In What Age Are You Still Traveling Through the Main God Space?

Hmm🤔It's a fantasy novel with little experience. Different from the fantasy department, the logic of the fantasy department will be much worse due to the lack of more life experience and writing background. The ideas are indeed novel occasionally, but they lack the sustainability of growth. Some of the copies are written too superficially, and you don't know much about the original novel at all. You can't describe their exciting points at all, and you can't arouse the resonance of the readers of the original book. The donut gag is very new, and I thought it was OK at first glance, but you haven't written the story well at all. If you add a new gag to a bad story, it's still a bad story. You can't even understand the basic transition... You have to think more about learning basic writing methods, and don't write whatever you think of... Do the background of the protagonist and the label of the protagonist really run through the whole text? Is the plot conflict really logical? Do the written paragraphs really make sense? The most exciting thing about infinite novels is the growth and transformation of the protagonist under strong pressure, as well as the conflicts between various teammates and enemies, the cool points of different worlds and the integration and development of abilities. You have perfectly avoided all the highlights Think about it, think about it

What an interesting, weird setting. I am a new student at Ravenclaw House in Hokwarts, and I felt very friendly when I saw the school's fan fiction at the starting point.

Go to a world like Saint Seiya and play the revolutionary Greek pantheon

Has DND become a god like this? Author, are you serious? 😅 You can just talk nonsense about the doctrine of the suffering god. It is too nonsense to directly become a god. You wouldn't think that a god with weak divine power is really weak or something bad...

Haha, I wrote down the thoughts I have always had. It's an infinite world. Aren't all kinds of resources available casually? Travelers have to fight among themselves for resources. Isn't this the same as two people standing on a mountain of gold and beating their heads to pieces for a piece of gold in their hands? That's too ridiculous The purpose of the existence of the original infinite stream god is to raise Gu. So a lot of obliteration lines are set up to force the reincarnations to involute crazily The killing between obliteration and the reincarnations is set up for the purpose of the main god space And now many infinite flow novels do not explain why reincarnation is required until the completion of the book. What is the purpose of the existence of the reincarnations? What is the ultimate purpose of the reincarnation space The world view setting of the book is the same as the original infinite flow, setting up a lot of obliteration lines to force the reincarnations to involution At this time, when you look back at the content of the book, you will feel that the deaths of the people in the book are really funny Are all reincarnation spaces born to cultivate a person who can kill himself

Why do you need to exchange martial arts? Martial arts are not very good in Zhutian. Let's not talk about Gao Wu. Other martial arts first require hard work. Start practicing from a young age, then practice Sanjiudong and Sanfu. It also depends on whether your qualifications and understanding are suitable for the martial arts you practice. Moreover, you have to do tasks every day. Do you have time to practice? Doesn't spending points to buy time or energy also require another amount of points? The second skill and a bunch of questions derived from it, such as whether there is anything hidden in the skill that needs to be taught by the master, generally whether the ancient texts can be understood, whether there are secret words, acupuncture points and meridians of the human body, the three wheels and seven meridians of Tibetan Buddhism, Taoist Yin and Yang theory, Zen enlightenment, how to prevent being possessed, and how to solve a series of problems. If you don't have enough time to study, time is also money. Buying knowledge directly into your brain also requires points. The hunter system is actually quite suitable for newcomers. This ability is idealistic. Each person is the same. It depends on whether your brain is big enough to operate it. For JOJO's stand, you only buy the ability to awaken the stand, and bet on luck to awaken a powerful stand. You won't lose if you are weak. Don't buy a known strong stand. The strong stand is really strong. It is directly based on rules or time. The weakest one is probably the purple of the hermit. For Marvel's mutant abilities, buy an The Shinigami's Zanpakutō is also Yuxin. This can also be redeemed, but it requires a long time of grinding to unlock it. Swastika unlocks it. I can't think of an example where you can quickly gain combat power and have a bright future.

The first 20 or so pictures are wonderful and have the makings of a masterpiece, but the donuts are so cheap. People who understand the cause and effect will find it tedious and basically copy the whole thing over. It feels like watching it over and over again. People who don't understand it may find it confusing. After all, this matter is not exciting and abstract enough, and it also involves current affairs, so it feels difficult to put it on the shelves 😰😰

I would like to give the author a suggestion. It is natural to take the path of transforming the main god's space through magic. You can take a look at "Magic Race Crossover", "Dimension Eroder", and "Fantasy World Crossover Main God Chapter". Some people say that the donut copy is not well written, but I think this is the most interesting one. Come on, author.

I was really looking forward to seeing Faerun, but it turned out to be completely disappointing! The first gods of Faerûn were written too weak, and it was still a world of high demons. Second, how did this book become a hot-blooded comic? Surprisingly, his faith is not dead, and the protagonist is not of the same bloodline!

In fact, I can still read it. The first few copies are a bit new, but there are a lot of private goods (in terms of thinking). I came to read the novel to see the fun and entertainment, not to take political lessons. I can just mention the relevant theories. It is obviously not written in depth and it seems like a sermon. I want to learn about production relations, so I just read Das Kapital. It's over, the plot is not very good when it comes to the Kitchen King. The later part of the Archon is quite good, but there is too little written, and the rest are just average. I don't know much about the Bian Lao part so I can't comment on it, but I suggest the author go to JD. Com to buy a history of Buddhism and read it. Station B has Wei Mingzi's philosophy course on socialism, which you can also read.

The protagonist doesn't practice this or that. Just wait for death in the main god space. There is no sense of danger in the main god space. This kind of protagonist can survive because the whole TM is the protagonist's aura plus the intelligence-reducing aura.

I couldn't stand the first Harry Potter world until halfway through. It was ugly in every way.

Well, after reading about a third of the book, I felt that the power system was very confusing. The author didn't quite understand the destructive power of the things he described. He always wrote something like: "A rat is wrapped around the terrifying power of an elephant, and it even exploded a brick with a full blow." Such descriptions are a bit similar to light novels or American comics. The setting serves the plot. Although it is not outrageous to the level of a hand-to-hand fight between a God of Creation and a street gangster villain, the description of combat balance is really not good.

The author had better write a good story rather than keep adding political factors! I'm really afraid that someone will report me and take it down! Moreover, many of the questions written by the author are too childish! It makes me feel that the rationalism gained from so much bloodshed and sacrifice in the country is all false and empty. I don't like this very much!

At first, I thought it was about practicing magic and martial arts, but as soon as I left the novice village, I went to the Japanese comics... A great fusion of things that don't make things right, and the key is that there are a lot of preaching principles in it! Everyone spends money to read books to please their own spiritual world, not to listen to the author's poisonous chicken soup!

The most taboo thing about writing a book is the input of values. If you write an infinite flow, you will destroy so many Pringles, but it will not advance the plot and is of little value. To put it bluntly, you are just enjoying yourself. .

The poisonous points become more prominent as you go to the end. If you really want to be honest about the major taboos of online writing, this book commits two. One is to straighten the book, and the other is the main character's amnesia.

After the pirates, the combat power completely collapsed. Anyway, the protagonist was brainless and killed the strongest one at the beginning. The main god's strengthening is also a decoration. Although the author likes to control politics, it is not as good as playing house, relying entirely on mental control and material creation out of thin air.