Great Sage of Beiyin

This book has been unreadable since it absorbed the golden origin. He actually re-wrote a new world and a new protagonist. Can you believe this? I gave up on the book from the beginning because it was 100% bad. If you want to remake it, delete the plot of the new world and the new protagonist, directly absorb the golden origin, and then explore the realm of the great sage. You can intersperse the plot of the earth's complete fall into the ruin world, select some good seedlings, and form your own organization, a force that is truly built entirely by yourself. After being promoted to the Great Sage, you will understand the truth of the ruin world, where those gods come from, divinity, and transcendence.

It's almost time to become a eunuch! Stop torturing yourself!

When I was reading the first half, I kept wondering why the writing was so good, and people kept scolding me. When I saw the second half, I just wanted to criticize it. It has nothing to do with what I wrote before. It was a waste of time to set up the previous part.

When others get one Source Star, they are so awesome. How come the protagonist is such a fucking waste after he gets so many Source Stars? What did the author think? Don't you have the ability to think normally?

In fact, the writing style of this book is not faulty. If the author hadn't disappeared for a while, he would be a great writer by now. It's just that the protagonist was pressured too hard in the early stage, and many book friends complained about it! Now it is obvious that the author has begun to let go of the suppression of the protagonist and has become more decisive in killing. I hope you can keep watching and enjoy it more and more 😆

Test the poison... Recommended star rating: 2/5 Two words stand out, disgusting. Advantages: The background is ok and the fighting is ok. What makes me feel uncomfortable: I won't wear it in groups, just wear it alone. It's disgusting before it's even put on the shelves. Don't make up the word count if it's not necessary. I only saw a ruby ​​offering in exchange for a house, which is really outrageous. The whole plot is bulky, has no main theme (no prominent main line), and there is a half-dead emotional drama...

This is my first time posting. This book has been fully booked since the last update, but this Shou Yuan is disgusting to me. I keep emphasizing on the B Shou Yuan. It feels a bit like eating rat shit. It's not satisfying enough. Let's continue to observe.

Many readers in the comment area criticized the plot for not being exciting enough. I would like to say that there are many starting points for reading exciting articles. There is no need to be sarcastic. I still prefer this style. Although it is not exciting enough, it is authentic and has its own style. The readers who stay are very sticky.

There is no golden finger for opening a new map. It's useless. I'll continue to be hunted everywhere, right? Can you change the routine? There's this typo, so I'm giving up.

This Zhou Yi seems to be really unmotivated. You might as well open a new book. I see that you have reached the peak. You start to climb up the hill again. Not to mention climbing up the hill again, you climb step by step. I am so busy.

It's weird, a Zhou Yi plot suddenly appeared, and so many chapters have been written, but it hasn't been finished yet? Abandoned

Now that I'm back in control of the plot, I'd like to share my thoughts. The protagonist is Zhou Jia. One is Zhou Jia, who has many cards. No one thinks that he will be stumped by a small longevity. Second, the character of the protagonist will not be troubled by this after so many experiences. Some are just brave and diligent, moving forward and overcoming difficulties recklessly. Just go for it. Zhou Jia has always done this before. The early stage of this new dungeon is too overwhelming, and the sense of fragmentation is particularly strong. I hope the author can control the character of the protagonist and be consistent in the future. Even if there are changes, it is best to explain it in detail, otherwise in the end readers will not know what kind of person the protagonist is. Come on!

It's short and weak. If the author is not good, just make up for it. If you publish something like this, who will be insulted?

It should be foreseeable to drop the subscription now. The author has encountered the same old problem again. He is stuck in the late period and can easily lose his direction. But he has to update and can only open a new copy. This may also be the disadvantage of serial subscription. This book is generally okay, but the turn is very sudden. The new copy is opened haphazardly. It feels like the author is trying to make a breakthrough. I plan to wait for this new copy to reach its climax before subscribing. I will keep it now otherwise it will be a bit boring. I think there are several points in opening a new dungeon that can help retain the audience. Here are some personal insights: One is the rationality of opening a dungeon, why a dungeon is opened, and the necessity of a dungeon. The other is the connection with the past. If there is no connection or any human relationship, it will be very boring and the sense of separation will be serious. You can add an enemy, such as chasing you to cause damage or want to kill you. The improvement of fighting wits and courage with the previous enemy will also be exciting for the audience and can also be continued. The other is the novelty of the dungeon and the progress of the protagonist. If it is still the same old routine, it will be quite annoying. At least it is a supplement or optimization to the previous system. I really like the author's style and books, and I hope the writing gets better and better.

Why would someone threaten the protagonist? The protagonist, a new black iron, is still a young potential stock. It's okay if the Xu family doesn't win over them and show their goodwill, but they also threaten them vaguely. Although the truth is this, the protagonist does have no background, but if you say it directly, doesn't it offend the protagonist? The Xu family is not the only one here, and the protagonist is obviously pushed towards the hostile side of the Xu family. It's just the branch of the Xu family that is so arrogant and looks down on the protagonist. There is one thing to say, but I really can't understand it. And I want to change someone to do business, and I don't want to give the protagonist, the supplier, better benefits, but it will be reduced. This really doesn't make sense to me. It feels like forcibly setting up an enemy for the protagonist at this stage. It feels much better to complain about the poison. The book is a good book, it would be perfect if it could be less poisonous.

I read a lot of chapters and it was really hard to read.

I have read basically all of the author's books, and his writing style is also very good. My opinion about this book is: the exciting parts of the book are very good, but some places are very "messy". I feel that the author may not be in the mood when writing these places, and the details are not handled well. It feels like something suddenly appeared at the beginning. Putting that aside, it felt good to read. This may be the author's style. I support the author, come on!

