Hongyun Temple Practice Notes

Alas, you have committed a heinous crime, Honghuangliu. When you see the word "Red Cloud", your mind automatically hyperlinks to the innate purple energy, the wide circle of friends, and the unlucky guy who gives up his position to death. This is a memetic attack.

There is no need to divide the realm too finely. In the past, when you practiced qi, you practiced qi. Then it was divided into front, middle, and back, and now it is divided into several layers. It becomes more and more petty. Traditional fairy tales can be understood as soon as they are general. Usually, once enlightened, it is the difference between immortals and mortals. But you definitely can't write like this when writing novels, but don't divide the realms very finely. Try the taste of traditional fairy tales, and roughly divide them for readers to know.

When I saw it was released, I had been expecting that there would be a quiet buffer period to describe the daily life and the foundation of cultivation and improvement. But I saw that before the release of the world view, I didn't start practicing. I kept fighting, and improvement depends on fighting. I suggested that the novel be renamed.

However, the biggest problem with this book is that it suppresses the realm and the excuses it makes are idiotic. Designing a protagonist with the fourth level of Qi training to kill people on the fifth level who can compete with the sixth level of Qi training makes the protagonist feel that there is a world outside the world. I don't understand what you think. The protagonist killing people across borders is called a world outside the world, right? There is also the problem of plot arrangement. The protagonist has been busy and has no time to practice the techniques to improve his realm, but he has arranged for the protagonist to be injured and practice martial arts? What do you think? Don't you think it's shark-like? If you don't have enough melee combat and want to improve your combat power, why don't you have to stop using realm spells and then switch to martial arts?

Reminder: This book is about brothers working together in the same boat and helping each other on the road to success. It is not a novel about self-interest.

It was okay in the early stage, but they were always fighting with each other, regardless of priority, and it was very annoying. No wonder no one discussed it anymore, they all ran away.

Diandian pursues the reading of the old man 😆

It's boring to watch without fighting with the master, and the ghost is inexplicable, even if it's powerful, it's not powerful, which ruins the perception.

The feeling of being the leader of a cultivator sect, the level is okay But in my personal opinion, except for the ending, if there are too many descriptions of "underworld", "city god" and "reincarnation", it should be considered as a demerit, and it will be easier to collapse in the future.

After reading it, it feels a bit familiar. The writing is good, but it ends at an anticlimax.

Well written, getting better and better!

The logic lines in these chapters are too stiff

I always thought that the protagonist and his senior sister were in a brother-sister relationship, but I didn't expect that I wanted to write about a lover relationship.

Come on, author, this book is getting better and better.

Hey, if you feed yourself to death, you will be able to ride on a horse.

It's basically a coming-of-age story (a semi-torture main story). It's always been weak since the beginning, with very little excitement. The Half-demon book had this problem, and it's getting worse now, but it's not without its advantages. The writing is pretty good, and the writing is quite heartwarming. But if it was a few years ago, I might still read it, but after I go to work, I can't stand it anymore.

If you still practice Qi and build foundations... Yuanying's model for cultivating immortals, no matter how good the writing is, there is nothing to write about. Xuanjian of the First Saint Sect, which is currently the most discussed topic in the Qidian Immortal Cultivation category, has at least written something about "attainment status" that is rarely seen in other articles.

But logically there is a conflict. There are several immortal cultivators in one county, and there are actually more than a dozen disciples in one temple. There was a dragon in the river during the fight at the beginning. Logically speaking, one county cannot support so many immortal cultivators. There are fewer gangs in a county than these immortal cultivators.

I've ordered a few chapters and it's gg. Is there any new book?

Didn't you say it's a single heroine?