Cultivating Immortality, I Can Travel Through Different Worlds

The previous writing is indeed very good, but there are also many flaws. First of all, the two worlds have not returned to the earth. It has a bit of a night walk in brocade. It is a cool article, just to show off in front of classmates, teachers, relatives and friends, right? Secondly, the logic is a bit confusing and the jump span is a bit too big. Overall, it should be a very good work among the best. But it started to fool people after it was put on the shelves. I have seen 96 chapters so far. I feel like calling him trash is insulting trash.

The protagonist is able to cross several worlds and smuggle resources from several worlds, which greatly improves his qualifications. By smuggling several worlds, a sect can easily develop, let alone a personal lack of resources. Now those transnational smugglers will be short of money, not to mention that the protagonist is smuggling from several worlds. It is difficult for the author to write like this.

The previous writing is quite good, but the plot of Hehuan Sect is pure shit, with inexplicable and wonderful feelings. The relationship between the senior sister before and after it was ok, and then slowly developed after the spring breeze. The relationship with Zhou Yuantong is really inexplicable. I can't escape from the Demon Sect, and getting married there is sticky and grinding, not at all enjoyable. In addition, the protagonist has a plug-in to travel through the world. He has worked hard to practice and has not yet established a foundation. Instead, Zhou Yuantong has established a foundation immediately after having a relationship. There is no mention of how incredible her talent is. She just has some qualifications. How can she be compared to the protagonist? The protagonist has a cheat and has traveled through two worlds. Not to mention the golden elixir, you can just build the foundation casually. If you have a cheat, it is not as good as Zhou Yuantong's lying and winning cultivation. Then your time travel is not in vain. I can only say that it is pure trash. At least you can accept it if you write that the protagonist builds the foundation and Zhou Cai builds the foundation.

She is actually a female author, but she often pretends to be a male and says "my wife". In fact, she is a female. She is afraid of being scolded before saying male. Therefore, the female protagonists in her books are very unnatural, the male protagonist does not look like a man, and the emotional scenes are more female-oriented.

Be careful. This author's books habitually disgust readers

The female channel is too strong and the female author can't describe it in one word

I decided to imitate the author's style and write a book about mortals. You are waiting for my good news. 🙂🙂🙂

I admit that I like to eat💩😄 I obviously know that the writing in the later period is terrible, but there is really a shortage of books

A person who travels across the world uses the world to support himself. As a result, he is depressed all the way and never takes off. More than 300 chapters are still in the middle of foundation building. Are you tired?

How can you say. The more I write, the more popular it becomes. Gou is just for future rise and pretense. It's not about being stubborn, it's about being suppressed. And the author travels through multiple worlds. Just a passerby. Isn't traveling across the world just for resources? You are a lone traveler looking for support from Mao. Still a time traveler. The layout is really too small. No layout or planning at all. Hey, the anger is endless. The most important thing is what kind of cultivation level you have, so that you can avoid all things. Have you cultivated the unfeeling way? How can I say that those four things are not alike, they are neither literary nor classy.

Compared with "The Great Sage Litian", "The Great Sage Beiyin", and "Don't Seek Immortal Fate", the writing style of this book is slightly lighter and not too boring. However, the story is messy and not rich enough. It feels even worse than the wizard's book. My favorite among the protagonists written by the author is Guo Fan from "The True Martial Arts of All Realms". He acts domineering and strong, is not afraid of power, dares to fight and fight hard, and can always turn the tide in times of crisis. It's a pity.

The author's avatar is his wife. I guess he is the type of Rolex who is proud of being a slave to his wife. There is a video showing his face on Douyin, and he looks like a standard Rolex. It is speculated that the creative process was interfered by his wife. So it's not surprising that there are so many incredible plots.

