Don't Seek Immortality

Let me tell you my overall feelings after reading this book so far. In two words, I feel aggrieved. There's nothing to say about the writing. The fighting scenes are well described, but the plot and protagonist are not very good. First, let's talk about the plot: in one word, slow. If nothing else, let's talk about things with senior sister Wang Xiqiao. If you don't care about senior sister Wang Xiqiao and don't want to see her, then don't agree to any elder position in the Cangyu Sect. The small sect has nothing to gain. First of all, it can't even help you with skills. What's the use? If the purpose of going to the Cangyu Sect is to see and help senior sister, can we take the initiative? See him early and ask about the way back to Taiyi Sect. Let's complain about combat power again. I admit that the protagonist's cultivation level is slow to advance, but after all, he is a person with cheats. He is well-read, proficient in martial arts, and has a solid foundation. It seems that in the foundation building period, he was taking the path of being invincible at the same level, but after he rose to the golden elixir, he ran away from everyone he saw. As for the character, the protagonist is really asking for nothing. He has embarked on the road of cultivating immortals. Can he have a desire to become stronger? Can he take the initiative to plan for himself and compete for opportunities? It's so in vain that the whole book doesn't have any climax. It's better to proceed with caution. It is recommended to read it once a month. So that you fellow Taoists won't scold you.

After reading the book, I saw that I and the senior sister worked together to achieve Dao Ji and then rejected the confession of the senior sister. Many book friends felt sorry for the senior sister. I also felt it was a pity. Although the author is very good at writing this kind of subtle and forbearing emotions, it is still a normal story. But when the protagonist went back to see Qin Qingrong, people couldn't help but sigh that the world has the best of both worlds! If you don't live up to your immortality, you won't live up to you! The protagonist's desire for immortality leaves no time for love. If there is no immortality or immortality in the world, the protagonist will probably join hands with Qin Qingrong after he is born. Disaster! Disaster! Disaster! It's a pity that there are cultivators in the world. The protagonist is not a genius who upgrades like drinking water. Although there are constant plug-ins, upgrades are always stuck. If he cares about his children, he may have no hope of immortality and wait for death in vain. He brings Qin Qingrong to practice together. Since Qin has no talent, it is even more impossible. Maybe Qin will become a weak point. The ending is very incomplete but real enough, reminding people of past regrets. "If you really belong to someone, some thoughts will not come up again, and... They shouldn't come up again." "There are always better choices and better people in the world, but there will never be the past." I have walked so many roads, and there have been so many unsaid words. At this moment, my emotions are so vividly vented, but my eyes can't help but moisten. As I get older, I won't be able to express my emotions so clearly, but once I say it, it goes straight to my heart. If, if the protagonist has a higher starting point and can cultivate immortality from the beginning, the first person he meets is the senior sister, and the senior sister is very talented and will not delay the protagonist's cultivation. It is very likely that the two of them can achieve success. The man is not ruthless, and the concubine is not unintentional. However, the pearls shed tears when they return to the king, and they wish they could meet before they were married. When he first got along with the senior sister, the protagonist also wavered in his feelings for Qin, but he soon realized his true feelings. The act of wavering itself was very real. The protagonist repeatedly said "I'm late" to Qin Qingrong three times, as well as the details of the final parting with the senior sister, which are full of the reservedness of older adults. As he gets older, most of the time his emotions are reserved and restrained. There are not so many oaths and oaths that are earth-shattering, but like the silent spring rain that moistens things, it inadvertently penetrates deep into the heart and lingers. With so many incomplete realities and implicit and complex emotions, this book, at least up to the chapters I have read, is better than most fairy tales in terms of describing reality and emotions. In terms of emotion, I think it is comparable to Zhu Xian. Zhu Xian's emotion is that of a young boy. Although Zhang Xiaofan transforms into Ghost Li, the tone and emotion of the whole book are very romantic. Mo Qiu Xian Yuan is like a helpless middle-aged man, full of incomplete helplessness and forbearing emotions. I heard that this book is unfinished, and I have only read about half of it without commenting, but the highlights I have discovered are dazzling enough, the language is concise, and sometimes there are meaningful words. Because the emotions are well written, the reality in the book is realistic enough. From time to time, a heavy and real sense of reality comes to my face, revealing a deep sense of helplessness.

I finally finished reading it. The first half of this book is really good, but the second half is terrible. I feel like the first part was written by a person with an IQ of 120, and the second part was written by a person with an IQ of 80.

The main character is really a waste. Others can live in this small world for 49 years and then die. The person who took over the body did not kill the protagonist immediately when he was born, but had to wait for the protagonist to recover slowly. It is extremely poisonous.

This book has done well. Why is it so bad? What is there to read in the new book by a bad author?

It's well written and keeps the pace. I believe it will be a classic if it doesn't break down in the future.

