Bai Li Asks for Help

Is this an old man who lived to be 85 years old and traveled through time? This mentality is so young, like a student

Hello everyone, this is my first time writing a book. My writing style may be a little green, but I will try my best to write it well. I want to work hard to write my own fairy world for everyone. 😘

Cheng Li

The writing style is acceptable, but the fighting style is a bit awkward and petty. You can really refer to Gouzi and other good fighting styles! ! A little more majestic

Please read the latest chapters as they become more popular. 😭 I will update them every day.

This setting is unacceptable

How to say it. The writing is okay, but the story is too fast, swishing, and not concrete. Feeling passes by

I hope the author has a female protagonist, either a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. If you think your writing style is good, write about it. If you feel your writing style is not good, just write it off. I don't like eunuch male protagonists or stallion male protagonists. Hopefully it won't take up too much space, or not at all. Make a compromise.

The writing on the back is really good, jelly grass, come quickly (I am a sailor)

When the Dragon King travels, there will be wind and rain. How can you not get enough of such a beautiful book?

What about punctuation? Looks messy

As things get better, the dragon clan is the leader of the scales and controls the water clan in the world. The dragon species is born to be the superior. I feel that the author's setting of the dragon clan and dragon species is a bit low! !

I'm a little curious and want to ask the author, when will the protagonist's cultivation be measured in years? The protagonist's demon cultivation is faster than that of humans, so outrageous⊙▽⊙! Even if you are extremely talented, you can't be so fast! Of course, if it's the author's setting, then just pretend I didn't say it.

Welcome to the self-recommended "The Great Man"

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

No matter how many humans the demon eats, there is no so-called cause and effect, and it is surrounded by black energy! Not only is it okay, but it also does great merit to the way of heaven! Is it possible that only humans can eat meat and monsters can't eat it?

Isn't it good for the carp boy to sit under the Bodhisattva?

If the author really doesn't have time, please click to finish the book. It feels bad to hold off on it. I'm always waiting to refresh. If you have finished the book and you definitely don't have time to write, you might as well delete it temporarily.