Ornn Is the Chosen One: A Treasure from the Ancient Age!

Chapter 22 is well-written, but the character development is poor. The author consistently downplays Sejuani's role. Ashe's success in developing her tribe and overcoming adversity is commendable, while Sejuani's raiding and supporting her tribe is unacceptable. The author has the protagonist standing on a moral high ground, constantly pointing fingers and giving unsolicited advice.

I thought you were the entire tribe, both blacksmith and warrior, but so far you've just been following the crowd, padding the numbers, and the protagonist is like a camera.

In a battle of wits, he was clearly prescient and insightful, yet he couldn't even come up with a development plan. Did his brain get crushed on an anvil? The protagonist's fighting skills are like something out of a typical female-oriented novel. He's invincible, awesome, and incredibly powerful, and then he starts participating in a hair-pulling contest, ultimately winning last place.

What I found most unsettling was that the protagonist was preparing to sell the weapon he, a Chosen One, forged from cold iron, to Noxus for the price of five loaves of bread, while Sejuani and Udyr beside him looked on in shock, thinking the protagonist was incredibly clever. 😅

Um, the protagonist is a transmigrator. From what I've seen so far, everything he's created is equipment from the game League of Legends—weapons and equipment that already exist in his own world. I'm wondering if there will be anything else later on? For example, the protagonist using his skills to recreate other games, equipment, and weapons from other worlds.

Are you trash? You are Orn's chosen one, the last descendant of Hearth Village, yet you don't even have the courage to raise a weapon against those who insult you. You are utter trash.

Later on, they basically abandoned forging and went into politics. Did I read this book to learn how to do politics?

I can roughly guess that the author is acting like a spectator to keep the plot from straying too far, but honestly, isn't the protagonist just like the camera, as some other friends have said...? Given the protagonist's blacksmithing abilities, helping to build greenhouses should be a viable option. That would solve some of the food problem, making other issues minor.

You should consider a different career; writing books isn't for you.

Coming from the previous book, it occasionally throws in some toxic moments for self-indulgent sentimentality; the protagonist is purely a tool to drive the plot.