Myriad Worlds: The Elixir of Immortality from the Start

It was so frustrating to watch. They just randomly revealed someone's background, and then that person died because of it. All they did was cry a little, and that was it. Why didn't they kill the person who started this whole thing? And why didn't the protagonist kill those people who shot at him earlier? Was he scared? They weren't good people at all. Why didn't the protagonist dare to kill them?

The three options in the description are completely unnecessary; just choose the elixir of immortality. The reason is simple: the three options are mismatched. Choosing one of several options only makes sense when they are of equal value. But the description presents three options: one is gold, another requires becoming a eunuch (and even then, it's uncertain if you can master the martial arts)…

It's unbearable! In a chaotic world, the author brings a top courtesan from a brothel back to Renjia Town and tells others about her background? In a chaotic world, a woman opens a breakfast shop, and the author is clearly protecting her, but she's killed right after she opens the shop. Then the protagonist is even more powerful, killing the henchmen, and the mastermind is ignored?

Yu Niang I feel a little uncomfortable saying what I said, and I'm embarrassed to say it.

This book is truly amazing. It's a perfectly good story, but it's turned into this mess. The initial three options for transmigrating felt completely unnecessary; why not just give an elixir of immortality directly? Then, killing someone gives you a reward, saving someone gives you a Buddhist golden body of merit, and cultivation techniques are just commonplace.

Times are changing, and so are books. Old clichés no longer work. They're now considered major flaws. Authors need to adapt to the times. Nowadays, people read books based on intelligence. If a book doesn't have a certain level of intelligence, who will read it? Don't write those old plots just to increase the word count; not many people will read them.

I find Yu Niang's behavior very uncomfortable. Why does she have to involve him in all sorts of messy things?

I have to say, of all the books I've come across recently, the ones whose authors I most want to drag out and beat up are...

Regarding the Yu Niang plot, I don't know what you were trying to achieve by writing it. Are you trying to express the cruelty of society? We're not unaware of that; we're all adults. What's the point of showing us this? What educational value does it have? Reading novels is for enjoyment. I saw a previous answer where you said you wanted to express the cruelty of society?

An elixir of immortality, while granting you eternal life, should also cure your illness, otherwise it would be a useless elixir.