There's Something Interesting About This Martial World

Did you do girl videos before? The writing is good, and the description at the beginning of the first chapter is so gorgeous, but it doesn't have much substance, and I think you might be acclimated to it.

The most annoying thing is all kinds of complicated words. It is obviously telling a story, but it has to use a bunch of adjectives, some of which are even more excessive, and it also needs to express emotions.

The text is gaudy and the information density is too low, making it boring to read.

Those who feel that the literary style is short-lived can be roughly divided into the following two situations: The first type is those who feel that the rhetoric is frequent and the language is cumbersome. In this regard, I have been trying to significantly reduce unnecessary rhetorical descriptions and promote vernacular culture. It is still a public chapter. You can have a taste before making a decision. Second, because the settings in the article are too cumbersome and complicated, let me say it before: the world view and settings presented in the first 200,000 words of this article are less than 1%, and there will be a lot of long and basic settings and world view descriptions in future chapters. This article is not suitable for you, please cross out the upper left corner and find another one you love.

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Your book touches on martial arts and is about martial arts. Will you still follow the same pattern of no cuckold and no martial arts?

The sentences are too cumbersome and it makes me tired to read.

Those who don't know think you are a platinum master and have started to purify it. At first glance, I rely on lv1.

Chapter names are also very important, no matter how bad they are, it's better than nothing.

The setting and writing are good, but this update is really bad...

It doesn't look cool at all. It's full of literary style. The protagonist's combat power is unknown. It doesn't sound interesting. I personally prefer cool stories. The golden finger is not very useful. It occasionally pops up to give some benefits. It's not that useful.

Bah! System documentation full of technology... Those who are tired of the system can withdraw it.

There are still books without chapter names. I don't know what to think.

Why does it feel like it's a bit confusing when I read it? I don't know what I'm talking about.

The book "Heavy Armored Dragon Makes Hatred" is really good (¯ㅂ¯crimin)

The sentence is too complicated and the number of words is too small.

There are no chapter names, so you might as well make one for this thing. Otherwise it looks quite awkward.

Very interesting. I suspect that the author is reincarnated, or a medical graduate student came to practice. There are imaginative storylines

Yay! My wife should have come to the starting point long ago

There is no chapter title at the front, and I have no desire to read anymore 😰 How bold is this author?

If you are not a master and don't have chapter names, it will easily make people feel like you are running away.

The author's hobby! You can crack a handful of melon seeds for fun.

It gives me a headache to read, there are too many adjectives

What kind of relationship is there, and women come randomly, and the heroine appears out of nowhere?

The ten good karma are specifically divided into the good karma of the body: not killing, not stealing, and not committing sexual misconduct; the good karma of language: not lying, not speaking harshly, not being divisive, and not being frivolous; the good karma of the mind: not being greedy, not being angry, and not being delusional.

The world view and settings presented in 200,000 words are less than one percent! ! ? ? Does the author really want to write 20 million words? A book that you can read at a glance!

What's very confusing is that I don't know what the protagonist is doing and what the main plot is . Is such a boring protagonist always like this? This character is really unpleasant

How should I put it? It should be said like this. Well, how should I say it? It should be said like this. Well, there is a main plot, and there are also sub-plots and sub-plots. There should be branch plots, but it seems that it can be written in this way. Well, after reading it, I felt that it was promoted, but it was promoted, but whether it was promoted or not is hard to say. As for the main plot, I felt that it was written, but I also felt that it was not written. It seemed that it was written, but it seemed that it was not written.

May I ask whose vest this is?

It has been updated recently, so I give the author a thumbs up for this. Unfortunately, there is a problem with the writing; I can understand that it is difficult to write an invincible flow in this setting, but the background and world view are introduced through branch plots and characters, which makes the reading experience very poor. Originally, the protagonist is not a behind-the-scenes person. This kind of situation that does not appear in several chapters makes the reading very scattered. It should focus more on the protagonist himself.