System? I Didn't!

I read dozens of chapters and always felt that something was wrong. Later I found out that there was no main line in this book. The protagonist is an old man who has been around for several weeks, which means that he has extremely strong strength and has lost the main line of becoming stronger. Now the author writes that the protagonist has been liberating the oppressed people. This is good, but there is a problem. The liberation of the protagonist is passive. Someone is always looking for trouble or provoking the protagonist, and the protagonist beats or kills him. , And then went to rescue other people without any initiative at all. This raises another question: what does the protagonist do all day? Since it is a spiritual martial arts, the protagonist talks about being firm in his heart, but he has no substantial initiative to save the people, and the protagonist Are you making dumplings all day? Otherwise, I don't see the protagonist having anything to do, so I suggest the author clarify the main plot of the book. If it is about becoming stronger, then write it clearly. If it is about liberation, then improve the protagonist's initiative, so that he does not have to wait for the enemy to come.

The setting of spiritual martial arts and technological martial arts is a bit interesting, but after reading about 20 chapters, the protagonist can travel through many worlds, why come? Why the investment in capital was not mentioned and the background was not explained clearly?

I hope this won't be a eunuch, and it won't end in a hurry like a dream of ten thousand years.

If there is no, there will be no. Why are you so cruel?😢

The author, your thinking is based on dialectical materialism, and there is no way to integrate it into this idealistic world view. In other words, you are writing a novel. The core can be thoughts, but the form of expression is a story, that is, a plot. You are imagining a world in a world that you are completely unfamiliar with. The story itself is fictitious. I know you have a story in your heart. It is better to imitate reality and completely rewrite it. This will make you feel better. I can also understand what you wrote. You are too emotional and affect rational thinking. This is contrary to what you wrote. Maybe I am not right! Just a few words!

Looking at it so far, I feel good, but there are too few words and it feels a bit watery.

It's fine if you haven't signed a contract, and you dare to write, but Huwei has written once, and it doesn't seem so shocking anymore.

It conforms to the setting of Gaowu in my mind Ideal martial arts, will trumps everything Nowadays, some writing about Gaowu is purely formulaic It is no different from the levels in the game, and there is no feeling of winning.

Did the author use AI code? It looks so weird😒

Gan, let me tell you who wrote it with such feeling. It turns out to be you!

I said, why does it look so comfortable to me? Let me keep watching. It turns out it's from the crazy guy Jianghu.

This book is good, the ideas are pretty good, life is difficult enough. Fortunately, pig's feet have... Will😁

One is the author of this book, and the other is the one who wrote "I am a magic cultivator". The writing is concise, humorous and smooth, and the feeling of leveling up and fighting monsters is not strong. However, this may be the reason why their books collapsed very quickly 🙂

The main god is the one that sucks, I feel like the ones that follow are basically not my type, so I'll wait for the next one.

There can't be a group of people like Pig's Feet, running behind the enemy, spreading ideas, and resisting the system. What Pig's Feet spreads is clearly to spread ideas.

During the battle, the black hole came out. How did the people nearby survive?

I feel like the plot is okay, but it's a bit quicker to be cold or not, and it feels a bit watered down.

When some of the supporting characters are neither good nor bad, I start to feel bored.

At first, I thought it was the kind of chosen one who used GTA to promote the banner in the small advertisement Later I found out that it was the Rehoboam system in Westworld 3 To be honest, I thought the system mentioned in the introduction was really the system. I was still wondering where the world of Renren System came from. Oppression, the result is such a system Of course, the system in the novel is definitely not as powerful as the Rehoboam system. It is simply the product of a sudden thought, focusing on oppression and perfunctory In the end, the content of the introduction is only a part of the novel, or just the beginning.

Sea Wolf Martial God, we love you!