Cultivation: Starting with the Yin Soldier Altar

I would call the author a real piece of crap. There's no one more crapped than you on Qidian. You have 16 books in total, most of which are over 1 million words, and many are 2 to 3 million words. Yet, even so, you're still a level 4 author. Every book you write gets criticized, but you keep writing. That's amazing.

Was this written by an AI studio? It's completely nonsensical, full of exclamation marks, with no plot development whatsoever. It's all filler, just inner monologues, pure self-indulgence.

You even set up a ghostly altar. It's been dozens of chapters, and the protagonist just gets a ghostly object from someone else. Have you forgotten what you wrote?

After practicing for so long, all I've managed is a hodgepodge, a complete mess! Nothing I'm supposed to do has gone smoothly, and I'm being chased around like a dog everywhere I go! It's all haphazard and disorganized!

A classic scam novel. It just keeps repeating the same thing over and over again to trick you into subscribing and then dragging out the plot.

Is this guy crazy? One minute he's increasing his cultivation level, but it's useless; he uses it to craft magical artifacts and raise ghosts. The next minute he's getting crushed by someone with a higher cultivation level. One minute he's using magic power, the next he's using the power to manipulate objects—it's all like batteries; once they're used up, his cultivation level is gone.

What is this? The author's writing is incoherent, repeating the same things over and over again. The protagonist is like an ungrateful scoundrel who is always surprised by everything he sees. How did the author manage to write hundreds of chapters of this?

This isn't just about the water; it's that the author hasn't found a clear goal. The protagonist is like duckweed, drifting with the current, without a clear objective, let alone taking action towards it. Take raising ghost soldiers, for example. Why not raise them properly? There's the Dream Demon Realm, with an endless supply of food, yet all they manage is a few dozen ghost soldiers.

Ideally, you should have it right from the start, rather than getting it only after a dozen or so chapters have passed and it's almost time for the game to be released. Otherwise, you're just fooling readers. People who clicked on your title and description are still just ordinary people even though your book is about to be published.

I can't even get past level 4 with 16 books, yet I dare to look at level 5.