Gao Wu: from Martial Arts Student to Star Emperor

The structural framework of the book is quite good, and the world view feels quite grand. However, the content written by the author is not very good. After reading about two hundred chapters, I feel that the author's writing ability has ruined the framework a bit. The protagonist has memories and experiences from his previous life. Either he must use up all his mechanisms and use everything he can to help him rise quickly, or he must live in a low life and develop slowly. In your writing, you covertly hide yourself while solving problems that others cannot solve. After that, others still treat you as an ordinary person. Do you think this setting is reasonable?

If you haven't written a novel, haven't you read a novel? Which book is written with such a grinding and eloquent account as yours? Just like others, pretend to be a Ninja Turtle again for a chapter or two. Isn't it uncomfortable for you to write it yourself? If it really doesn't work, can I ask how to write AI? Let AI give you an outline and a draft. Also, the title of this chapter is crazy. Why does a supporting character have to use a chapter name to introduce a chapter? How many chapters has this been... Listen to the voices of readers. There is a reason for so many people to criticize you. If you continue to write like this, this book can be abandoned.

I beg the author to update it quickly. It's really my daily spiritual food. I've been hungry for several days. 😭 I really like the calm and cold character of the male protagonist. It does feel like he has lived two lifetimes, unlike many male protagonists in rebirth novels on the market who look like a stupid teenager. Coupled with the campus theme and the vast starry sky background, I really like it!

There are so many monthly passes. Isn't it because the author doesn't give out any useful information? Is it because they have expired?

Update quickly, seek refinement

The beginning of this book is good... But the rebirth hangs like this... I really vomited. The most amazing setting of this book is that everyone can learn the exercises... As long as you learn the most powerful exercises. There is no such thing as a heaven-level or god-level exercise. Then the author may say that because he was a grand master before rebirth, everyone can learn it. But in the background, the grand master is the queen. A small character... So it proves one thing, there is no such thing as a skill that cannot be understood, everyone can learn it... This setting... Is really abstract to the point of being poisonous... And... The most ridiculous thing is that the protagonist is mentioned throughout the process as not having good qualifications, but why is he so powerful? It's because he learned the skills before he was reborn. Although his qualifications are not good, he can do awesome skills 🤭

The writing is good, but there are problems with the basic settings. The protagonist does not have particularly good talents. What he learned before his rebirth was not the high-end products of the Central Empire, but just too-a stuff. That is to say, the grade is not high enough and it is not good enough. In theory, the most it can do is bully those around it now, and it will still be scum after it gets out.

What is the story of the rebirth of a waste? A waste is a waste, and a reborn person is also a waste. When writing novels, don't write the protagonist according to your own template, okay? Look at other templates of protagonists that have been written well.

Is it possible to become the strongest by just relying on the training methods in the memory of the previous life? The protagonist's physique has not changed.

It's really funny. It took such a long time to prepare for the third level of qi and blood, but there is no climax in this aspect. I can't understand the author's writing logic.

Neither the basic skills nor the understanding are advanced, and there is no cheat to achieve permanent certification, but he can successfully practice the most awesome skills (I only knew about it but never practiced it in my previous life). This basic logic does not make sense, and the more I look at it, the more awkward it becomes.

I quite like the background of this book, but I feel like I really can't accept the plot, 😭😰

Horse, you have four legs, and the sea, you are full of water

As I write and write, my sister is gone and my girlfriend is gone.

At your rate, do you want to write tens of thousands of chapters? Forget it, you keep putting eye drops on the protagonist, and the protagonist is like a turtle (some people may wonder why it is called a turtle. For example, an unknown person suddenly splashes water on you, but you gently pick it up and put it down, and then once, twice, three or even a dozen times. The provocations are repeated so much that it is like a wild dog bites you just a few steps on the road. Sometimes you even tolerate it. Go, to others, he looks like an emotionless fool, like a fake person, and sometimes he looks like a madman, showing murderous intent in front of someone who can kill you with one hand, and suddenly wants to kill that woman. What about the tolerance at other times? I can't stand it, and I can't feel happy.) The patience of readers is limited. Once you start reading books, how many of them do you think can pick it up again?

The character of the younger sister is so disgusting. I have to pretend to be deaf and mute. It would be better if I just say it.

In the same realm, the energy value is high, but the energy value is low, but the energy value is low. I don't understand this logic.

Is this necessary to suppress the protagonist? In the realm of the ninth-level grandmaster in the previous life, even after being reborn and learning the martial arts of a blood stage, he can't compare with his peers, and those martial arts in the previous life don't exist. Fights will always be average, not to mention fighting with geniuses from the outer star realm, even fighting with the genius Laki on Blue Star, it will take hundreds or thousands of times. Together, even after tens of thousands of rounds, you try different ways to suppress the protagonist, and the way you write it, to put it nicely, it is micromanaging, to put it ugly, you don't know what the situation is, and you want to tell everything the protagonist did in one day. In reality, the corresponding day has passed for the protagonist, right? It is said that the protagonist will have a great opportunity to improve his qualifications. When will this happen? Next year, right?

I'm very curious. I don't dislike pretending to be a slap in the face. This is a routine from beginning to end and it's not appropriate. How can I persist to two million words? . .

This book should be renamed "Gao Wu, a waste reborn only to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger" It's 2026 and I'm still writing the same old routines from more than ten years ago. It's useless.

It's really speechless. The protagonist's various qualifications are suppressed. His basic skills and understanding are useless. He has always been a waste and is reborn as a chicken feather.

This novel feels so strange. It's clearly not well written, but it's all about showing off and hiding one's own strength. , The writing is not very good, but it still looks attractive.

Hurry up and explode, you will be angry when you see the protagonist acting so useless

Doesn't the author of this book read book reviews? There is no interaction at all! Is it time to give a reply? Why, do you plan to write 10,000 chapters for Earth, or do you plan to write hundreds of chapters for each Qi and Blood stage? Or maybe you haven't set up the rest yet.

The first few chapters are a bit too novice, and there are a lot of mindless plots. The Central Galactic Empire has only been established for more than 7,000 years. I haven't read the rest of it, so I won't comment on it. I will only talk about the first few chapters.

After reading the first two chapters, I feel that the logic is not quite right. Can anyone who has read a lot tell me if there is any improvement in the future? Or recommend some that you think look good 🙂

The protagonist is so useless and improves so slowly. Isn't it too cruel?

I have been suppressing my talent and don't want to watch it anymore. . . Did you change your destiny so many times without adding any talent? Why go against the will of God and change your fate? And that gave him a bloodline breakthrough of 16 times. Isn't that bloodline useless at all?

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Ji Lingxuan must be the number one heroine