Awakening in Swallowed Star

I'll be fine if I'm full. What's the use of keeping a mystery about one's life experience? The strongest person on Earth is Hong, and those Alliance families are nothing in terms of resources. Shamelessly asking a strong person to help the family even though they have nothing to do, they are just dragging their feet. If you come up with an extraterrestrial life experience, I will obey you. We need resources, we need secrets, we need secrets, we need secrets that can help the protagonist grow quickly, but families like these on Earth are just a burden and have an awkward image.

The earth is trained by the Mountain Rider, and the plot starts with the final say of Hong Lei Shen. Please don't add any background. In China, only Jia Yi is the strongest. Don't say anything about hiding. No matter how strong you are, you can't develop anything online. The earth has been destroyed. Don't say anything, let alone think about any special life. What the Mountain Rider wants is the soul. He can't give you too powerful adventures. So if the author can write about the feelings of protecting the family and the country in the end of the world, it's okay. If you can't write it, contact the universe. As long as you don't deviate from the big setting, no one will care about you.

To summarize some of the problems we have seen so far in this book: The male protagonist has obviously been practicing in the wilderness area for so long, but because he ate a spirit of vegetation, he took off his clothes and took an underwater bath in the wilderness area without any weapons. It was as if he had lost his mind. And you have the spirit of grass and trees, why don't you just eat them all and increase your strength to the limit. You said you want to leave some for your companions and wife to eat. I understand, then you should at least eat it until you can't absorb it. If you leave so much, your strength has not been increased to the limit. If something unexpected happens and the things are lost, it will be a big loss. And why do you have to write about a family? A family on earth will not be of any help to you after you go to the universe. On the contrary, it will add many uncertain factors to you. People in the family cannot beat you, but in order to force you to do certain things, they can take away your children and wife. What should you do at that time? (If it involves the necessary plot later, I didn't say it) And sometimes there are too many swear words, which makes it look funny and unnecessary. And the character of the male protagonist is not very clear. The male protagonist is an orphan. He grew up alone. Now he has a wife and children, so he should be more cautious in doing things. As a result, he challenged a good congressman for a brother. I know he wanted to be angry, but couldn't he wait until he broke through to the planet level before fighting? I have to let the whole world know that I am a God of War and that I can beat planets. Is there any benefit? Let the villains all over the world be afraid of you. If they fail to win over you, they will want to get rid of you. If they can't defeat you, they will target your family, just like Li Wei's parents in the original work. Even if your wife is also a warrior, your son is not. Your son cannot be protected 24 hours a day. There are too many ways to kill the male protagonist's son, such as car accidents, fires, robberies, bombs, so it is better not to be exposed at all and wait until he becomes a planet to seek shelter from Hong or others.

The logic is a bit contradictory. From the previous chapters, it can be said that the child was poisoned, and the protagonist was in a burning state. However, after finding the detoxifying plant spirit "Lotus Seed", he did not go back to detoxify immediately. Instead, he stayed to fight against the king-level monster and exercise his body skills. I was also drunk. I shouldn't have gone back to detoxify first. Do I come back when I have time? Judging from this behavior, the protagonist is not in a hurry at all, and he is not very concerned about the safety of the child, because he has just broken through the planet level. In theory, it is risky to fight against the planet level 2, and it is not safe to go to the wilderness. Who knows if other monsters or people will come to snatch it. After all, there is another group of people who are also looking for this plant spirit.

Hammer, in fact, the essence lies in the Earth chapter. I think Earth should be written well. Now that we have entered the universe, it is actually not that important.

After reading more than seventy chapters, the protagonist is like a child. He does whatever comes to his mind without considering the consequences. He cannot withstand any setbacks. His key emotional intelligence is also low, and he has no sense of authority.

I used to like to complain about the Qidian Orphanage when I read books, but now I find that everyone writes about the orphanage and there is indeed a reason for it.

It's really ridiculous. I've written dozens of novels about orphans, but I have to write about parents, siblings, and a foreigner. And then, that's not enough. I want to write about my own child being poisoned at birth. I really don't understand how you can write a cultivation novel more like a romance novel?

The world of Swallowed Starry Sky looks very, very big, but it cannot accommodate the second cultivation system that is separated from the ten principles.

You're just kidding, children born from intermarriages within the four divine beast families are born with soul mutations? Do you think there are so many four divine beast families in hell that there is no intermarriage within the clan? It's too ridiculous for you to mass-produce soul mutations of four series. Mass production of Hongmeng controllers, right?