Monogamy was practiced in ancient times and the modern concept of love. When I saw that the author was a woman, I wondered how she could write such a disgusting emotional drama. The protagonist likes moral kidnapping and double standards. The protagonist is not an upright man, but the author's male pet, a realistic fantasy overbearing president who smells like meat. Other authors who want to portray the feudal flavor of the villain tend to portray him as a fool or a paranoid with problematic thinking. The feudal remnants portrayed by the author are profound and consistent with reality. The protagonist is a good person among people. He is of higher quality than most people and works hard, but he just has that Celestial Dragon flavor that makes him incompatible with ordinary people. Although the protagonist's success does not depend on bloodline, he must have bloodline as a stepping stone.

I'm gone. I'm so sick from fighting. The background of the three worlds is not reflected at all. It's pure waste.

You can only dance within the established limitations. Infighting and palace fighting lack the courage and determination to break through and then stand up again. In other words, this is female thinking, always looking for someone to rely on. I don't have the courage to break the cauldron and rise up.

I really don't understand this author, why he often gets into trouble when he writes well. I started reading it from Wanjie Zhenwu. I originally read it well, but in the end, it turned out to be a eunuch. This book is also suffering from a disease. It has always been well written. Why is it suddenly necessary to write about being kidnapped to the Hehuan Sect? It's okay to change the map, but you can't change it like this. Directly practicing the exercises did not cause the protagonist to get stuck directly, and the reason for being raped was basically neurological. Ill is the kind of protagonist who has nothing to do if he doesn't have so many things to do. Moreover, the protagonist has not been able to escape before. He has to go to the base camp before he can think about it. He is so crazy. Which one is easier to escape from a foundation or some golden elixirs and Nascent Soul? Originally, a very simple thing had to lead to a narrow escape from death and endless troubles, and then he was left homeless without any skills, so he could not practice. It is estimated that the author realized how crazy subscription withdrawals were during this period and then he quickly returned to the subscription.

There is no explanation for the world switching, and no explanation of the characteristics of the several worlds. The previous paragraph is still in this world, and the next paragraph seamlessly switches to another world. What the hell is this? Is this a novel that people can read?

It turns out that both sides have ancient backgrounds and low martial arts. What's the difference between tempering the body and qi at the same time? Many times I don't even know which side the protagonist is on I'm just speechless

Several worlds have piled up such rubbish protagonists, let alone slow cultivation. With such resource utilization, what kind of immortality are you cultivating? You go and do your job, and you don't care about priorities.

I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time. The pig's feet are flying more and more as the writing goes on, which is also a feature.

What is this? A plot with cerebral palsy, crazy fighting ability, the protagonist is dumber than a pig, and I can't finish 20 chapters. Who told me that the writing is good with the author? The protagonist has some points. One of the exercises is called Yin Qi Jue, and the other is called Netherworld Emperor's Purification of the World. The protagonist has no brain and added Yin Qi Jue, and then found out that the Yin Qi Jue turned him into a zombie. I wanted to complain, but the threshold for speaking on the new book is 500 points. Are you worthy?

As soon as the mid-term is reached, you suppress the combat power. It is obvious that the breakthrough is going to be exciting, but suddenly a plot comes to suppress the excitement. Can't you just wait until the pretense is over? It's so disgusting. The previous books were like this and the writing was good, but this kind of plot development is really disgusting.

The brother-in-law is the kind of yellow-haired male protagonist, he can't do anything. As a result, the protagonist's sister also has a white and rich girl who loves him and is willing to serve the same husband. The protagonist is like the suffering master in the moderator's article 😰

It sucks and I can't stand it. Can't tell the difference. And too simple.

It's a more unfinished combination, as if on purpose, and the ending always makes the actor angry.

Every book has been cut, and you haven't even entered the palace as a eunuch! 😡😡😡

The best book written by the author should be Wanjie Zhenwu, but unfortunately it was cut later. As a result, the author's thinking in the next two books has not changed, and the writing is okay. The results of the next few books should be getting worse and worse. The author still likes to go his own way. I can't even finish the free chapters of the new books. They are worse than useless.

I have to scold you, but I still read the novels one after another. I have to say that the author's writing is really interesting and interesting. Except for the ending, he wrote more words to make it comfortable. If it is not finished, I will continue to read the next one.

It's a great book, but it's still not popular, it's a pity

I don't feel that it's hot, so the other books are pretty good.