well written, but it has little to do with the protagonist. The previous protagonist is related to a kicking arena. The protagonist of the Ghost King's Blessed Land dungeon is just a tool man. The author regards entry as a ticket to transcendence, but later writes that becoming a master requires smelting sub-professionals as qualifications. But in troubled times, there are inheritances from three religions and nine streams. Isn't this inheritance very strict? The author wrote out 360 lines to become the number one scholar, and everyone has a sub-career to become a master in the backhand. There is also a link between professional intensity and the efficiency of gaining experience. The way it should be written is that although there are all kinds of professions in the world, individuals can only specialize in one, and the rest are part-time jobs for beginners. Most of the people the protagonist knows have part-time jobs, and several have entered extraordinary sub-professions. How do others practice it? Where did you get the knowledge? Suddenly I thought of the protagonist's cheat code. The protagonist has the secret book of the undertaker. It doesn't matter before starting the other professions. Is the promotion ceremony of level 10 because there is no secret book, so the lack of knowledge must be made up for by behavior? But it's unreasonable for the advanced ritual to be so difficult given the inheritance.