I stayed up a few nights and read the latest chapters. I just want to say that this is not better than several so-called great books on the list? I always felt a strange charm, and then I saw that the author's profile picture was that of a woman. Is the author a girl? I used to occasionally watch female videos because the writing there was more delicate and emotional. Until I read this book, it is a style that boys like, and it hides delicate emotions in it. It is really cool. There may be some minor issues, but the flaws are outweighed. It depends on girls to pursue stars, but I feel that writing online depends on boys. I hope some great female channel authors will write more novels about male channels. The male novels are more enjoyable and the plots are great, but the female novels are really emotional It would be good news for readers if they were more integrated with the works. The Qidian female channel is very popular. I haven't been involved in it for several years. I clicked on it occasionally and saw such low popularity, and I didn't have the heart to read.

Author, to some extent, you are really good at writing supporting characters. You give me the same feeling as Chen Dong. Of course, the supporting characters written by Chen Dong impressed me in terms of their talents, abilities and personalities, while the supporting characters you wrote impressed me in their weirdness. Whether it is Mo Qiu, the protagonist of this book, or Sun Heng in "The Great Sage Li Tian", the important supporting characters they encountered in the early stages were more bizarre than the last. Sun Heng met many strange people during his journey from the drug store to the headquarters of the Sanhe Gang. As for the protagonist of this book, Mo Qiu, judging from the latest two chapters, his nominal master is simply awesome. Since he knows how important this main medicine is to his daughter, it is obvious that he himself wants something from the protagonist, but he has to resort to tricks in this regard. The most important thing is that others also have a strong need for this medicinal material, which means that this transaction is a seller's market. If the protagonist is really just one day late, what is Dong Xizhou going to do? Steal it directly? No matter how selfish you are, getting things is the most important thing. You have to make extraneous things and make the protagonist disgusted by these things. This operation is difficult for me to understand.

Okay, compared to the previous book, The Great Sage Litian, I saw more shadows of mortals, and I felt pretty good about it.

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One thing to say, first of all, the author's strength is obvious to all. Although Li Tian was a bit unfinished in the end, he was still popular for a while. The terrible thing is that the author did not listen to the readers' advice at all. Can't you tell which ones are teasing and which ones really want you to be good to you? I didn't listen to the advice of most people, and opened an urban theme that had long since been cool. It was a hit, and I opened Ben Tianshi again. Because of family problems and subject matter issues, it was a hit again. It's true that an author needs to change, but you also have to look at what angle you want to change, and whether it suits you. I followed Ben Tianshi after watching other people's "Dai Geng" and "Xian Li" became popular. You also have to look at people. How did the author come here? You can't just look at other people's paths and be greedy. It depends on your own writing style and audience. After handling the family affairs, I opened a new account and planned to make a comeback. After a few chapters, it looked familiar. I knew who wrote it as soon as I opened the first copy. Without various publicity announcements, I opened a new account. The book is up again. The manuscript fee is more than 10,000. That's it. Brother, why don't you concentrate on slowly polishing the real martial arts of all realms? It's very profitable to choose the advantages and disadvantages of Xia Litian. I don't know if the result is drifting or not. I am starting a new book and doing various outdoor activities. I don't need a bicycle. This achievement has exceeded the starting point of most authors. I I know an author who quit his job and writes at home. He is still paying three thousand or four thousand per month for his manuscripts. Readers have advised him to find a part-time job and just update once a day. But they say that once the first update is added, it will be difficult to add more. Look at this person's realization That's it. If Wanjie cuts this book off, it will probably be difficult because of its bad reputation.

I was confused. I originally thought it was just a transition, but I didn't expect that it would become more and more unpleasant as I went to the end. The protagonist was fucked by the author in various ways. . . The protagonist's talent is always the most rubbish. He never arranges for the protagonist to change his talent. Plug-ins become something that can only improve his understanding. He has always relied on this understanding to use time to improve his strength. . . This. . . As I get older, I am less energetic. . . No matter how much I practice, I will always be looked down upon by others. I will always be a younger brother, and then stab others in the back with all my heart. . . With such good writing skills, if you arrange the plot carefully and add some things from the underworld, it will become popular already. . . Reading this book is a complete test of my endurance. Others are getting more and more cheerful, but you are getting more and more frustrated. . . I'm so confused

I really can't figure it out. Who can help me analyze it? What did the author think? Instead of writing a book that earns over 10,000 yuan a month, start a new book? Not to mention that this directly offended almost all fans of Wanjie Zhenwu. The author not only opens a new book, but also opens a new book in a state where he has lost all his fans. The author might as well change his pen name and start over. What on earth is the author thinking?

