Great Sage Litian

All the gods are training their qi, but I am the only one who is respected by my martial arts! The tenacity and persistence of the protagonist in the lower realm resonate with readers, and the heroic spirit of being an enemy of the world is even more amazing - these are the two most attractive points in the early stages of the book. After Ascension: What is the Taiyin Manual, what formations, and what kind of corpse training~ What is the essential difference between the protagonist and other monks? What is the essential contradiction? The physical body is stronger? Is your Taoist heart stronger? There is a saying about never forgetting your original intention. I wonder if the author has heard of it. I don't know what Sun Heng's original intention is in the eyes of others, but I think it is to prove the Tao through martial arts! To put it another way, it is to clear the way for ordinary people (mortals without cultivation qualifications). To put it more formally, it is to represent the will of the overwhelming majority of the people~~ Think about the attitude of the monks who treat mortals like pigs and dogs written by the author in the early stage, and the protagonist who gets angry and is seriously injured or even beaten to death. The main conflict in this book becomes the conflict between the powerful second-generation Immortal of the big sect and the powerless but talented ordinary cultivator... To borrow a sentence from Wang Anshi: Everyone is gone! What kind of rationality is there? In a novel, plausibility is more important than the characterization of the protagonist? There are so many Qidian novels about people being able to fly. Did Newton jump up and register a Qidian account to troll anyone?

After browsing the comment area, I discovered a few things: First: Those who say it is not good are not newcomers, or the new readers are a group of old people who have been posting bad comments in the comment area. If a book is not good, you say one sentence, it is enough, two sentences will do, and I come online every day to comment. Who do you think You are a fool. Readers have so much time to hack. If you charge a few more dollars to become a high V, you can become a troll. It's dark every day. Aren't you tired? Second: The suggestions in the comment area are to remove most of the useful ones. Some people think that the protagonist is not pretentious enough, and some think that the protagonist is too fake. Two self-contradictory views have been circulating in the comment area, and the same high Vs who said "it doesn't look good" are commenting below. This kind of view that has nothing to do with the plot has been flooding the comment area. You, the author, are being manipulated. Third: Author, you have offended people, please find an administrator. Your comment area has been eating up your income and driving away some newcomers who do not know the truth. Fourth: Dear students, before reading the comments, it is better to read the free chapters. The quality will be obvious soon. Unless the author has changed, how can the works written by this kind of writing style be so bad? As for what the trolls said is very poor at the end and all kinds of confusing spoilers, I believe everyone is wise, they are disgusting people. Finally, this is a good book, at least I think it. Everyone, don't read this chapter and say that the author is not competent enough in the comment area. These places are already occupied areas.

No matter how bad other people are, I say from the point of view of a nine-year-old bookworm that this book is really good, comparable to the legends of mortals cultivating immortality at that time. Don't give up after reading the comments and read ten or twenty chapters. You will know that it is really good.

