From the Hundred Herbs Hall to the Immortal Lord of Ten Thousand Arts

Why change tracks? There is a huge market in the heavens.

No more writing fanfics? Does the original have traffic? ? ?

I support the author, but this kind of article usually doesn't become popular until it reaches at least 1 million words. I usually add bookshelf first, and then start reading when I have saved 2 million words. The later period is when the readers are the most, so keep going.

It has many advantages: the writing is simple and the language is refined and restrained. The shortcomings are not many, but they are outstanding. After writing for so long, the scene is still only in the county town. This is outrageous because a martial arts practitioner can have the background of a big family in the county. The protagonist is a master of cooking meat, but his understanding of the world is still only in one county. Of course, it is possible that the author deliberately wrote this and focused on the county town, but the reader's perspective is synchronized with the protagonist, which shows that the protagonist has no desire to explore the world and is like a blind man practicing boxing alone in the dark. The author's writing is very restrained, and the plot is also very restrained. If you can be patient, you must not be arrogant, and the world view is not expanded at all. Currently, we only know that there is a three thousand year old immortal in this country. The rest is entirely about practicing martial arts, finding resources, practicing martial arts, revenge, practicing martial arts, and accompanying the various life styles around you. It feels like it is too restrained. The author focuses too much on rationality and lacks the excitement of the protagonist when writing fan fiction. The writing is also restrained, and the plot is also restrained. The result is that it is uneventful and not interesting enough. It should be a fantasy world, right? But I feel that the author is afraid that after writing some fantasy things, it will not be able to integrate with the current atmosphere of practical martial arts training, so only some medicinal materials have some mysterious effects. Both people and ferocious beasts are very simple. But it's already eighty or ninety chapters. It's still the same rhythm after it was released. The world is still lifeless. I thought there would be some plot after I was admitted to the martial arts school, but I still practiced martial arts, practiced martial arts, practiced martial arts. Except for the writing skills, this book is really nothing like the previous one. I feel like the author wants to write something new, but he can't just write about martial arts training, right? There is also a lot of space focused on the people around you, but it is obvious that the people around you can't keep up with the pace of the protagonist, and everyone is an admirer in the end. Look at when people were writing Zhe Tian, ​​the wicked Taoist who just appeared was not too bad in the finale. Pang Bo Da Yue and those classmates were not too far behind in the middle period. The Kowloon Coffin that appeared at the beginning, the Eastern Wasteland Forbidden Land, and the major holy places, the finale was all good. But these supporting characters you wrote, and Blackwater County, will never be mentioned again after two hundred chapters. Even the martial arts differences you practice now will be covered by more advanced martial arts differences again and again in the future. Throw everything away after writing it down. It's just a pure upgrade flow, and it becomes a running account. Now I read this novel which is somewhat interesting, but after this kind of upgrade coverage has appeared, it will not be interesting if it continues like this later. What you have laid the groundwork for now is only the dead tree breathing out the Dharma and the great immortals. This is too little. You have to write something to attract people's hearts. If I don't read your novel now, I may forget it after a while. The next time I see this book on the bookshelf, I may have forgotten the plot. If I am bored, I will open it and read it. If there are other novels to read, who would read a novel that I have almost forgotten? Thousands of words are condensed into one sentence. You have to write something attractive. Keep laying it out in a reasonable manner. You feel that you have made no mistakes, so you have no regrets. However, for readers, the purification effect is very strong.

Will you kill all your destitute neighbors and use some magic skills to refine them instantly?

The plot of Shen Nong's Personal Taste has no poisonous points and is very smooth to watch. Judging from the current 50 chapters, I personally feel that it is at least a high-quality one.

I hope you won't be forced to level up, and your combat power will be improved when it needs to be. You can read novels of the same type to avoid some poisonous points. 1 Don't have a vulgar plot where the protagonist can pass the sect's standards, but others look down on the protagonist because of his poor character. 2 If you enter the sect, all the disgusting people in the sect will run away when they should, and come back to take revenge after reaching a certain height. 3 Don't be assimilated into feudal society. It does not mean that everyone must be equal, but that everyone must be treated as an individual.

It's well written, and there are a lot of normal people in the comment section, unlike the unnatural creatures I've seen in other novel sections.

Half Immortal Grass, the plot direction is not cliché and the pace is good.

I hope the heroine is a weapon spirit or something who can accompany her until the end

It won't be popular if you don't show off and slap in the face.

Good. It is indeed more enjoyable to read this kind of book in one sitting. It's probably more than 500 uniformly now? Hold on, don't cut it.

From Baicao Garden to Sanwei Bookstore🙂

Happy grudges, The revenge has been avenged, it's very satisfying, just kill. It depends on the various favors reported later, so that the characters will be full-bodied, and the protagonist should not be Tang San. , Then practice bow and arrow fiercely. Many novels like to kill at close quarters, but the advantages of long-range weapons are much more exciting than close quarters. . Then there is also a patch on the armor. In ancient times, hunters all wore leather armor. There is no reason why we don't have any armor now. . But this patch is easy to apply. The imperial court has never indulged in armor. …

Please put it on the shelves as soon as possible, the update is too slow and it is not enjoyable to watch.

The first few chapters are very homogeneous, but the rest of the chapters are pretty good.

Old routine, but the quantity is large and interesting. Looking forward to the follow-up.

The story is good. Among the recent fantasy novels, they are among the novels worth reading. Recommend!

Hurry up and update! Why are they all about training? I want to see pretending to be slapped in the face.

Only three chapters on the shelves? I gave you a monthly pass. Please update soon.

Fang Jiao's second life has profound skills.

Now I'm reading a book, pick and choose, but this one, I read more than 30 chapters in one go, please update soon.

Just for the name of this technique, it's okay

Come on author, the writing is very good😃😃