The Soul of the Team

It's outrageous that someone without foreign citizenship can participate in another country's World Cup. Anyone with a brain knows it's impossible. The earlier writing was alright, but this time it's completely unrestrained and too presumptuous. No amount of money could FIFA possibly agree to that. The earlier high score for Cucumber was somewhat understandable given the lower league standings, but this later blunder just comes across as a bit mindless.

Online novels are now much more expensive than physical books, costing 0.9 Yuan per chapter. A 300-chapter novel can cost several hundred yuan.

I enjoyed reading it; I suggest changing the title to "The President of the All-Round Club" 🙂

Kikujiro Messi

Those who say that a 15-year-old pro is amazing, have they never watched football? Yamar was playing in La Liga at 16, his age wasn't even as old as his jersey number, and within two years he won the European Championship, the Copa del Rey, and even played in the Champions League, scoring goals. The protagonist, on the other hand, still needs more training.

A decent lineup, with star players of legendary caliber, and many veterans who have been playing for years, so their teamwork is good. They have tactical reserves ahead of their time. To force a team to finish last in the league is a gross underestimation of their true strength. This lineup could easily achieve a mid-table finish. I'm totally sold! I've booked them all.

The more enjoyable it was at the beginning, the more frustrating it becomes now. It's incredibly frustrating to watch. The team and players are quite strong, plus the protagonist has an overpowered ability. Can you believe the team is constantly hovering in the relegation zone? The way they're suppressing their strength is unbearable to watch. What a terrible plot! Too many people are complaining. There are constant complaints, but the author seems to be ignoring them, lost in their own world.

Putting everything else aside, the protagonist's physical abilities at the age of fourteen, playing in an adult league without being overwhelmed, are absolutely superhuman. Yet the author keeps emphasizing that scouts don't think highly of the protagonist's talent. From the author's perspective, it feels like the protagonist's performance in the story doesn't match the system data given by the author, and all the scouts can see the same system data for the protagonist.

The author has ruined his own career! He hasn't played a single game in the seventh-tier league (120,000 words), and the book might not even reach the professional level before it's published. He has to delay the release, otherwise subscriptions will plummet. There aren't many paid football readers to begin with, let alone amateur leagues or the English Third Division.

I've been reading novels for 10 years, and my eyesight has deteriorated from reading so much 😭. I've been reading football novels since 2020, and I only read about the players. Many football novels on the market today are mindlessly entertaining, driven by readers' desire for instant gratification.