Let's talk about the world of Three Paths and Seven Sects, and the plot of the Empress of Baicao Sect. The protagonist has a difficult Taoist heart and a decisive character. There is nothing to say about personal practice. Very good. Let's talk about the practice environment, the invasion of Jinting, the rebellion of Ten Thousand Beasts Mountain, the fall of the Northern Territory Alliance, and Sun Heng was forced to leave. Such a result is actually due to the protagonist The protagonist's attitude towards the practice environment, external appearance Not being able to control the situation well, not being good at it, and not paying attention can no longer be excuses, because this has already affected the practice, and even affected the possible better achievements in practice In the battle between the Northern Alliance and hundreds of thousands of monks in Jinting, Sun Heng played a side role, and he did things with the attitude of truly completing the task, not caring about the battle situation. Planning, not participating in decision-making, not dedicating all his efforts to win, not even expecting the results, participating in such a big war, how is this behavior different from ordinary monks who are soy sauce? Is it by killing a few golden elixirs? How much contribution does it have to hundreds of thousands of monks in the war? Can it win? From this, the result is that the teleportation array is destroyed, Sun Heng After decades of life-and-death struggle with the enemy, the battle line collapsed. The more people surrendered to the Golden Court, the worse the alliance's situation. Can a few golden elixirs or dozens of golden elixirs be able to restore it? The Ten Thousand Beasts Mountain rebelled, and Sun Heng was present. What he did, besides escaping, was of no use to the situation. How many lives did he have to escape? Without thinking about things in advance, he would always run away in a hurry when things came to a close. Haven't you had enough of the embarrassment? They finally did something by bringing them to the Valley of Ten Thousand Demons, but this was a trick. The Jianmen masters broke up as soon as they arrived. What happened before and after was that Jianmen appeared in vain and became the lord of the Northern Territory. The three seven sects were allowed to grow bigger. Sun Heng watched the show indifferently. As expected, the final result was achieved. The alliance fell and Sun Heng was forced to flee. Under the threat of the general situation, even though Is it possible for the gods to get it again? At the end of the volume, Sun Heng sighed, "I just entered the Shangzhen Sect, and I have to be alone again." It's a bad fate, bad luck, right? He didn't do anything, but what did he do I am very satisfied with Sun Heng's personal practice, but his ability to control the situation is too good. Poor, the cultivation environment is too bad. It's okay to deal with external affairs indifferently. The key is to affect the cultivation. What can't be tolerated is that this can be avoided. It could have been better Choose a camp and participate in right and wrong. It is under the cause and effect. Which monk is not like this? There is no way to escape. Take active actions, control the situation, and camp. Isn't it good to create a good practice environment? At least take the initiative instead of being passive. If you want to leave, others will hold your hand instead of running away Of course, being active is not just about doing things, not liking it, and just doing it casually. The overall situation, looking up, is enough for practice

You keep getting into trouble and getting hurt and hiding. Even after changing the map, it's still like this. I asked you why are you so frustrated?

In fact, I very much approve of the author's writing and experience level. Including the so-called tortured and tortured protagonist, the writing is actually very real. Those characters can be found similar in our work and life. However, a big problem with this book is that the overall story arrangement is unreasonable, or the arrangement of the fun and sad points is not clever enough. The cruelty of the world of immortality is not reflected by the fact that people want to step on the protagonist wherever he goes. For example, for the common protagonist with a taunting halo, people want to harm him wherever he goes, but this does not reflect how cruel the world is. Another example is that Han Tianzun, a mortal, is quite carefree all the way, but through him we see a world of immortality where the law of the jungle is the law of the jungle.

Was it so rubbish in the early stage? The protagonist had been practicing for several years and was almost stabbed to death by Zhao Ming, a scholar who had been practicing for a few days? Even if his talent is good, even if the Demon Sect gives him resources, is he still so awesome? ? ? Could it be that the boss of the Demon Sect personally went to ask Taishang Laojun for an elixir? So fucking disgusting

I think Meng Qiushui is the best supporting character portrayed so far, very realistic. The arrogance of youth, the arrogance of youth, the restraint of middle age, the twilight of old age, the carelessness of the first half of life and the waste of the second half of life, are imagined but cannot be obtained, are close in front of the eyes but cannot be touched, 40 years have passed by like a white horse, and the life of a woman, regardless of body and mind, from existence to non-existence, is vividly and exquisitely described. I like her very much, I hope the author can give her a good death

Read to Chapter 48 of "The Foundation of All Nations" and abandon the book. In these 48 chapters, the protagonist has no purpose and is passive throughout the whole process. Since he needs skills and recuperates from his injuries, he is still causing trouble everywhere. After messing with Baicao, you have to live near someone else's nest. You can bear it after eating too much. Obviously there is a token of Xuanqing Sect, so instead of trying to check in at Xuanqing first and get some bargains, I just want to wander around xj2. Generally speaking, the main plot is missing, and the protagonist at a low level is forced to show off. 😡😡It's getting more and more unappetizing. Goodbye.

In the early stage, if the protagonist is weak, it will inevitably make people feel that it is a bit cruel to the pig, but later on, when the protagonist becomes stronger, it will be more enjoyable. Baboons who are worried about pig abuse need not worry. Also! Although it is easy for online articles to fall into a routine cycle, I hope the author can continue to write his own fairy world! Both the plot and the portrayal of supporting characters can be improved. I finished reading it in one go while taking advantage of the limited exemption, and will continue to follow up with more updates. The author, please don't disappoint me. The chapters are more precise than too heavy.

