Tumor Sword Fairy

I feel that this book is still deeply influenced by Yan Lai's book. The protagonists are all greasy and mature masters. The difference is that the protagonist in this book is too young. He went out to work for a few years at the age of 12 and his combat power exploded. The problem is that in the previous game, Yan Lai's cultivation level plummeted when he was in his thirties, and outsiders looked down upon him as normal. However, the 22-year-old Pei Xia was embarrassed by the fact that his superficial strength was above average. Many book reviews said that this book is not exciting enough, and I agree that the book's slow-burning style is a style, but the readers who have been reading it have been holding their breath and feeling uncomfortable, and they need something refreshing to vent. Another point that makes people feel uncomfortable is that although the protagonist has a broad vision and can cross borders like drinking water, he does not have the ability to explode. The first cool point in the previous game was Yan Lai, who opened the weapon king spirit, and all the great masters in the world turned into chickens and dogs. The first cool thing about this book is that the protagonist scolded Luo Xian, and Weishan spit out his sword and slashed Xue Zhenguo with his sword, but no one supported him, which was not cool enough. Other level-up novels provide a sense of satisfaction by continuously defeating powerful enemies and quickly leveling up. This one has a slow level-up speed and less pretentiousness. It feels even more uncomfortable for a former great master to be suppressed by a bunch of small guys. Being bullied by a dog when a tiger falls in Pingyang is not the high-spirited way of bullying a poor young man. I hope that I can create more excitement in the future and give full play to my strengths. Pei Xia is only twenty-two. He should not be the decadent uncle he was in the early days of Yan Lai. At present, it seems that Pei Xia lacks that youthful spirit, or chivalrous spirit, which is a very important point.

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The writing is really good, but the plot is really a bit tasteless, with too many poisonous points. No one knows the protagonist, the son of the prime minister, when he returns to Beijing, and the prime minister's family can be usurped by two people. Moreover, the emotional line is also abstract, whether it is a harem or pure love, but it is really taboo to not accept it. The general direction of the plot is fine and interesting, but the author really needs to polish these basic points, it looks too tacky.

Let me talk about the conclusion first, it is just fodder, the writing style is unique, the writing is good, the story is average, there are poisonous points, and it can be read without thinking. The following is some spoiler comments, so read with caution. > Chapter 19 is a big poisonous point, First, the plot is wrong. The explosive point of the son-in-law deceiving the master, which had been exaggerated for several chapters, was raised high by the empress and put down gently. Those who can bear it will continue to read, while those who can't stand it will simply abandon the book. Two, the protagonist's reaction is wrong. The protagonist should be dissatisfied with the Queen's operation, but he didn't show it in the front. He added "I don't like her" after two or three pictures. Even if the author added "raised an eyebrow" or "sighed" at the front, it would be a bit of foreshadowing, but there is no such thing. We can only speculate that the author didn't think so much. Third, I am disgusted with the behavior of this queen, and thus I am disgusted with the protagonist's behavior of enduring the queen. Let me write down some thoughts about the role of the Queen. From this plot, it can be inferred that the author's description of the queen is a bit like Wu Zetian. He always thinks that it is normal for all forces to tolerate each other for the sake of the country, and then with this mentality, he muddies up against various conflicts, acting as a framer everywhere, and laying minefields everywhere. The biggest shortcomings of this plot are: First of all, the Queen's behavior will make the Pei family represented by the protagonist dissatisfied. The Pei family's dissatisfaction with the queen was seen by others as the fact that the queen had lost the support of the prime minister, one of the ruling legitimacy certified by the late emperor. Secondly, the Queen's connivance of her son-in-law's behavior of deceiving the emperor will give every political family in the court an opportunity to betray their moral integrity. You can't even protect the Prime Minister's family who is following you, why should we do it with you, a woman? It's not like I can only choose you while pinching my nose. I can just wait for the prince to come out and directly support him to take the throne. In the end, the two parties were originally a zero-sum game. One wanted the other party to withdraw from the Pei family and pay the price, and the other wanted to continue to use the Pei family's political influence. As a result, you insist on deciding a gourd case, and the demands of both parties are not satisfied, making both parties dissatisfied. Would you accept such a confused emperor if you were his minister? It's a complete copy of Wu Zetian, with pro plus Yuan Shao.

