Longyouling

Please fill me up and write about wives 😭

Seeing that many book friends feel that the power system is vague, I might as well post a comparison post and write down the more certain parts. Ten Secrets, Hundred Appearances, Three Thousand Dharmas Ten Secrets: There are three souls and seven souls in the human body. After each soul awakens, it can cultivate a corresponding secret skill, for a total of ten. Hundreds of Appearances: Practicing multiple sets of secret techniques that can be combined to form Dharma Appearances. About one hundred types are known. Three Thousand Methods: There are approximately three thousand types of individual secret techniques that have been recorded. [Three Souls and Seven Souls] Three Souls: Heavenly Soul Embryo Light (ward off evil spirits and increase longevity), Earth Soul Shuangling (control oneself), Human Soul Ghost Essence (understand the clear language of the heart) Seven Souls: Agile Soul Corpse Dog (reaction speed), Physical Fuya (physical fitness), Jingse Queyin (energy endurance), Yuso Swallow thieves (defense), purify the soul without poison (resistance), remove filth from the soul (vitality), force the soul to stink the lungs (explosive power) [Soul Strengthening] Usually it is stimulated by practicing the corresponding secret technique, but you can also rely on acquired behavior to continuously strengthen your corresponding soul. The main one is to use it or lose it. Three souls: high position and high heavenly soul (status), high destiny and earthly soul (influence), strong thoughts and strong human souls (obsession) Seven souls: training response (corpse dog), eating more and more arrows (fuying arrows), recharging energy (bird yin), beating the muscles, bones, skin and flesh (eating thieves), Take more medicinal stones (non-poisonous), follow other training to naturally improve (removing filth), and exercise the heart and lungs (stinky lungs) Secret Techniques: 1. There is no theoretical distinction between secret techniques and secret techniques, but those who can master multiple secret techniques will generally have more powerful methods. 2. The strength of a secret skill user mainly depends on the secret skills he has learned. A strong Sixth Secret skill who has learned three secret skills to attack and kill, and three secret skills to assist may not be able to defeat an ordinary master who has learned three secret skills to attack and kill. 3. The effect of the secret technique is linked to the strength of the soul. For the same secret technique, the effect of a person with a stronger soul will be stronger. 4. Some secret techniques have conditions for casting. It needs to be contacted in advance and there is a moon in the sky (the jade plate opens the sky and Han lock, it does not shine on thousands of mountains, but only on you - the moon on you); It is necessary to take a lot of coarse salt in advance (the salty air of the teeth hurts the bones and muscles, and the mountainous mountains are climbed with a heavy load - salt is strong); 5. Some even require compound conditions. It needs to be upright in the heart and correspond to the long-term tempering of the soul (this heart is only Xu Hui Jian, the stream of light washes away the dust and the moon - Yue Li Shen) It needs to be embroidered with birds on the clothes, and hold water or a mirror in the hand (the embroidered bird has thin wings and full feathers, the double luan opens the mirror and the autumn water shines - Fei Luan Jian) Kill the target to obtain the ghost, and obtain [Fear] and [Fear] through the process of killing. However, if you cannot suppress the ghost in the body, your own soul may be counterattacked. (The emperor lives behind the forest tent, and in the depths of the netherworld stands Yaojing - the emperor of Yama) Three heads and six arms. (gathering, arms, elbows, and wrists are relaxed - three heads and six arms) 7. Theoretically, the more difficult the practice and the more expensive the secret technique, the stronger the effect will be. However, it does not rule out the strange situation that after thirty years of hard work in [accumulating cold] secrets, you can only freeze watermelon in the summer. 8. The secret technique can be attached to items, but as a price, before the secret technique is released, the caster will lose the ability to use this secret technique, and the corresponding soul will also suffer certain damage and cannot be continuously attached. 9. If the secret skill is attached to an item and the caster dies midway, the secret skill on the item will slowly pass over time, or completely dissipate after being used once. Dharma Appearance: Temporarily empty, will be filled in after writing~

I swear with more than 30 years of reading experience: If this book is not popular, where is the justice? Xianyu's book has the appearance of becoming a god! Establish a post as evidence.

After reading it till now, although the book is only 85,000 words, I can clearly feel that the author is really telling the story seriously. The writing is smooth and comfortable, the pace is not sluggish, the characters stand up, the logic is very stable, and there is no forced plot just for the sake of fun. The most rare thing is that the overall structure has been vaguely laid out. The world view, main line, and foreshadowing can all be seen to be carefully designed and have great stamina. Nowadays, many books with hundreds of thousands of words are still a mess. This book with only tens of thousands of words has laid such a solid foundation, which is really rare. I will continue to follow up and support you. I hope the author can stabilize his status, write slowly and well, don't be anxious, come on!

So short So short Ah So short Short!

I haven't read the book yet, just read the introduction. So is the former county magistrate the crotch-pulling goddess and shameful sheep-head of this book?

