A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: You Have the Heaven-Palm Bottle, I Have Gaode Maps

Learning from the old demon is fine, using cheats is also acceptable. Your updates are good and don't have any major flaws, just minor inconsistencies are minor. But, but, but What kind of rubbish have you been updating lately? Several times you've inexplicably tried to kill people and steal the bottle.

Han Li himself is actually quite decent; you can be friends with him if you write fanfiction, but killing him would really damage his popularity.

Sometimes, licking Nangong Wan's boots is like being a simp. Even secondhand items are licked Difficult Clam

This is absolutely toxic! They're using thousand-year-old spiritual herbs as consumables, giving you a pill formula and you start refining pills, then anyone can easily refine a Foundation Establishment pill! They don't even care about the type of spiritual herb; it's just a thousand-year-old formula. They've released so much toxic content in just one or two chapters.

It's absurd to expect someone like the Great Evolution Divine Lord, who hasn't even reached the Nascent Soul stage, to help deduce the cultivation technique without practicing the Brahma Saint True Demon Art. This dual cultivation technique, which leads directly to the Mahayana stage, is practically the pinnacle of the spirit world, except for the inability to cultivate a true ultimate body.

The series went completely off track later on. The various minor poisons at the beginning were bad enough, but then came the clone poison. The protagonist's second nascent soul gained its own consciousness, yet instead of immediately destroying it, he let it roam free.

It's a pretty good novel for fanfiction, but its only flaw is that it has too much of a modern, loser vibe and doesn't have the temperament that cultivators should have. If even someone like Nangong Wan, who has already been used by Han Li, is so eager to please, then the others are even more likely to be.

Few of the fanfictions featuring Nangong are worth reading. She's just a supporting female lead; why would anyone bother including her? Don't give me that bullshit immortal realm nonsense. Whether there's an immortal realm or not, I still don't like Nangong as the female lead. All the other female characters are better than her. I can't stand any fanfiction that includes her.

I just don't understand. Isn't the Great Jin Immortal Cultivation Holy Land better than the Chaotic Star Sea? They've already come to the Great Jin, why don't they cultivate properly and instead insist on finding the teleportation array to the Chaotic Star Sea? Some people are incredibly foolish.

I won't read any fanfiction that involves stealing bottles, stealing women, or killing Han Li; it's like smashing the pot while eating.