A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: What to Do with Unused Treasures? List Them on Zhuanzhuan

Your previous book on Gaode Maps had quite a few problematic aspects, so be careful with this one. First, the protagonist needs to have some brains, not act like a lunatic. Second, regarding his relationship with Han Li, he shouldn't fawn over him nor be too hostile.

Women, if you're going to eat, eat from the first hand, don't be like you in the last book, eating from the second hand with relish. Also, don't be too clumsy, otherwise I'll end up like you, running away halfway through reading the last book.

Author, the essence of your "golden finger" is actually unequal exchange, so the protagonist's thinking should be more open. This golden finger should not only use spirit stones (crystals containing spiritual energy) to exchange for things, but also its own magical power, essence blood, or possessed spiritual objects such as spiritual herbs, demon beast flesh and blood cores, spiritual ores, and…

This is the book with the most nonsense and the most rambling I've ever read. It spends all day explaining this and that. Are you trying to popularize your values ​​or explain how difficult your martial arts are to practice?

All I can say is, the protagonist is a complete idiot, afraid of this and afraid of that. He doesn't even dare to snatch one of Han Li's many opportunities. Having such an idiotic protagonist is truly speechless. If he's so afraid of cultivation, why bother? Wouldn't it be better to just be a dog?

It still has the same bad habits as that Gaode book: the protagonist is brainless and talks too much nonsense.

Incredible cheat code plus insane pressure on cultivation level

Nangong Wan was already pushing herself to the limit by picking up a Qi Refining cultivator's storage bag, let alone guarding the corpse? Is she crazy?

First, they'll talk about how awesome it is, then explain the limitations. Whether it's a cheat or not, the rest of the explanation follows the same pattern of narration regarding techniques and weapons.

When will the protagonist finally resolve this cultivation technique? The technique consumes a lot of resources, the cultivation speed is slow, and problems arise frequently, even endangering his life. The resources the protagonist has used are enough for more than a dozen three-elemental root cultivators to form their cores.