Journey to the West Begins with the Immortal Qin

I've read four chapters, and it's all internal monologues. Time to go.

Why can't they limit their acting roles and focus more on developing their own storylines?

The first time I read a novel, I saw a protagonist—an ordinary person with no cultivation—disdainful of the ways of this sage and the methods of that sage. He wanted to forge his own path without any prior cultivation. It's like a college student preparing to start a business criticizing the success of Asia's richest man, thinking it will block his own path to becoming the world's richest man.

The phrase "cause and effect" is killing me!!! I'm outta here, anyone who reads this book will owe the author a debt of karma!

This is really poorly written. Can't you write properly? If you can't write, then don't write.

Pure AI-generated writing, devoid of any thought, is honestly incredibly stupid; it doesn't read or edit at all.

There are just too many typos, I can't stand reading it anymore. The author doesn't even bother to correct them. There's definitely too much internal monologue, and it's too drawn out.

It feels like I've been outsmarting thin air for far too long.

Damn it, my left and right brains are constantly fighting each other.

What rubbish! The same sentence is repeated over and over again. After reading just two chapters, I could tell the protagonist has a ton of internal monologues, and it's all so weak. Then it brings up the cultivation techniques in the novel—tell me, what specific cultivation methods are there in the novel… and then suddenly… I just don't understand.