Based on the experience of several previous books, it is a single relationship, but there will be some confidante relationships 😄 (The choice for the first book is that the female knight is hidden in the late stage, the crotch goddess becomes a relationship more similar to a friend of life and death, and the flat-chested female schoolmaster becomes a relationship that is probably a happy enemy; the choice for the second book is to divide Different world lines, each world line has a different story line, and also has a different single heroine. The heroine of the main world line is the princess) But 🐟's xp is too obvious, I like the queen 😄 If you see a queen or a princess in this book, you might as well make a bold guess that this is the heroine 😁

I just hope that the new book won't tease the issues of not getting married, the mistress' wife, the disappearance of supporting characters, the collapse of combat power, etc. In the previous book, the male protagonist got married too quickly and the three characters he created looked very decent but very strange. Because they are married, other people can only like the male protagonist and then die alone, with regrets for the rest of their lives. Prison🐟Tell me, after the male protagonist got married, he also kissed the director. Didn't the director make any progress after the kiss? Emma booked a seat after her death. My sister will be my sister for life. The little rich woman, the little policewoman, etc. All disappeared. At the time, the virgin Bureau All the seniors have disappeared, don't do your parallel time and space, what kind of groove parallel time and space theory, because other female protagonists are happy with other male protagonists in other worlds, on average everyone will be happy, don't do that, you can't do this On average, your parents have one egg, but does your mother really have an egg? No matter how happy other people are, how can people in the main universe be converted into a happy reunion? As a high-dimensional observer and high-dimensional creator, you must not do this again. The ending was so sudden that I couldn't let it go for a long time after watching it. I waited for the ending to fill in all the pitfalls, play all the characters through, and give everyone a good ending. But I also knew that it was impossible. After all, the extra episode was almost difficult to give birth to. Let me make it clear again, this time you either don't flirt with the male protagonist, or if she flirts with you, she will become the female protagonist. Stop being mysterious, and don't do the same thing as a table of ex-girlfriends and a table of secret admirers. My stomach hurts when I watch it.

As long as the author can make tens of thousands of dollars a day, it is not a dream to be in the top 30 in the monthly voting list. Is there any big boss who can take the author to speculate in stocks? Let the author explode the small universe and add more to cover his position.

Let's not talk about how the main text is written. Your introduction is too abstract. It will not attract readers at all if it looks like this.

Are you a county or a country? The area under our jurisdiction has borders in all directions, right? Could it be an enclave?

This plot doesn't match the introduction at all?

Damn, these three chapters of yours are equal to one chapter of others. Stop being stupid and hurry up and advance the plot.

A person like Wei Huohu will be scolded by Wang Rang at first glance and become the kind of person who can never live without the stench of Lord Wang Rang.

Longyou County? Why did I write about my hometown?

Big - pull - special - pull!

I must say that the author's control over chapters and word count is really impressive. Looking back at this battle, it started on July 29 when the protagonist Wang Rang led the troops to join the battle. He was commanding the soldiers to focus fire accurately, and his pretense was broken. On July 30, He Yanling was frustrated and begged Wang Rang, leaving suspense. On July 31, he asked for leave. On August 1, two sentences solved the suspense and led to the secret skills of both sides. The fire snake is about to burn the city, and the readers are expecting Wang Rang to show his great power, and at the same time, the secret skill of the yellow lion and lion is pointed out, raising expectations; 8.2 Starts with the water chapter and Wang Rang warns, and then the yellow lion and lion fall into the city, and the winged fire snake burns the city for another reason; 8.3 Praises the king for staying calm in the face of danger, and the instant messaging of the commander in the account shows his power again. During this period, every chapter chapter can keep people wanting to read on, and the content of each chapter is basically 10 points, which means that the number of words is about the same. You are really good, you can start the chapter class at the starting point.

Speaking for the second time, this book still lacks two things. One is through editorial exposure. The other is updates. By attracting readers through exposure, the author can make money. But the more important thing is the latter, you know what I mean? 🙂

I really felt like I was choking in my throat when I read this book recently. I wanted to give up, but the plot attracted me crazily. Every time a chapter is broken, it is like a guillotine, cutting off the fish's head accurately, making people's blood rush. After a week, the progress of the plot seemed to be standing still, the text was dragging out like a deaf old man standing in front of the car struggling to move forward slowly. When I pressed the horn, it felt like I was being yelled at by ntr's husband but was unable to do anything, and was being suffocated by the words.

The content is well written, but didn't the author feel dizzy when writing? Especially the dialogue scenes, where the characters' names are preceded by dozens or even twenty adjectives. It's so tiring. I feel like I have to slow down after reading a few chapters.

I see that there is no big problem except that it is short. Why don't you feel hot?

Please update 500,000 words immediately, I want to read it

Why do you feel like you've been asking for leave every week lately?

It's been many days since I've been online. How did you save 50 chapters? Are you milking a cow?

Can the author change to a simple world map? Because I have a bad sense of direction and I don't know where they are fighting or anything. At least he said that I can compare it with the world map and know where and what they are fighting.

I want to take a rest every day and get my money back!

Very well written, brothers, give it a thumbs up

Code words quickly, my brain is itchy!

You really need to take care of yourself. I haven't seen much this whole day.

I feel like the protagonist is already a supermodel at this point. I would like to ask if there are any opponents in the future who can make the magistrate happy 🥱