Awakening in Swallowed Star

What's the point of this whole "mystery of origin" nonsense? The strongest on Earth is Hong; in terms of resources, those alliance families are nothing. They have nothing, yet shamelessly demand the help of the strong—they're just a burden to their families. If you could create an origin story from outside Earth, I'd be impressed.

Earth was created by the Mountain-Sitting Hermit, and the initial plot was dictated by Hong Leishen. Please don't add any background information. In China, only Jia Yi is the strongest; don't talk about hidden strengths. Even the strongest has a limit and can't develop much further.

To summarize some of the issues I've observed so far with this book: The male protagonist had been training in the wilderness for so long, but after eating a plant spirit, he stripped naked and took a bath underwater in the wilderness without any weapons, acting as if he had lost his mind.

The logic is somewhat contradictory. The previous chapters show the child is poisoned, and the protagonist is frantic with worry. But after finding the antidote, the plant spirit "Lotus Seed," instead of immediately returning to detoxify, he stays to fight a King-level monster and hone his skills. I'm speechless. Shouldn't he have gone back to detoxify first and come back later?

The essence of the hammer is actually in the Earth chapters. I think Earth should have been the one written well. After entering space, the Earth chapters are not that important.

After reading over seventy chapters, the protagonist is like a child, doing whatever comes to mind without considering the consequences, unable to withstand even the slightest setback, and crucially, lacking emotional intelligence and any sense of shrewdness.

I used to love criticizing orphanages on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform), but now I realize there's a reason why so many people write about orphanages.

It's so melodramatic. The orphan was fine, and after dozens of chapters, they had to add parents and siblings, who were all foreigners. And that wasn't enough, they had to write that their child was poisoned at birth. I really don't understand how a cultivation novel could be written like a romance novel.

The world of Swallowed Star appears extremely vast, but it cannot accommodate a second cultivation system that deviates from the Ten Great Laws.

You're talking nonsense. Children born from intermarriage within the Four Divine Beasts families are born with mutated souls? Do you think there aren't any intermarriages within the Four Divine Beasts families in Hell? Your idea of ​​mass-producing four-elemental soul mutants is ridiculous. Are you mass-producing Primordial Chaos Controllers?