Primordial Infrastructure Maniac

The advantages of the Western ley lines' design are absurd. If they're so easy to repair, wouldn't it be a piece of cake for Hongjun? According to your design, what karmic debt is still owed? It's a bit too casual.

This millet has degenerated way too quickly. If it could degenerate into a common plant in the early prehistoric times, how far would it degenerate later? Would it even be able to support humans anymore?

The simplistic depiction of the prehistoric era is likely to deter readers. Other prehistoric eras are written in units of "yuanhui" or "ten thousand years," but in this book, the author manages to dredge the western earth's veins and cultivate fruit trees from peaches of immortality in just a few decades—this feels very jarring and out of place.

Why is it that with so much merit bestowed upon him, even the two Amitabha Buddhas, Jieyin and Zhunti, became saints due to part of the karmic cause and effect in the West? You say his merits are immeasurable, but now even demons and monsters can attack the protagonist. He's completely lost his dignity! 😳😳😳😳

You think you can repair the ley lines that even the two Western Saints couldn't? You're even more powerful than Hongjun! 😥

The conflict felt too contrived, and the villains were forced into the role. It was too stereotypical and formulaic.

Transmigrated and still working, with an innate divine body like an ox or horse, right?

The author's writing skills are limited; they always seem to rely on describing the male protagonist's inner thoughts, often using a question-and-answer format. It's as if they're afraid readers will misunderstand the protagonist's views on certain matters. This kind of writing style for online novels is truly disgusting. The pretentious teacher-like manner is utterly repulsive.

I took a look, and oh my god! That Styx cultivator is like a Tribulation Cultivator, just grabbing things as soon as he appears. It's outrageous! In the primordial world, cause and effect are paramount. The higher the level, the more cautious one is at birth, always well-prepared, with only one chance, and even then, it must be justified. To portray Styx as a Tribulation Cultivator is absurd.

The logic is flawed. You claim to be logically consistent in targeting both the Witch Clan and the Demon Clan, but can't you examine your own actions? Since the mainstream is the law of the jungle, why pretend to be a good person? Who are you trying to disgust? Either you endure it, or you try to control everything.