Heavenly Master, I Have a Different World

In fact, every one of your previous books was a masterpiece, but you lacked some luck and persistence. Now you are the protagonist who writes fantasy foreign names, and you are even more self-destructive! ! So I couldn't help but say a few words, cherish it.

I have to say that the author's novel is quite good, but the eunuch's bad urine quality cannot be changed!

The ancient urban novel is visual sense (first 50 chapters) city + supernatural power + ancient martial arts. It is the main type of novel that I just started to read ten years ago. As for the first fifty chapters, the golden finger of "jade resold in the two worlds" is replaced by the "clairvoyance/treasure appraisal power" of the ancient city, plus some underworld and some big shots, killing each other, without any sense of violation.

In reality, if you just find two formation graveyards, you will end up without a clue. Suddenly jumped back to another world with two wives. So speechless

You might as well not write this urban plot, the other world part is okay and interesting.

The next few chapters are a bit confusing and I feel like I don't understand them all.

This author, every time he writes a fantasy novel and it becomes popular and makes money, he has to reward himself by writing an urban novel. Then if his grades are not good, he will be eunuch, change his title, and then start writing fantasy novels again, and so on.

After reading Chapter 80, I can definitely abandon the book. It's the two women who are causing trouble and they are not my own. Why should I be a free protection umbrella for others? What's the use in America? They are not my own. I am very disappointed with the author. I also said it in my previous comment. It's just a routine, the hero saves the beauty. The same woman uses the plot of a hero saving a beauty three times to cause trouble. Is it really impossible to write the plot without using this disgusting way of writing? The more I look at it, the angrier it becomes. It's a waste of my money.

A modern man, a billionaire, just takes a pistol and enters another world? Are there no other modern weapons? Or have you lost your brain while traveling through time? ? ? Your thinking is too rigid! How can important matters related to wealth and life depend on a pistol that requires several hits to kill three people, and your three-legged cat kung fu? Gatlin can't get grenades either?

Doesn't the male protagonist deserve his own wife? I didn't say anything when my first love died. People named Guo can't accept murderers, and I can understand that. I understand that the beautiful lady I met is Lily. Even if there is no heroine, I don't think it's a big deal. I feel sick when I see the successor named Du! Isn't the male protagonist worthy of his own son? If you want to take over someone else's son, the one you give birth to will be a daughter, and you don't care about the adopted son from another world. It's not good, it's sick! Isn't the male protagonist worthy of having a good woman? Only suitable for receiving orders? Even if I choose someone with the real surname Wen, it's such a waste of my subscription, disgusting! Blocked the author

Why does the author of Qidian always like to deify Chuanwu? The author also writes more and more fantasy. Chuanwu has long been demystified. The elixirs and medicated baths are all made up. Because practicing martial arts is harmful to the body, the internal tonic is real, and the external use of bruises and wounds is a plaster. Chuanwu is about practicing routines, and true Chuan is about exerting force techniques. The so-called killer move is to practice an action that causes the most damage to the human body according to one's own conditions. One move can be used all over the world to achieve quick results. The master is the master of several killing moves, and the so-called mastery is the killing skill. The most amazing mental method taught by each sect is what is harmful to the body through exercise. These sects have learned countless lessons and summarized how to practice with less harm to the body. This is the mental method. Why is it no longer possible to teach martial arts? Because his mental method is not as efficient as the scientific mental method. The competition in kung fu is whose quick method is faster, whoever is the first sect.

I don't know if the author's education level is a little low or he hasn't graduated from high school yet. The protagonist rented a 500-square-meter office building. When it came time to recruit people, he squatted in the job market. Then he realized that he was the boss and didn't need to recruit people himself. In the blink of an eye, he asked the only employee of the company (the salesperson in the store, basically the finance) to recruit people. Are you kidding?

The characters are terrible, they are completely brainless, and after five chapters they are still awesome.

The first part is interesting, but the second part is not interesting at all. It's like a pug being led around, and it's like a cow or a horse for the sake of your adopted son? Laughing to death! If you don't even want to have your own child, how many reliable ones are there? Those who have traveled through modern society wouldn't even understand this, right? Feeling alone and affectionate in modern clothes? Why didn't I marry you even if I didn't meet you in ancient times? Anyone who is divorced can behave like a chaste and martyrdom woman. Do you want me to give you a chastity memorial?

To put it mildly, this book is retro. It is roughly equivalent to the two-world villain novel around 2010. The intelligence of the characters and the plot of the story are all about the same level

Every book of his is like this. As long as he reports the results, it means that he doesn't want to write anymore. Li Tian, ​​Wan Jie, Don't Seek Immortality. He can't change it, and he doesn't want to change it. This subscription income is not low. He doesn't want to think about the readers. Every time he reads half of it, it will be unfinished and he will be tired.

The writing has become increasingly boring recently, especially with more and more scenes between Du Qiaoyun and the two adopted sons, and the innocence becomes a burden and drags down the protagonist. Du didn't like the protagonist at first and chose someone else (the protagonist was giving money and showing courtesy at that time, not to mention that Du didn't know that the protagonist had no thoughts about her at that time). Now, after her husband died, he took over the mother and son, and asked the mistress to raise other people's sons. I really want to write about children, but you put the scene on your living daughter. If you really want a wife, don't write Qing Liu's two daughters to death! Why, do you really want to be a receiver? Do you have to raise a son for someone else?

I found that this kind of writing has entered a weird circle. No matter whether the protagonist is cheating or working hard, when he finally reaches a martial arts realm, the people and passers-by who appear around him are all in the same realm or beyond the realm, which makes it a bit boring to read.

I don't understand, just practice martial arts in both worlds and spend money to make money. Why did you become a Taoist priest? Seeing the urban Taoist priests, I felt so embarrassed that I was so embarrassed.

This book is a must-have. It is definitely not written by the original author. Look at the previous books, although they are eunuchs, but the details and logic are very good. This book is too simple.

I am not an adult at all, I belong to a child. Writing this kind of novel is purely insulting to me.

City? Oh my God! What era is it? Is there still a market for this kind of urban superpower? Really! You are definitely one of the first authors of the original martial arts unlimited stream. There are actually many reasons why your book Wanjie Zhenwu failed to gain popularity. For example, it was not recommended, the time of publication was wrong, and many old fans did not know about it. But it's not that your writing is not good. Maybe it's not attractive at the beginning, but your writing is very good in the middle and later stages!

I jumped to read it. Chapter 52 immediately persuaded me to quit after it was released. The protagonist is like a licking dog and is treated like a monkey by a woman for entertainment.

The core of what I wrote and wrote is that reality strikes hard, and the other world tolerates and retreats.

Disgusting🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢, gone

Um, could it be that he is a shooter? His grades are good and his boss is stingy. As a result, he is really popular.

Be careful, it's very toxic, the author's writing is mediocre, and the other aspects are extremely low.

On a ten-point scale, I give this book a 7.7. Don't give up just because of the comments here. Everyone has different tastes. None of the top 10 can be read.

Keep writing the takeover plot and the green turtle plot, come on.

The pick-up man, the poisonous spot among Du Qiaoyun's poisonous spots🙂🙂