There's Something Interesting About This Martial World

You used to write for female-oriented online novels? Your writing style is good, especially the very elaborate opening of the first chapter, but there's not much substance. I think you might not adapt well to this genre.

What I hate most is all the complicated vocabulary. They're clearly telling a story, but they insist on using a bunch of adjectives, and some are even worse, trying to express emotions.

Those who find the writing too flowery can generally be divided into two categories: First, those who find the language overly ornate and cumbersome. I'm already trying to significantly reduce unnecessary rhetoric and descriptions, moving towards a more colloquial style. This is currently a public chapter, so you can try it out before making a decision.

The text is overly ornate but lacks information density, making it boring to read.

Reader Group: Gravis 3rd Generation 459968065 Backup Group: Gravis's Cybernetics (Backup Group) 195206502 Backup - Council of All Things 5th Generation 283966477

Your book touches on the martial arts genre and is about the world of martial arts. Will you still stick to the old trope of "no cuckoldry, no martial arts"?

The sentences are too complicated; it's tiring to read.

Anyone who didn't know better would think you were a platinum-level expert, starting the purification process. But then I saw it was just level 1.

Chapter titles are also important; even a bad one is better than none.

Whether it's the setting or the writing, the update speed is just really bad...