Two Realms, One Is the Dharma-Ending World and the Other Is the Fairy World

Like three cheap masters in the world of treasure refining, piling up resources for the protagonist to compete for the Immortal Official. After the protagonist becomes the Immortal Official, he doesn't say he will be a master, and he doesn't even mention it. It makes me feel that everyone is the protagonist's tool.

The content settings are very good, and the writing skills are online. However, the introduction of Golden Finger to travel between two worlds is a bit abrupt. The invincibility during the time travel and the original physical condition after traveling to both sides are not clearly explained. The rhythm is also very good. While cultivating immortality in the world of monsters, pretending to be a genius in the world of practicing treasures, it is a standard and refreshing article, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.

This update speed is simply slower than a snail! 🐌

The strangeness of the world at the end of the law is very well written, but there is one thing I really want to complain about. It should be written about the only strong point in the desperate situation of resources. For example, one point of spiritual energy + one sword intention is better than a hundred times ordinary spiritual energy. Instead of relying on unreasonable spiritual powers to compare or even surpass the normal world in all aspects. At the very least, the daily manifestations of magical powers should be very stingy. As a result, they are a group of active people who take action at will in the Dharma-ending world. Does spiritual spiritual power consume no energy? If we could be completely spiritual and not consume energy, we would directly transcend the conservation of energy and create a golden age. After locking technology with the three-body proton, hundreds of years of development have been done in a snail shell. It is recommended to study Wenzhao Gonggou to cultivate immortality in the two realms, each with its own victory and intersection.

As long as there are no major poisons in the two world streams, they are all at the food level.

This book is really well written before building the foundation. It's just a standard cool article. The pace is also appropriate. There's nothing too poisonous about it. The supporting characters are also well written. But after building the foundation, brother, didn't you write a cool article? Are you going to write something in-depth? As a good article, shouldn't it be good? Look at what you wrote about building the foundation. Every time I retreat, I say that I have made a big step forward. When I first built the foundation, I could kill a big demon that was close to the soul. However, after building the foundation, it had no effect at all. Any monster can kill you, and you have no way to deal with all the enemies you encounter, and you haven't solved them after searching for a long time. His uncle has been dealt with several times, but the mastermind behind it has never been solved. You have to write exciting stories, and you also have to overwhelm the protagonist. How can this be done? If you're afraid that you won't be able to grasp it later, just stack the boxes. But you were so uncomfortable in the early stage. A few readers can stick with it. Anyway, you can travel across the world. If it doesn't work, just change the world. It's better than pressing like this. Personal opinion, if you have other opinions, you are right. No need to contradict me.

The writing is better than those at the top of the list. Very smart and non-conventional. Give me a reward of ten yuan and keep up the hard work.

To be honest, the world view setting is better than the text, but the plot rhythm is slightly worse. The rhythm is good at the beginning, but then it gets a bit anxious. Although he is not Gou Daoliu, he is too busy. He is either practicing or fighting. The upgrade pace is relatively fast. The protagonist is a bit confused. He kills monsters without understanding the disadvantages, and then gets into trouble one after another. The frequency of traveling between the two worlds is also very frequent. I travel back and forth to do small things. The purpose is unclear and very scattered, as if I just do whatever I think of.

Chapter 1: The protagonist traveled to the Yin Side World 2 years ago. The protagonist was a rich man. In the Yin Side World, his third uncle hanged himself and the protagonist learned that there were monsters in this world. Then he went to seek immortality and pursue extraordinary power for two years. He found a master who had a bunch of monster disciples. Later, it was confirmed that this was a world of miraculous spirits and there was no aura; Chapter 7 writes: (3 months have passed compared to Chapter 1) The protagonist's whole family in the dark side world was slaughtered by a monster 2 and a half years ago (disappeared out of thin air for 3 months). Only the protagonist and people without Shen family blood survived. The protagonist has relied on the money of his uncle Liu who is not related by blood in the past two years (meaning the monster killed the blood of the Shen family in the family) Pulse person, the family's finances disappeared out of thin air), and then gave the Sixth Uncle a book of exercises that require spiritual energy to practice (the protagonist knows that there is no spiritual energy in this world), and then the author introduced that the protagonist's Sixth Uncle has internal power, and the protagonist's relative master also has extraordinary power (the protagonist has extraordinary power, and the protagonist has been looking for it outside for two years...), The protagonist When Uncle Liu was young, he found a lot of fake skills (skills that required aura) and then didn't remind the protagonist for two years... Seriously, the 4 books I saw in the past week were all books with a lot of logical conflicts between Chapter 1 and Chapter 7. Did you all write part of the novel by AI and then expand and modify it yourself to publish it directly? Otherwise, why are they so consistent because there is a serious logical conflict between Chapter 1 and Chapter 7?