I have a question for the author: is it necessary to write a protagonist full of positive energy and a villain full of negative energy? The world view is exploded 1 Anyone who has anything to do with me will be protected by me, am I the savior? It's normal for a gang to have darkness, but it's weird to take it for granted. 2 As you said, everyone in a gang wants to bully their master and destroy their ancestors. How does this gang survive? The apprentice is stronger than me, so I suppress him or even destroy him. But isn't this situation something that can only be done secretly so that no one knows? There is no one to report or supervise. 3 The choice is two-way, right? Even if it is a gang, people will die, right? Don't they need apprentices? So what is the point of forming a gang? Search for resources to support yourself? Then who should join? Resources are limited, and the gang leader takes them all. What do you do with the rest? Is the deputy gang leader watching? Then who joins a gang... So what's the point of recruiting a disciple? There are no rules and regulations Why join? Are you working in vain for the gang leader? 4According to this death rate, the map of this gang should be very large, right? After eight years of growing up as a child, less than half died in the first year. The strong ones were crushed to death, and the weak ones were beaten to death, and another half died. Don't you think too many people die every year? For example, if the protagonist is whipped, everyone else will definitely die. So a gang has at least fifty or sixty villages, right? But I feel like the map is not that big. 5 How do the people here grow up in a living environment with such a mortality rate, and feel as if they have never died? Nor did he see through the freedom of death. In other words, how did they grow so big safely? Less afraid of death than modern people.

You have suddenly become a waste material, it has become too fast, right?

It uses the upgrade system of the Mortal style, the world view of the classical Xianxia, ​​and the writing style of the polar Taoist style. The writing style is very tasteful, and the writing style has the feeling of a great god's bad tail whale. The character portrayal is very similar. I don't know why they are connected. I highly recommend this book.

It's a good book, much better than the openings written by those great masters. , Reasonable and the character has a normal personality. The plot is reasonable and smooth, but the protagonist should not die wherever he goes. An accident will happen whenever he goes to one place. Death is like the wind, always accompanying us, and it is easy for readers to become tired from reading.

Xiaobai is like Sun Heng's daughter. She will eventually get married when she grows up. The method may be a little different, but she still leaves (it is possible that the protagonist will be able to resurrect her in the future). Zhu Ziyu is determined and unyielding due to her childhood experiences. She is a talented, talented and determined person like Sun Heng. The two appreciate each other but have different positions. Just like old enemies, there will always be results in the end. Why did Xiaobai lose the PK with Zhu Ziyu? It can only be said that one of them grew up based on talent, and the other relied on talent and hard work. In the final scene, Xiaobai still used the blood of the sky-swallowing python to use the sky-swallowing ability to fight against the enemy, while Zhu Ziyu used her sword intention that she had honed through countless hardships to fight against the enemy. Why is Xiaobai the last sky-swallowing python? The other sky-swallowing pythons are all dead. Bloodline is bloodline after all. If you can't transcend bloodline, it still won't work. To be honest, Xiaobai is like a flower in a greenhouse. She is not much better than the previous Sky-Swallowing Python or not as strong as before. People who have gone through hardships and have talents can't defeat demons who rely on blood to be powerful. This is the biggest poisonous point. Xiaobai is still a little younger than Zhu Ziyu, with a daughter and a heroine 😁. Why not write that Sun Heng arrived in time to save Xiao Bai? It may be a little illogical to write like this. A relative may have a feeling when he is about to die, but is it too late for the feeling to return? When Xiaobai was about to die, everything slowed down and his consciousness slowed down. He recalled all the past events, but the fact was that it happened in a flash and it was too late. Unless he knew the teleportation of Sun Wukong in Dragon Ball, otherwise it would be too late. Why didn't Sun Heng kill Zhu Ziyu before? The two were like old enemies. There was always an inexplicable interference and they couldn't kill each other, just like Fang Han and his old enemy Hua Tiandu in Eternal Life. Other ways of writing it do not require killing Xiao Bai. He can also write it as the relationship between Huangtiandi and Black Dog in the world of Zhetian. The protagonist outputs pet assistance. In the end, the power of the pet (the pet here is not meant to be sarcastic) sets off the power of the protagonist. Bringing a Yao, isn't it delicious? 😁

I really want to send a razor blade to the author. The whole book is depressing to the end. The whole world is the enemy of the protagonist. There are all kinds of paranoia about being raped. It's really tiring to read.

