I Have a Spawn Copy

The subject matter category is quite pleasing, but after watching it for a while, I always felt that something was strange. The reactions of the characters in it don't feel right, the characters' reactions are like fairy tales. The exercises are also very uncomfortable, and the protagonist has too many inner monologues. Goldfinger is also very strange. Originally, it would have been better just to drop treasures, or to travel to another world, but the author always had a lot of ideas and wanted to stuff them all in, without taking into account the degree of integration. For example, if you want to stew meat, add more vegetables and meat, and it can be used as a random stew. But if you lose the fruit, it's dark food. If you lose the leather shoes, you definitely can't eat it. I just didn't think about what I wanted to cook, what I couldn't throw away, and what I couldn't put away.

I can use three hundred kilograms of rotten flesh to create corpse energy. What do I mean by this setting? ? ? ? Have you ever seen a dead pig on the roadside in the countryside?

The subsequent growth of the ghost cultivator can take the path of purifying the Yang God, and finally reunite and become one. Doesn't the protagonist have the morning glow sutra? The purple energy from the east in the morning does not hurt the soul. You can first absorb this, then gradually expand the range to morning glow and sunset, and finally absorb the sun's energy to purify the soul. Those who are here can worship the moon at night and so on. Relevant knowledge and deductions can be obtained from items dropped in the dungeon.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not. Since the copy is a dream, why can't it be performed in a dream? If it is not a dream, then the effect is the cause. Then this is awesome

The protagonist is a bit bitter, and I feel like I can't keep people around. Forget it, just think of your thoughts and ideas as you like.

The writing is good, but the protagonist is not very good and irritable.

The dungeon doesn't need to be so deep. It's easier to write if it's simple. Otherwise, it would be difficult to transform two completely different stories in the later stage due to dual lines.

Requirements: Which force does it belong to? What magic do you know? Cultivation. Character.

The setting, writing, and fighting are all good, and there are basically no bad points. It should be written about a growth-type (spiritual personality) pig's trotters, which makes it not exciting enough. It is difficult to rise to V and make money on the list. I still recommend speeding up the growth of the pig's trotters mentally and mentally and making it more enjoyable. Otherwise, I am afraid that the reading will be too low and it will end unfinished.

I came here looking for clones, thinking that there are many clones that can practice different methods, but it turned out not to be the case. Chapter 77 seems to have no introduction to the Yin and Yang battle. The content is just okay, but it doesn't suit the taste.

The author writes a book promotion post or book list to promote it.

It's a pity. Being a ghost cultivator is still the right path.

In fact, it's not bad, it's flesh and blood, but it won't be popular if written like this, because it's not that exciting. Even a mortal's abortion will have a climax.

I feel that the author's writing style is okay, but the subject matter does have some problems. Your dream has begun to reverse the cause and effect. How will you write in the future?

Come on, the writing is very good, but it's just not suitable for the current environment of cool writing.

Concentrate on preparing for the exam, pause updates, see you in December 😡

I've read Chapter 60. It's okay for the time being. Come on, take your time.

As expected, he is a student, why should he live and work in peace and contentment, be funny and inconsistent, well, that won't work. The plot is okay, but some parts are too abrupt.