Not Abstract, Not Spiritual

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When you first meet Taoist Lan, you are impressed by his firm will. This is the highlight of this character so far. Then, the moment you become Taoist Lan's apprentice, you immediately become completely different. How can I put it, the contrast is too big, which makes people wonder if he was just faking it before. Then, after becoming Zi Su, he was too attentive to Taoist Lan. This is even more different from the way he met Lan Beard at the beginning. Finally, after entering the Qinghua sect, he completely reduced himself to a role like a clown. First, the protagonist works hard to practice basic swordsmanship, but Zisu doesn't like it. Judging from the updated content, when he first started cultivating immortals, he would practice the worst skills, but he did not study the Qinghua sect's skills. Secondly, when you meet a beautiful woman, you lose the intention to practice. Did your experience as a monk bring no use at all? If he were still a monk, wouldn't he be unable to bear the precepts? Third, I rejected Zi Yan today. I almost laughed. I said that I don't want to become a dead immortal, but everything so far has confirmed that I am a dead immortal. I can't face myself yet. This seems to be worse than Zi Yan, because although Zi Yan is a dead immortal, after describing it, it shows that Zi Yan understands what she wants, faces her own shortcomings, and admits her weakness, so she indulges in it. So for the character Zisu, the character design was not established at the beginning. The more I wrote, the more it fell apart. It's a real person🤡🤡

It was pretty good-looking at first, and Longhu was also very emotional, but suddenly he became obsessed with saving the world. Do you want the red light to shine in the world of immortality?

The writing style is natural, but this article is more like a travel note at the moment. It records the protagonist's enlightenment experience while practicing with his master, but the theme is not revealed. Impatient readers may not be able to adapt to it, as the plot progress of the previous works is quite fast.

Very good. The author's ideas in the first two books were good, but he failed in the later period. I hope this book will not make the same mistake again.

I feel like someone has changed. It seemed quite comfortable before it was put on the shelves, but later it felt like it was falling into a cliché.

It's like reading a didactic book, too many explanations, not my cup of tea. Wouldn't it be better to be more relaxed like before? I had a long discussion with a temple Zhu 🤔

On a 10-point scale, there may be 8 points before going up the mountain, 7 points for practicing in the mountain, and only 4 points for the descent.

Like the first half of Lan Ke and the two books by Golden Jasmine, this type of immortality writing is still in the blue ocean. The only problem is that it requires too much writing skills. After a brief look, I feel that this is the same path, plus some additional work. But it seems that some details are still lacking. It gives me the feeling that the characters are living for the sake of living, and they are deliberately abstract for the sake of abstraction. I am not good at explaining the details, which is the awkward feeling. In addition, you can save some money by borrowing some truths told by the characters in the book. If this book is more story-oriented, some settings can actually be blurred. It is simple to directly tell the settings through other people's mouths, but it is too naive and it will go down. Sometimes the atmosphere created can be easily destroyed.

I have been in Wenqing, and I have been talking about truth. Except for the abstraction of the name above, I have not seen any other abstractions.

Brothers, I worked in a black factory for twelve hours and earned twenty-six and thirty cents 😭. I thought about killing the boss who was born. 😐

Not much to see, there are many contradictions. For example, Lan is very unfamiliar and curious about some of Xu's words about the earth, but it is clear that the lyrics he sings while drinking are poems that are familiar to the earth! There are many criticisms and ridicules in other novels about cultivating immortals that are unscientific and illogical, such as inhaling purple energy in the morning, raising corpses, etc. However, everyone knows that cultivating immortals itself is unscientific and illogical. Is it possible that the "cultivation" novels in this book are very scientific and logical❓

In the middle of the chapter, you accept a disciple. The reason given is that you feel pity for him. The character creation is only two pages long, and the method is similar to moral kidnapping. You have been talking about this master before. He seeks immortality rather than skills. He should be free to discuss immortals. He has also traveled the land and never seen miserable people? It's so liberating to accept someone as a disciple after being forced to do something.

It's quite speechless, why does it have to be famous? Originally, it was a very good and beautiful book before it was put on the shelves. The world of cultivating immortals is about freedom and ease of daily life. However, you put it on the shelves and gave me a bunch of shit. The whole chapter has great principles and inexplicable salvation. Can we not talk about the great principles? Reading novels is just to feel comfortable, why are you trying to make so much sense out of it? There are enough truths in life, just put them on the shelf

First, a paragraph of Spring and Autumn style brushstrokes went through the construction process, and in the end, another one was forced to wear a matching shirt, and another one was also a sword cultivator and had the same blue sword energy. What the hell is this?

Blind jb writing

After reading it, I don't know what to say. Wenqing tastes a bit strong

No, why did you delete the comment?

I saw that the recommendation for this book was updated in the previous book. I just finished reading the only two chapters. I quit and found that the author of the Unorthodox Lord God Space was also written. It was too rude.

Why are you so cold before I even see you? Otherwise, let's write unlimited streaming! You are good at this. A single world restricts you too much. You are suitable for diversified development.

Are you a eunuch? Keep it till you die 🤔🤔🤔

You have to be realistic and realistic. Different worlds have different situations and you can't just apply them mechanically! It must be combined with local conditions!

I just want my money back 😅

Work: An idealist, Reality has changed direction

Ma De tried his best to show me inspirational chicken soup, right?

Author, write a few articles about your conception of Lan Fat. I want to know what kind of events would lead to the emergence of such a character. Just write down Fatty Lan's side story, and you'll see if you have time to write it down.

I feel that many people don't understand why the author uses jelly grass in the front, but cannot hold it tight in the back The jelly grass in the front is because the author's protagonist is a character with three views, not a puppet protagonist who serves the plot The reason why the author can't hold it tight in the back is also very simple. One is that the protagonist has three views and the author cannot control it. The other is that red is difficult to write, even if there is no river crab. . . For example, in the previous book, the protagonist breaks the old and builds the new. This does not mean that the present is not good, it is definitely better than before, but we are only ordinary people, and the author is also an ordinary person. Our vision can only be said to be that, and it is unprecedented for people who cannot realize that it is so awesome. . . We just feel all the discomforts in reality, so the protagonist will give people a feeling after working hard to transform. . . That's it? Many people read novels just for a moment of peace and escape from reality. So I think it's not that the author shouldn't write red, but that the ending shouldn't end at the initial stage. This ending is not exciting enough for us What if we can write the ultimate stage in our imagination? ! Red is inherently flammable Or to change the way of thinking, the magic power mastered by monks can be regarded as the production materials mastered Or, the higher the realm, the higher the energy level, the larger the scale, and the more accurate the accuracy of interfering with reality? If you have no ideas for the primary stage and beyond, you can look at what other similar authors have written, but there are very few similar ones. . .

Wangzuo, who is identified as a rich mine, wants to show off his zz leakage fetish 😰

The main god's space is still not serious and looks good

Explain! What obsession do you have with 6.30!