I feel that the author is suffering from literary youth disease, and the good girl must be written to death. I just sent it as soon as I sent it, and I also wrote a plot that allows the protagonist to prove his innocence. The routine is so old that it makes me want to vomit. What Qiong Yao novel is so pretentious.

Realizing the disclaimer and summary, the writing style of this book is good compared to most new books, and it can be read without thinking It is said to be a cool book, but it is not cool enough. It is said to be suspenseful but there is no suspenseful atmosphere. The characters are not stable. In the front, Luo can risk his life to save a child. A person who turns around and betrays his master by betraying his ancestors. The heroine leads the two younger brothers into a fight, but she has a silly and sweet image in the back. In addition, the first two plots of this book are both narrated in the way of solving crimes, and the solving of the case is far-fetched. I don't know if it will be like this in the rest of the book. Compared to many books on various rankings, the writing style is already very good. The bad thing is that people can't stand it. The cool writing style and suspenseful content make it very fragmented to read. I haven't read the rest yet, so I'll read more and read the reviews from readers.

Seriously. The book is pretty good. But. Deserve entry limit and exemption. I've read fifty chapters. So far, the content has little to do with the title of the book. The male protagonist's failure was only briefly discussed but not explained clearly. No one cares about reading your book except old fans and old bookworms. Too little fun and too slow pace. When I first wrote this book, I received various recommendations. I have seen the recommendation at least 10 times. You can enter for free at the end. This is proof. I didn't want to give you a single coin. I'm too lazy to leave a comment. But I made an exception for the one where the hero left a note to the princess. This time I took advantage of the limited exemption and read this book. If it really works. I will subscribe to watch later.

Can this be written by a first-level accountant? Where did the extraterritorial devil come from? Tell me honestly!

I don't like this weird setting and the plot with Riddler everywhere. It was too tiring to read, and I felt that the world view in the book was also very distorted. It looked very uncomfortable.

The first volume is good, the second volume is barely enough, and the third volume deserves to be exempted. What I wrote before was okay, and it was a little bit fun. At the end of the second volume, there was a riddle thief named Laduo. I was thinking about solving the riddle in the third volume, but ended up changing the map. Unbelievable, it is determined that the author is dead

Questions about the ninth realm of Su Shi: Can I learn to refine weapons first and then make elixirs, or is there some setting that makes it impossible to learn the former realm and the latter realm? If I don't have this setting and can refine weapons but not elixirs, then am I in the 2nd realm or the 3rd realm? Can anyone ask the author? Attached realm arrangement - one righteousness and three wonders: Wenfeng (viewing the sea) Huayou Zhengang Refining the tripod Tongxuan Opening the mansion Huayuan Tianshi Proving the way Returning to the void Wuchen? ? Entering the profession (accomplished in learning, mature in skills, no unified name) Alchemy Making tools Controlling spirits Supernatural powers Formation/dissociation ? ? ? Behead a hundred people Behead a thousand people Behead ten thousand people Blood Town ? (Chapter 65 The Dead reveals the first three realms for the first time) See with the eyes Observe with the heart Pick with the hands Into the belly ? Note: Pei Xia wandered around the world in his early years, and his practice method was the "ancient method", which is the ancient practice method, including "supporting the sky" and "wudu" (physical fitness and skills). The five realms of "Wu Du": Ling, Gang, Yu, Qi, and Yi Taken from Chapter 34 of Volume 2: World Outside the Sect. Qinzhou Liantou: Copper skin and iron bones, diamond is indestructible As for the first level of Su Shi, according to the article, there is no unified name, and any skill can be used.

Boring plot, boring characters, and the following female characters

As soon as Lao Ma picked up his pen, the familiar arena came back. Alas, the comfort zone is good!

I still don't understand that a book that I once thought could be called food and grass can be written like this now. What's the point of opening the map of Qinzhou? It's the same as reopening a world view. Many original holes are not filled before digging another one. It's not like this to aim high. The point is, this is a male channel. If you are not strong enough, you should try your best to improve your strength, instead of sharpening your weapons in battle when death is imminent. The protagonist's combat power has been suppressed for hundreds of chapters, and he is directly restricted in everything after entering Qinzhou. Most readers should not be M. Is this a compliance test?