It's really hard to calm down. . . This is the best novel I have ever seen written about the over-cultivation of immortality in the world of martial arts. The writing style and story are completely to my liking, and it completely captures the artistic conception of the long road to immortality and the lonely quest in my heart. . . But why why why why? I was a little delayed in the early stage, and endured the small collapse in the mid-term, but the end was unfinished. It's uncomfortable, uncomfortable, too uncomfortable.

If you want to read cool articles, don't read this. The protagonist is being fucked all the time, always being led around by the nose, which makes me feel frustrated.

This author has become obsessed with writing emotional dramas and urban novels. Every time I start a new movie and get good results, I start writing emotional dramas and then they end up unfinished. Then the next book will definitely be an urban novel, and it will hit the streets at the speed of light. Then I will change my vest and repeat the above behavior. Anyone who can honestly write a serious fairy tale will be able to get an appointment with the great gods long ago.

It's getting more and more exciting, good book

The longer you read a book, the more readers you will have, and readers will want it to be excellent. The author will be more rigorous in writing the book, and strive for perfection in the writing. However, the pace will definitely be slowed down when covering all aspects, and the central content about the protagonist will be missing. The most important thing is that whenever the author gets up For a cause, readers intuitively know that there will be an effect. However, due to the accumulation of some contradictions, the distance between cause and effect is constantly fluttering and dazzling. They know that this is a foreshadowing and foreshadowing in the writing, but most readers hope to easily walk through the Kangping Avenue and quickly resolve the cause and effect to reach the other side. In fact, there is a slight flaw. The protagonist is happy and leisurely and elegant. The author writes casually and the readers can read it easily In short, it is not easy for the author to write a book and there are many things to consider. The reader's perspective and what is stated on the surface are not easy to express implicitly. Nowadays, all reading is serialized, and the author himself has no manuscripts, so he has to constantly think and add, and come up with fresh techniques in busy time. What he relies on is the writing style of the chapter, and a little inertia is inevitable. Be at ease, everyone, you can always taste the things you like. The important thing is to be happy. A few branches of red apricots are outside the wall, and people can see them. Seeing the beauty makes it easy to know the whole picture. Inside and outside the wall, everyone thinks differently Books are not easy to support the author 🙏

The old scourge, the protagonist should stay in seclusion and die, and stop going out to harm good people. As long as he has anything to do with the protagonist, both good and bad people will be unlucky. He is really a lone star of evil.

I still haven't figured out where the protagonist's love for his senior sister comes from. It's obvious that the author got sidetracked in writing and was too lazy to get back to it.

Well, I read the beginning and gave Zhang a monthly pass to encourage him.

Abandoned! Is this all written as a piece of shit? ! The slightest bit of early flavor is gone! Don't seek immortality? It turns out that there is no need to ask for the original meaning! The reincarnation of great power, the luck of luck can cover the sky, what a waste of cultivation! They have cultivated to the Nascent Soul stage, but their style of painting has changed drastically. From being unstained in the world of mortals to now fighting for Sister Ghost! As the supporting characters increase in strength, their brainpower deteriorates, they lose basic emotional control, and they can be easily killed to pieces. In the past, the foundation-building elixirs only had Xiaoqiang-level vitality, but now Nascent Soul has become a popular commodity, and one death will destroy a large area!

The author falls apart as soon as he writes a female character, making it hard to watch. In the original version, the Litian Monkey King and the rival camp surnamed Zhu are not lovers, and the other characters are just secondary characters. She is the only one who can survive no matter how hard she jumps. The protagonist even downloads a dungeon to help. This book is about a couple, but there is no love process at all. The senior sister is about to die of old age and they get married. The protagonist is offline for hundreds of chapters while practicing Qi and forming elixirs. The corpse is a zombie apprentice, and a saint is reincarnated, and he is licked again. How do readers identify with this kind of character, and how do they understand the protagonist's behavior? They will be removed from the shelves immediately.

This plot is really bloody. His senior sister is an ordinary person. Is it appropriate to forcefully add drama to her like this? Isn't it bad to pursue the truth wholeheartedly and pursue it to the extreme?

I am a great player in the early stage, and I can do it in the middle stage, but my control in the later stage is relatively poor. I hope to continue to improve. I really like this style of novel, which is somewhat similar to Gun Da.

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Haha It really sucked I'm so smart, I gave up after entering the small world To be honest, I didn't understand it at the time. A cultivator will be speechless when he enters the small world and is pressed and beaten. In that case, it would be better not to open a dungeon, or to stop cultivating immortality and write about martial arts, wouldn't it be good?

There is a saying, is it inappropriate to leave the true disciples of Taiyi Sect alone and become elders here? This is somewhat serious. Even if you don't return, you can still explain a reason, such as the long distance or something. I think the author wants to force the old friends to meet. This plot structure really doesn't work.

It is better to end when there is suspense than to end badly.

This is just a cool article for beginners, don't be fooled by those who come after you!