The Starry Sea Ablaze

In terms of its setting, this book is well written, and it improves very quickly even before it starts. However, the design of the entire background is too abstract. Does an interstellar-level empire still use people to mine minerals? You come to join the army, and it's a war period. Even if you say you don't have time to train, you train on the way to the flight. If the army is already at war, why can't you even provide the most basic resources? And that's too cruel. Written like that, I don't feel like the human social army, but like the devil's army, where the weak eat the strong and the fittest survive. There is no teamwork, no brotherhood, and no military back-to-back. I can block the gun for you, you can live your life for me, the comrades-in-arms friendship, a small test can seriously injure the opponent, and the fight will have no future. You can say that talented people, or people who make rapid progress, invest more resources and focus on training, which is not to say that they will be eliminated for ordinary people. Then the warehouse still needs people, and with the cruelty at the beginning, what kind of society is it, then who will join the army? It was originally said that he was going to join the war, and life and death were unpredictable. It was almost over before he even reached the battlefield, so who could join the army? Moreover, the protagonist is a descendant of a martyr, and his life was miserable. Generally speaking, if you look at it according to his logic, the writing is okay, but you have to jump out of this logic, but there are loopholes everywhere. What's wrong with you? Conduct training on the march and then tell them that the mortality rate is high when they go into battle. If you don't work hard, you will be just cannon fodder, and then directly eliminate the fittest on the battlefield, which is better than eliminating yourself, or if you eliminate the unusable ones before recruiting them, then the recruit itself will not be good, and the whole row will be good if he comes, but the guy who is not good will have his bones broken and he will have to suck two gulps of oil.

It's too much for a civilization at the level of the Galaxy to fight hand-to-hand.

Who is writing books now? High school student? Or are we old bookworms too cunning??

Logically speaking, shouldn't martial arts be popularized by all people from an early age? Why did you start teaching after you joined the army?

The writing is pretty bad. The loser enjoys the blessing and can live to old age in the logistics department, while the winner goes to the front line to be cannon fodder. Quite speechless. How to say it. The writing is quite rubbish, it should be an AI article, many settings are unreasonable, interstellar era, big brother. There is no need for so many cannon fodder. And in this interstellar age, how can I put it, even in our era, ordinary people filling in the lines will not be of much use. Only very chaotic and backward areas need ordinary people. Line-filling

I want to see interstellar soldiers fighting, not recruits competing, veterans competing, teams competing, legions competing, and I'm still competing now

The author is prescribing a super birth rate for human beings. Based on the background setting of the first few chapters, humans are not extinct. They are really at the level of a conceptual monster race. One child must give birth to at least 200 people. Otherwise, how could it be possible to withstand the consumption of such background and go on the Great Expedition? It's so funny. In the interstellar era, manpower is still used for mining. Is it written by a female author? Do you still think your background setting is awesome?

You said that I can accept the eliminated ones being used as breeding pigs to give birth to children. Are you telling me that the eliminated ones should be used for mining? Human mining? Interstellar era? Can machines be used for this productivity? Really outrageous

In the petty world of StarCraft, recruiting soldiers is like recruiting mercenaries. In a high-frequency war environment, the protagonist feels like a person who has not received relevant war education at all. After a ridiculous three-month training period, he is thrown into the battlefield as a fill-in baby. Don't emphasize the sacrifice of the protagonist's parents. This environment in the article does not need to be emphasized, and it is of no benefit. The whole thing is like a recruitment system in the feudal era, and even more feudal in some aspects than in ancient times. After reading seven chapters, I couldn't help but complain. This is also the first time I have complained about a book.

Ordinary grass, forget it, ordinary grass is not even considered, half step of ordinary grass, rotten grass extreme peak perfection, bibibibibibi, I have written almost a hundred pictures and still bibibibibibibibibi, if it doesn't work, please set up a paid plot quickly, don't bibibibibibibi here, and then every bibibibibibi is a classic scene; Ah, I want to burn my will, burn my potential, ah, I stand up again, you can't kill me. Opponent: I want to crush you, I don't believe I can't defeat you, I recognize you It sucks