
Myriad Worlds: The Elixir of Immortality from the Start
诸天开局长生药
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- 1.4M Words
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- Myriad Worlds
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- 4y ago
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It's frustrating to watch, just talk about people's life experiences casually, and then people die because of this, they just cry for a while, and then they are gone. Why don't you kill the person who was the trigger of this matter? And why didn't the protagonist kill those people who shot at you before? Scared? Not a good thing? Why doesn't the protagonist dare to kill?
The three options in the introduction are not necessary at all, just the longevity medicine. The reason is very simple. The three options do not match at all. Originally, choosing one of the different options only makes sense when several different options have equal value. Just the three in the introduction? ? ? ? ? One is gold, one requires becoming a eunuch. I don't know if you can practice martial arts, and one is elixir. It is obvious that there is only one option for elixir. Which of the other two can compare with elixir! ! ! ! !
It's really unbearable. In troubled times, bringing a top brothel back to Renjia Town to tell others about her life experience? A woman opened a breakfast shop in troubled times. The author was definitely trying to protect her, but as soon as she opened the breakfast shop, the other person was killed. In the end, the protagonist was even more powerful and killed the minions, but the mastermind behind it was left alone? While writing about how powerful the protagonist is, the Virgin is not good at it. Is it so vicious?
Yuniang I feel a little uncomfortable. I'm embarrassed to say it.
The writing in this book is really great. It is well written like this. At the beginning, there were three options for traveling through time. I felt that it was really unnecessary. I just gave him a longevity potion. Then, the system gave rewards to people who were killed. Then, they gave me a meritorious Buddhist golden body when I saved people. The skills and so on were so bad. I thought I was looking for skills to cultivate immortality in the mission world, and then traveled through these. Forget about the rest, it's not a big deal. The key is that the story about the beautiful girl is really disgusting. I thought she was an important character, but she was killed. The protagonist sucked the host to death. I don't care about the other accomplices. And Ren Tingting was also written. She looked like shit, with a wry smile on her face, and she was sadistic. She can fuck her whenever she wants, or just let her go if she doesn't want to. Then what? Then a woman came along. Why are you writing this? Is it necessary?
Times are progressing, and books are also progressing. Nowadays, old-fashioned plots can no longer be fooled. Looking at it now, it is a big poison. Authors must learn to adapt to the times. Reading books now depends on IQ. If this book has no IQ, who will read it? Don't write those old plots just because you want more words. Not many people will read it.
I feel very uncomfortable seeing this, Yu Niang. Do you want to do all kinds of messy things for him?
I have to say that among the books that have been published recently, the one who most wants to drag out the author and beat him up
I don't know what you wanted to do when you wrote the plot of Yu Niang? If you want to express the cruelty of society, it's not like we don't understand it. We are such grown-up people, so why do you have to express it to us? Does it have any educational significance? Reading novels is just for fun. I saw a picture before and you answered, "What do you mean to express the cruelty of society?" We want to see the cruelty of society, so come here and read novels. There are history books specifically describing this aspect. You don't need to explain it to us. It's disgusting, right? One thing to say, I think your writing is pretty good. It expresses the cruelty of society. You have to understand that what you write is a novel. You are not required to cater to readers in all aspects, but you do not want to disgust them.
The elixir of life, while making you live forever, should also be able to cure your diseases, otherwise the elixir of life would be too useless.