Primordial Creation

Don't mind if I talk about the author casually here. The author lacks consideration in many aspects. It's okay to read, but it won't be right after reading it a few times. It's not delicate enough. And how big the heart is, how big the prehistoric times are. You, the author, did it, but it was a bit far-fetched. There was no good transition between the two major events. The author should write in a detailed and appropriate way, rather than being indifferent and having too many supporting roles. It's best to summarize it in two or three sentences, as long as it doesn't affect the main body of the novel. I feel that sometimes the article is very redundant. Why do we have to describe it in detail when we can obviously omit it? Moreover, the description of the characters' personalities and qualities is lacking. I hope the author can improve. We book friends have seen the author's great perseverance and hard work, and I support the author. ❤️

At the beginning, when the protagonist is in the fragments of the Jade Certificate of Creation, the description of the space is only a huge and boundless space, filled with gray air currents, and white light flashing in the sky. So the question is, what is the protagonist's state in space? Is he floating in the air or standing on the ground? If it's floating in the air, why sit cross-legged? Isn't it tiring? If you are standing on the earth, there are no words to describe the earth. It's even more ridiculous for the protagonist to find out that he has become bigger. There is no reference. If he refers to himself, how can he find that he has become bigger? The protagonist went out to look for treasures, and all the "innate spiritual jade" that "jumped out of the ground" and "hidden in the ground were found." It is said that at this time, chaos has not yet opened, and the world has not yet been judged. Where did the earth come from? Pangu was a giant one hundred thousand feet tall. How do you define this one hundred thousand feet? In ancient times, people defined the distance from the extended thumb to the middle finger as chi, and later defined the distance from the wrist to the elbow as chi. Units of length such as dimensions and feet are all defined. The protagonist is a soul traveler. There are no familiar things in the void from his previous life. How to judge the length? Use yourself as a measure? Okay, the horn itself can now become larger or smaller. All in all, there is no reference.

This novel is really bad, the worst I have ever seen. Zhen Yuanzi was born before the First Tribulation of the Long Han Dynasty, Yun Xiao transformed into the Lich clan before the Lich clan appeared, and Kong Xuan and Hong Yun are the most rubbish prehistoric novels in history. I just wrote it before I even understood it.

As soon as she met a good thing, Zhujiao's sister wanted it, but when she refused to give it, she either frowned or frowned, looked unhappy, and couldn't even act coquettishly. When she met monsters at first, she either killed them or ate them. Later, after being persuaded by the protagonist, she just disabled them. The prehistoric era was so chaotic, it was really no different from being dead. As soon as there is a hard investigation, move the protagonist out and let the protagonist clean up. It was really disgusting to watch, and it would be even more disgusting if the actions of some playboys with their names (Shui Bingling, Lingling) matched her.

At the beginning, my brother and sister couldn't bear it anymore

This is a standard white text, and the author doesn't even have any basic common sense.

Why do I feel like reading the sea when reading your novels? All novels! ! ! !

I just want to ask in which chapter does that Shui Bingling thing die? If you don't die, bye bye

Since you can beat Hongjun, why not kill Hongjun to take revenge? At least Hongjun should be forced to swear an oath that Hongjun will not come out if the prehistoric era is not destroyed. Otherwise, what kind of talk about Xiaoyao Xian! ! ! ! There are many books written about lichs in the ancient world. Even if they have the ability, they still see the ancient world shattered. This book in particular is the most disgusting. The female villain was killed by someone. She has the ability to take revenge but does not take revenge. She lives alone and sulks. Isn't the author looking for death?

The whole book was ruined by that idiot Ice Spirit