Deer Half Demon

There are too many settings, mixed characters, and too many transitions. The main reason is that the author can't handle it and it feels confusing.

A half-demon raising an immortal? I hope it can be as well written as that one! !

Inexplicably, there is a sense of immediate vision of a half-demon raising an immortal. I don't mean to start a fight, I just feel it.

Come on, the writing is very good, I picked it up from the previous book.

Let's sort out our thoughts first and then write.

The author hasn't been writing the book for a long time, so I will accept the shortcomings if I criticize him lightly.

Why is it causing trouble? I don't understand that.

I couldn't understand what was written. . . . .

I have read more than a dozen chapters so far. First of all, Nuwa appears many times in it. The plot setting here should be in the prehistoric times. However, these monsters who have just entered the spiritual practice can be considered to have become wise not long ago. There are actually sects like humans. It seems that people and monsters are together. When I entered the sect, I was still in the form of a beast, and I didn't transform. I always felt that it was a bit outrageous. The demons who had just become wise did not have high magic power and low intelligence. Besides, where did the demons come from such a systematic order? Shouldn't they all occupy the mountain and be the king? It's not the original prehistoric era, and there was Xuanmen Jiejiao and so on.

One word "chaos"

Eunuch article, deer demons chasing deer, have you seen it?

It can transform into a demon wave later

Sacrifice flow... It's better to go back to the path of half-demon raising immortals

Deer half demon? The first thing I thought of was Princess Yaoyao🙂

When I read this book, I first thought it was venison stew.

I feel like my writing is not good and I can't write the story well.

He has the skin of a half-demon Yangxianzhuan, but does not have his soul and bones.

I looked at a few of them, and they were squeaky and tasteless.

Self-cultivation of being a monster: eating people, drinking alcohol, and robbing beauties 😁

The writing is quite good. I hope I will continue to check and not give up halfway. I have encountered many fairy seedlings that have failed

I don't know how to express it, it's well written, but the content always feels like it's cut off mid-poop, and stops before the climax.

Come on! The author is writing a book for the first time. As long as he is not a prisoner, he is better than 99% of people.

I've given you two tickets, come on.