11 Recommendation votes are given.

The writing is quite good, especially in the early stage, but it falls apart a bit in the later stage. The ending is actually quite meaningful. The protagonist transforms himself into a person in the world he created to prove the truth, and forms a closed loop with the protagonist at the beginning. The rules of time travel are fine.

Xiaobai was arranged 😢

You can refer to the world view in the Legend of the Great Sage, it is very exciting

It was quite uncomfortable to watch. He was abusing the protagonist throughout the whole process in the lower realm. He had to insult the protagonist over and over again. Basically, he was not seen as a human being. They are all written in dark ways. Not to mention it feels better, it's okay if you don't get angry to death.

I saw Chapter 22. That Miss Meng really disgusted me to death. She tried whipping on someone, and the protagonist was also tested. Later, the protagonist became friends with her (the book review said), and abandoned the book.

I hope the author will not read book reviews, otherwise he will definitely not be able to write well, because no matter how you write, bullies are everywhere. I think it has already made an impact. The first hundred chapters are so wonderful.

I persisted for 280 chapters and it's true that I couldn't hold it anymore. To be honest, every character in the author's works is very vivid and has an online IQ. But you can't argue with the fact that the protagonist is not online. The protagonist's own problems can make me vomit endless poison. First of all, as a child who lived in a cold and cruel world, he himself has become more and more incompatible with this world. People draw a clear line with him when he encounters difficulties. How can he help others solve their worries in the end, repaying evil with kindness? As for the character of the protagonist, you said that if he met someone who devoted himself wholeheartedly to him when he was young, it is understandable and possible that he would develop such a character when he grows up. But look at the ghosts and monsters in your works. How can he still maintain a good attitude? I don't know what happens next, but as far as these three hundred chapters are concerned, it is clear that immortal cultivators have more obvious advantages than warriors, but my main protagonist is practicing martial arts to death. Good guy, I really don't know how you are going to write about the excitement of the protagonist's martial arts training later, and the purpose of the protagonist's self-cultivation is vague. I don't even know what he is practicing for. You said he is doing it to see the world. My feelings I feel that he just wants to please you and abuse us readers (I won't say the rest, these are just some of my personal opinions, but it is true, and people who read it are very tired) The second and most important point, and also to the author, you write novels to have more readers, and the ugly part is to please us (of course, if you draw it yourself (Please treat me as a bookworm). As a bookworm for more than ten years, it is indeed difficult to please many bookworms with today's novels. But I read online novels just for fun, just for YY. I am not here to understand life and experience reality. The ups and downs in the real society are enough for people to pee in. Well, here is another pot for you. You want to show your good writing skills. This is understandable, but okay Not everything in writing must be written around "cruel reality", at least not in online novels. You don't have to make us feel excited, but at least it has to be a little bit exciting. Not everyone is a masochist. I don't know whether you have brought yourself into the protagonist you wrote, but every reader will unconsciously take it in themselves when reading, so it is really uncomfortable. Final summary: The writing is good, but the protagonist is too poisonous, so those who are not mentally strong should be careful.

The title of this book, yes, it still has the same taste, the author himself is undoubtedly 😥

It's been a bit dull lately, I'll see if it's convenient to tip the author in a few days 🙂

I must complain about Chapter 64 of this book. The scene where the protagonist meets a 10-year-old girl and is influenced by her charming nature. It is too vulgar. Even if you are 10 years old, even if you are Liu Yifei and Lin Chiling, what charm does a 10-year-old have? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? . ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? My heart is full of doubts

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Congratulations on the birth of the first Silver Alliance

Great author, come on! ! ! The book is very nice. And those comments: Sun Heng is indeed a bit unscrupulous, but this is cultivating immortality. Should he be more unscrupulous? Maybe this novel is not so passionate, but it is true that in my heart, cultivating immortality is cruel and realistic. Cultivating immortality is not that easy. This world is a cannibal world, and strength is the rule.