The author updates too slowly! Come on, come on, come on

Well, I have actually known about this book for a long time, but it was all about complaining about the author's various unreasonableness and collapse. I started reading it the day before yesterday and finished it in one sitting. It is exactly as the comments said. However, no matter how others complain, a book that can be read in one sitting must at least be a good book. Don't hold on to the slightest flaw. If you want to say that there is no perfect book without any flaw on the Internet, there will be a little bit of it. . . So don't hold on to it for a moment. . . Therefore, the author should update more, restore his longevity as soon as possible, improve his cultivation by leaps and bounds, have golden fingers, improve various abilities, and beat all the children, quack. . . .

The supporting characters in this book turn into imbeciles when it comes to the main character. What else is there to write about? The rationality of the setting is too poor. The only thing I can read is that the writing is not bad.

The chapters are too short and it's not satisfying to watch.

As for the author, it is understandable that he wants to write new ideas and become a god in one book. But to be honest, to be able to become a god in one book, first of all, his writing style is good, and secondly, he has basically created a genre. As for the author, don't force it. Don't innovate for the sake of innovation. Look at what others have written. It's no big deal to imitate. The main thing is to write something of your own while imitating.

Broken chapter…

Is it changing one chapter a day? . .

Who is in favor of the protagonist, the old loser, and who is against it? 😅

Aging occurs only when the physical body decays and energy and blood are insufficient. Each one here is as powerful as a nuclear bomb. He's such an old guy, and he explained that he's honest on the outside but okay on the inside. I'm convinced. Just look at some old people who exercise regularly and have sufficient energy and blood. They don't have many wrinkles. Everyone here has exceeded biological limits. Each one is comparable to a humanoid nuclear bomb. Still lacking so much flesh and blood? It's okay if you don't cultivate your body. You can cultivate your body, your body will evolve and become stronger, and you will eventually be able to live for tens of thousands of years, and then you will always look like an old man. Do you think it's normal? Even if you don't care about your appearance, your appearance will not age due to the spontaneous radiation of power. It's not that your appearance will look old as you get older, but that your appearance will age only when your body's internal organs weaken. I am also drunk for forcing myself to write a lot of nuclear bomb old man

I feel like this book is still following the same formula as the one written ten years ago. At the fifth level, the high-end combat power of the eighth level was very rare. At the seventh level, the eighth level was already all over the place, and the tenth level had high-end combat power. At the tenth level, the tenth level encounters are all over the place, and the black iron is a high-end combat power. Now it's time for Black Iron, and Black Iron can only be used as a servant. There are so many ten-grade people that the pigs raised by the neighbor next door may all be ten-grade.

Author, I don't want to talk about what you said. How many chapters have it been? Pigfoot is already thirty years old, and you still want him to be single. Why are you still waiting for a so-called earth girlfriend? Which woman's boyfriend has disappeared for more than ten years? I will still wait for you, both husband and wife are afraid that it is impossible. The so-called earth girlfriend, in fact, you are afraid of writing emotional dramas. Alas, you have to accept the suitable women around you. You can just be less descriptive. You don't know, Wang Qiaoxi will always be a pain in my heart. You didn't even give her an explanation when it was over. You scumbag, we boys are shameless.

He has been thinking about his girlfriend from Earth even though he has not changed his mind after traveling through time. Isn't he worried that his girlfriend will change her mind? It doesn't make sense that I'm not married. He has always wanted to go back. He has traveled from all over the world and has never seen anyone able to go back. So he is so sure that he can go back? These two points are a bit poisonous

Dear book friends, this book can still be read, but it has some poisonous points. If you can't accept it, please leave in advance. I will list them here one by one. 1: The villain has no brains. As long as he sees the protagonist, he will almost get into a conflict. He has no brains to provoke. Even if the protagonist is stronger than him, even an ordinary mole cricket dares to provoke the protagonist who can obviously kill him. He has no brains. 2: The protagonist's realm upgrade is slow. He has dozens of "Source Stars" It is a plug-in blessing, which is not as fast as the upgrade of a native Source Star. 3: The author deliberately suppresses the protagonist's realm. The author should not have an outline. It happened several times that even if he got the opportunity, he still didn't upgrade. Even before he got the opportunity, he was at a high level and the more he fought, the more he retreated. It should be that the author had few realm settings and wanted to leapfrog, but the protagonist upgraded, so he ate the book and forgot about the pig's foot realm to create the excitement of leapfrog combat. 4: This book is a serious book, please don't use your imagination. Don't take the previous settings as truth. The author has forgotten the latter. For example: In the world, corpses cannot be left behind, and they will mutate in one day. The corpse must be destroyed and traces must be destroyed, but in order to create an enemy for the protagonist, the protagonist kills without destroying the corpse and traces, allowing the enemy to find the corpse in the background, and directly find the protagonist from the corpse. The protagonist later explains that the corpse cannot be destroyed, but it was the protagonist who crushed and killed it, but the corpse cannot be destroyed. It is not a powerful one, it is just an ordinary mole cricket. There are a few paragraphs later, so I won't write them all. 5. Although the protagonist has gone through many hardships and finally upgraded to Black Iron, but with the help of the protagonist in the Black Iron realm, the protagonist's fellow tribesmen have caught up with the protagonist's more than ten years of hard training in less than a month. Urgent Black Iron is still a group. Urgent Black Iron needs things "similar" to the Foundation Establishment Pill, but they don't need them. It's simply brainless. 6. Protagonist, forget it, I won't write it anymore. This book still has its merits, but there are some places that are quite enjoyable. Otherwise, I wouldn't be able to see it now. Finally recommended readers Those who have rich experience in reading novels, more than 8 years, office workers, read it without thinking when they are tired, it is quite enjoyable, other rational readers, it is better not to fall into this trap, thank you for reading this article.