I've read Chapter 46 and I really can't hold it back. I want to talk about that woman named Luo Xian. She came on the scene and saved a man named Xie. I can understand that she is a villain. Of course, there are a lot of cool writing routines here. The plot is written to be pretentious and slap-in-the-face. Let's not mention these. Let's talk about this Luo. She rectified the Holy Sect. I understand that she is looking for strength for the Northern Expedition, but she Chapter 46 later said that the protagonist should be adopted as a dog and adopted as a subordinate. I was really confused. This is the emperor's mind trick, but the premise of the emperor's mind trick is that the emperor is an emperor. You want to rebel, so you force a person who knows yourself? Not a buddy. You either kill him or bribe him. I understand it, but why do you force him to be your subordinate? Do you really have any brains?

If the force value is too low, don't pretend to be fantasy. When traveling, you can only ride a horse or walk. You have to rely solely on physical strength and there is no use of light body skills. No matter what level you are in, you can ride a horse or walk. The plot is all about the Riddler digging holes but not filling them. It's almost a hundred chapters and I don't know what the main plot of the author is.

First, be low-key. In the second chapter, the map is changed, and the map change is inexplicable. In the end, I changed the map and completely abandoned the heroine (the third volume has been poisoned)

Chapter 2: Smoking is so funny, especially holding the filter tip makes me even more nervous.

After reading Chapter 20, the first wave of pretentious slaps in the face was really frustrating and too poisonous.

The writing looks good, but the more I read it, the more boring it becomes. I always feel that it's almost boring. It's just like that. There's nothing interesting about it.

The writing is okay, but the main details are terrible, and the plot is terrible, otherwise this book would be a masterpiece.

The plot is so old-fashioned, like a book from more than ten years ago. The character is also like the old-fashioned one of not taking the initiative, not refusing, plus being eloquent and upright. Volume 3 shocked me! The vulgar ones cannot be used anymore. The vulgar ones cannot be used anymore.

Did you come up with this combat power system? The front and back don't match, it's a big mess.

I'm an old bookworm, so I think the book is still okay, but now I think the most important thing is to change the title of the book. The word "tumor" refers to disease, and the first feeling people get when they see it is to avoid it.

The separation was very serious. On the way to Beijing, he was pretending to be cool, and when he arrived in Beijing, he was deceived and turned into a lost dog. On the way to escape, I didn't forget to mention how awesome the protagonist was ten years ago. This book seems to have a strange smell.

You can call me low martial arts. A master cheats and is a disaster for supermodels. A martial artist can do well in his career. You can call me high martial arts. He basically relies on carriages and boats to travel. Yunhu Mountain has built a flying magic weapon. Currency is also very strange. The article lacks some cool points and is a bit draggy, but it's not bad to read.

The more I look at it, the more inexplicable the warrior's combat performance becomes. Do you feel the change from high martial arts in the first volume to medium martial arts and then to low martial arts? The higher the protagonist's realm, the lower his expressiveness. I would say that the strongest performance in the Zhengdao realm is that he can fly. . .

The map of Qinzhou feels too long, and it's a bit uncomfortable to look at. I felt that it wasn't exciting enough before, because I had to deliberately suppress my strength. Qin Di also received a group debuff, which made me even more frustrated and said yes. I hope it will improve in the future.

Unfilial piety is one of the Ten Evils, along with treason, treason, and disrespect... All of which are punishable by death and without mercy. The last stick is fifty? Isn't it too much of a downgrade? It's not difficult to protect someone. If you start a fight and arrest someone, it's reasonable to kill or let go. The realm setting is so mysterious that it can deceive people, and the storyline is too witty. From the moment the protagonist was thrown at the gate of the city - the five-tael city tax - meeting his fiancée at a stall - killing the mortal fiancée in the seven realms - finding the kidnapping instead of killing - the protagonist letting go of the mastermind behind the scenes... There is no link where the IQ is online, no matter the protagonist, the supporting role, or the villain.

If you don't know how to write emotional lines, just write less. It doesn't taste right. Your way of writing emotional drama is too old-fashioned, and it's easy to get goosebumps. This book would be much better if it were simpler, less ambiguous and more friendly and refreshing, less muddled and more neat. The protagonist in your novel is destined to not be free and easy, but he cannot be entangled in love and cannot move forward. That's all. Anyway, the deal is done.