Proving the Dao and Becoming a Saint in the Primordial Game

Have you ever cultivated immortality? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.

The author is completely uncooperative, insisting on including Chu Xinyue. It's not that Chu Xinyue is disgusting or anything, but this writing style is very abrupt. The leveling-up story was going well, but it turned into a harem story. Anyway, I can't accept it, so I'm dropping it. I don't need this one more book. 🙄

It's a bit like provisions laced with poison. It looks interesting and makes you want to keep reading, but then you get annoyed by the protagonist's clownish antics. I don't know if it's the author's lack of consideration and intermittent lapses in judgment, or if the studio's details just don't add up.

If you can't write romance, don't write it. One side pretends to be faithful, the other side starts cheating. 6

I'm afraid if I don't tell you, you'll rack your brains and still not figure out why nobody reads it. 1. The core of data flow is not about the number of words, but about the ability to intuitively compare the strength of data, thus bypassing the constraints of writing style and most worldviews. 2. Your character's stats are purely numerical, but never actually demonstrated.

I've been following this story since it started with a few hundred or so scattered investors, and I've continued to follow it after it was released. Overall, the writing style, plot design, and overall quality are all good, and the pacing is excellent. While the pacing sometimes feels a bit weak, it's well-controlled. Objectively speaking, it's a very good online novel.

Selling a demon core dropped by a level 100+ boss for five gold coins? Are you kidding me?

Ah, Phoenix, how cruel you are! You're sacrificing yourself after only a dozen chapters?

Don't write female-oriented content for game novels. Even a closed-door sect trial would be fine, but look at this rubbish design! Fawning over a sect is still flaming, and simp novels never end well. I advise the author to be kind.

This cheat ability could be used for so many things, even side hustles, why does it have to be swords? It's disgusting. Does cultivating immortality have to be tied to a sword these days? Why not try weapon crafting, alchemy, or anything else? And with such high Taoist magic bonuses, why not explore those? Why be obsessed with swords?