I came here as a fan of the first book. The book I borrowed my brain from the Great Emperor was at least clear and well-structured, and the map structure was reasonable. Some of the ideas could be explained by myself. However, this book was terrible and full of bugs. The opponents and other people forced their wits down, so book lovers who came after the book were disappointed.

It's a bit confusing. The tree first said that it was the Yuanshen realm, and later it became the supernatural power realm. The protagonist first said that it should be solved after building the foundation, and then it said that it should be solved after forming the elixir. In the end, it was solved after building the foundation.

There is something fundamentally wrong with the setting of this book. In a time of chaos and demons, there cannot be a world of extraordinary spirits, and in a world of extraordinary spirits, there are no demons!

It's so mindless that I just listen to it in the background. It's just mindless cheating. The world on the left has a high utilization rate because there is no spiritual energy. In their view, 1 can exert 100, but the left side of the protagonist cannot. The world on the right has abundant spiritual energy, but the utilization rate is not as good as that. If you use the skills on the left and practice them on the right, you will become a peerless genius. . Because the exercises on the left absorb a wisp of spiritual energy, and the right is about as much air as you need. Then let me ask you, if you learn the spell on the left, the root of it will be 100% effect, and you go to the right. Can you suck it into pieces and exert the effect of 10,000? The method is similar to the container. Reiki is water. A 500ml cup can only hold 500 of water. If you put 1,000, it will overflow.

The content in the recent period is simply insane, and I don't even know where to start to complain. I feel that everything is nonsense. If I really want to complain, I have to complain from the beginning to the end of this book.

It was really interesting in the early stage, but it started to get toxic later on, selectively suppressing the plot. It was obvious that you could ask Chen Taizu for advice, and Chen would not be stingy, but the author selectively forgot it, just to promote the subsequent plot. This approach is disgusting to old bookworms. I don't like reading books about mentally retarded people, so I'll put it aside for now. I can't stand it anymore, so I'm not sure yet.

It's a bit ridiculous. In the world of treasure training, if the spiritual power from one level to 10 levels of Qi training is compared to 1~999. In the early, middle and late stages of the original world, there were only 500 at most. Some of the corresponding skills of the protagonist's original world are also within this range. If you are very lethal, how powerful can you be? The upper limit of spiritual energy is here, and the spiritual consciousness is nonsense. It can consume less and be more powerful. The upper limit of your spiritual power is there. How can you practice to compare? If nothing else, foundation building in the original world is definitely not as good as foundation building in the treasure training world. Your aura breaks through the foundation building with 500, and others break through with 999. The adaptability of that technique is nonsense. Your spiritual consciousness is equivalent to the next realm. Where is it equivalent to? The techniques in the original world were all based on low spiritual power. From this point of view, it could only be a weakened version of that world. Maybe that world pays more attention to the efficiency of skill utilization and so on, but if you want to say that power is stronger than that world, how is that possible? The foundation determines the upper level, and the foundation of this world is much less than the foundation of that world.

I didn't even want to open this book after reading the introduction. The author just finished writing the first book.

What the hell is this book about? The content is a mess.

I reached chapter 250 and it was a continuous garbage plot, so I skipped the whole thing. It seems that everything has been messed up since the beginning of selling resources from both worlds. The plot has no core. If you take two steps out of the house, you will be an innate monster, and you will do nothing.

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It's too confusing, the plot has no logic at all, and there's no sense of excitement. Your two-world travel is obviously nonsense. I quit.

Just like Taoist Fangcun, you have to persuade them to quit a few times in the beginning. Only by reading about ten chapters can you understand and gradually get better Why bother with the details of the opening? Just read it and feel happy.

I read your works, the author, and I also read your book about borrowing brains. At that time, I felt that the writing was brainless, and the idea was in vain. Your stories always give people a sense of being brainless, and I can't understand it.

Has the outline been revised several times? I always feel that there are many settings problems! Just like the issue of Chen Chao's strength! There is also the problem of the aura produced by the soul flag! It must be an urgent patch to weaken it! There are still many places where you can feel the disharmony! But I can't tell either

The logical flaw is too obvious: The exercises from one world can be applied to another world casually, and no one else will be able to detect it. Today's online articles are so casual. I originally wanted to read it, but I really can't convince myself. It's a pity that this book is gone.

The setting is good, but at least it needs to be self-explanatory. It's full of loopholes and it's hard to see.

I feel that the author is from Yunnan and Guizhou, and then went to Qingshan Sanatorium for further study... The first free ones are quite restrained, but the more I read later, the more I think, and there are more than one...

I can't figure out why the monthly ticket ranking is outside 500. If what I like is not mainstream, is it a problem of my appreciation or a problem of the platform?

It looks good, holy shit. Such good writing and plot rhythm, don't be buried.

Author, I feel that your logic in the first few chapters is a bit confusing and easy to be persuaded. However, the later chapters are quite good, especially after being saved by Zhengdao. The reading basically takes off, but I still recommend that you sort out the logic of the first few chapters.