Resurrected from the Dead and Wandered Around the World of Dian Lao

There are currently more than 200 chapters. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. There is no need to write about Scarlet Rouge like that. The overall feeling is similar to Shang Yuque, but the routine of changing the map like this is really good. If you don't pull it later and your combat power doesn't collapse too much, you will probably be on the list. It's really good to change the map around 500,000 words. The original worldview could not carry much more. I voted 6 monthly votes to support the author. I hope that the new world view must be well shaped and written better. The character creation is okay, and there are foreshadowings and recycling. It is currently recommended to watch. 9/15 300 chapters, these 100 chapters are worth seeing after leaving the previous Demon City. The writing at the end is not very good, and it feels like it is purely the author's own personal use. No one would recognize this kind of writing, and the characters are not established at all. If you feel it is affected, please delete the comment.

There are three turning points in Shi Lao Mo's life. The first is when he meets Hua Xiaomei and is full of yearning for the Jianghu hero. The second is when Yuan Jiuchong lives together for two years and begins to have his own thoughts. This Jianghu is not what he wants. The most exciting moments in the process include: the Sun Moon Sect Shuangdian brothers first tried their magic skills; the cats in the villa were killed; the heart of Hua Erlang's sword became clear; the decisive battle between Yuan Jiuchong and Hua Lao Mo; the Fan brothers preached and produced the fake old demon; Shi Lao Mo fought against the true essence warrior of the demon sect;

The great erroneous path-breaker returns to his loyal subject

The great erroneous path-breaker returns to his loyal subject

Reminds me of this paragraph in the comic. I practice the exercises and make patches. I wonder if the author has read it

In The Death of Scarlet Rouge, the author's treatment of the protagonist is too poor, and the final effect only appears hypocritical (protagonist) It's okay for the female supporting character to die, as long as it serves the plot, but I feel that the author's current Death of Scarlet Rouge does not achieve the arc that this character should have (and In terms of the previous foreshadowing), it did not promote the real growth of the protagonist (the author has a lot of troubles in his heart, but the sense he brought to the readers, at least for me), but caused problems with the protagonist's character image and logic Sigh... For more details, I will wait until I have time during the day.

The first life ended too hastily, and it felt like a deus ex machina. From the second life, it broke away from the main plot of the beginning, and it felt like it was forced to do the second life purely for the sake of changing the map The plot also changed from changing the world at the beginning to a sermon mixed with personal things. I wanted to write about the red revolution, but I couldn't write it too obviously, and the author's political views were divorced from reality, and it was too dramatic.

The writing of Epilepsy is so frustrating. I know the author wants to tell a good story, but it's really hard to have the patience to read it.

After catching up on the update, I ran to read the author's previous book and found the same problem. The plot of the story began to serve the author's self-expression of reality. The logic of the story and characters began to become confusing (note that it was contrary to normal logic rather than illogical). The narrative was fragmented and it was difficult for readers to find an angle to bring it in.

When I read the title, I thought it was a gangster like Hai Hu. After looking at the first city and passing villages, it turned out to be Black Africa under the control of the six French Immortal Sects in the Tongliao Universe. The first city was obviously Burkina Faso, and the story of the city lord Blaise Compaoré rebelling and surrendering to kill Thomas Sankara.

Is the protagonist so useless? Always involved in things beyond his capabilities, he was beaten up and turned into a camera

Are the ordinary people in this book also refreshed? Otherwise, according to this method of killing a group of people for a trivial matter, how could it be possible to keep up?

It's good-looking, and the average person can afford it Bonus points for those who like sea tigers

It was pretty good before I killed the city lord. But after I killed it, I felt like it was just the number of words in the book. It was just talking to myself at all times, and I also had to add some narration.

What I said again is consistent with reality. Red is not suitable everywhere.

Brother, how many ordinary people are there to kill in this world that is constantly killing people?

After changing the map, it becomes a normal martial arts novel, except for the first map, which is an epileptic novel.

In fact, the protagonist is already invincible. He cannot be killed by poison or beating. Every time he is about to die, the passive of Jiuji Gong is triggered, and his skill becomes stronger. Now the only way to kill the protagonist is to directly hack people to death with weapons. However, ordinary weapons may not be able to kill him, otherwise they will not be able to break the defense of Jiuji Gong. Here Under this premise, some concepts that the author wants to write can be realized no matter how he writes. The novel still does not know the identity and age of the protagonist who traveled through the past life. The concept you write may be popular, and it is difficult for others to substitute it, or it is inexplicable. You might as well write about a local, not a time traveler, and there is no setting. The front part should be written as... To establish the heart, to... To establish the life... In fact, it is very empty. Martial arts fantasy is already far away, plus the concept or red you want to write about, it becomes even more empty. I jumped to read it after it was put on the shelf. Finally, I still want to say that this protagonist and Huang Wei want this Changping The city just doesn't make sense, and all I can think of is to change one thing, and stir up a thousand waves with one stone, but it is too detached or too forceful. I want to express the medical heart through Huang Wei. It is better to save people than to save the heart, and medicine can't save anything, etc.; I will continue to read it later to see if it is different from what I thought!

Your ideas have become popular when others write about them!

To rise up in the face of injustice is not to hope for fairness, but if you choose to endure it silently, what is the difference between sitting on poop and enjoying a feast? You claim to be smart and smooth in dealing with things, but in fact you are just a group of rats accustomed to smelly ditches. In order to avoid possible harm, you can only hide in dark caves and eat leftovers...

Can you stop preaching all the time? From the beginning of this second life, I have been preaching all the time. It feels like the author is giving me an ideological and political class. I read novels to be entertained, not to teach!

Has pharmacology and martial arts not developed after thousands of years? The protagonist is all poisonous

This book is the supreme secret book of the Demon Cult, recording the seven most terrifying and evil martial arts in the world. It is said that when this book was written, blood rained from the sky, ghosts cried at night, and the gods retreated. The person who wrote this book also vomited blood and died while writing the last word. "

"Please... How could I... Add more for this kind of reader..." "Oh?!... It's a lie... I'm actually asking for a reward...!" "It's all my fault... I'm not a good author" "You haven't ordered the volume again... Okay, it doesn't matter if you keep the book" "It's okay... He won't order more recently..."

I predict that the book will be red in the end🪖

How come the protagonist has not even reached the realm of a real person in his second life?

I can't tell. I really can't tell what I had for breakfast today.

Isn't it the Heavenly Silkworm Kung Fu? 😥

Too slow, too slow, not enough

How to join the group? I haven't watched it for two or three days.