Douluo: I Have a Game Panel

I can write some analysis and theory, but most of the plots I write don't advance much. It's too watery and the book will lose its original point of view as you read it.

After reading a bunch of nonsense for a long time.

In Bibi Dong's eyes, there are no good men except Yu Xiaoan, they are all evil, and in the original work, her own evil means that the whole continent is evil, and she represents everyone. And the most surprising thing is that she plans to take revenge on everyone except Yu Xiaoan and destroy the continent. This kind of person is a typical person who lives an unsatisfactory life and disgusts others.

1. Ordinary people's way of writing: I put the battery into the flashlight. 2. The normal author's writing: I stuffed two AA batteries into the somewhat worn flashlight. 3. How the Water God writes: Now, I have an old-fashioned flashlight in my hand. Holding it, I felt uneasy. I looked at it and found that, like other old-fashioned flashlights, it had a cover on the hip that could be opened by rotating. When I opened the lid, as I expected, I was speechless when I saw that it was empty inside. My brows furrowed tightly, and the feeling of wanting to commit suicide by throwing myself into a lake hit me from all directions. Because I was faced with a difficult choice - go downstairs and buy two batteries, or find two batteries at home. Where in life is there no trouble? Although it is daytime and I haven't had breakfast yet, as an old-fashioned flashlight, it does not have two small batteries in it, which is very, very unreasonable. Has anyone heard of this? How can I allow this to happen when no one has heard of it? ? I am human too! I have feelings too!!! Just... Making choices is really, really hard. When I went downstairs to buy batteries, I had to put on clothes and pants, I had to be careful that I forgot to bring my keys, I had to avoid speeding cars on the street, and I had to be wary of meteorites in the sky; I was speechless when I thought about this... But if I were to look for it at home, my dear friends, in this age, who else would still have No. 1 Batteries in their home? I thought about it, and was in a dilemma, and I thought about it for almost two hours. . . . Finally, I couldn't help but let out a deep sigh. Well, I can only put these two batteries in my pocket. These two batteries were love tokens given to me by my former and former girlfriends. I thought I didn't have to make such a sacrifice, but it wasn't true. Everyone was involved in the whirlpool of flashlights and batteries. A person's life is a life of solving problems. If you have an old-fashioned flashlight in your hand and its center of gravity is not right, then you put the battery in it.

I'm so fucking convinced, there are two chapters of theory and one chapter of plot, and only fifteen chapters of plot information can be compared to other people's golden three chapters This book should be called "Research and Exploration of Douluo Dalu"

Thanks to the author for making me deeply aware of the importance of the three golden chapters, and the importance of not writing too much of my own analysis and focusing on the main line.

A lot of theories and popular science, a lot of private remarks, if you remove all these, I estimate that the plot content is only a few thousand words, tsk, is this really a novel?

The Earth Tiger Armor, which replenishes its strength when standing on the ground, actually almost fainted to death because it took five seconds to fuse without a soul ring at level 10 😥😰😅🤤😅

Brother, remember, you are writing novels, not writing papers at Qidian 😰😅

There are less than 1,000 words of plot in Chapter 15, and the rest are all rational explanations of how awesome the protagonist's abilities are I carefully read the table of contents from the back to more than 30 chapters Basically, there are no more than three chapters with plot Forget it, it's boring

I patiently read two chapters, and I can only say that there is a reason for the author's poor performance. I have seen authors who did not even mention cheating, and I have also seen authors who have various original settings and theories, but I have never seen an author like the author of this book who goes over one thing over and over again, inserting a lot of irrelevant topics in the middle, and has a random number of words.

I think this book should be called Douluo Tandian, Tandian Snoring Biduo, the real and fake cook said🤣👉

Uh-huh, when it comes to Yu Xiaogang, he starts to talk about a bunch of indifferent things about his martial soul. The function of the golden finger can be summarized in a few sentences. The author also treats the readers like fools by pushing a bunch of analogies and a bunch of settings. When he awakens a martial soul, he pushes a bunch of indifferent settings, asks if he wants to join the Wuhun Palace, and starts with a lot of indifferent analysis from mainland forces. I really can't stand the author's narrative level.

Author, are you here to write a story or a paper? ? ?

Following up to now, let's summarize. The author read all of God King's books and ate too much💩, and then the author wanted to change. The result is that I feed the readers what I have eaten first, tell them the taste, and then tell them how to add ingredients to make it delicious. Looking at it, I feel like I have been eating 💩-flavored chocolate.

There is too much nonsense, and I feel that the author is not strong enough in writing. He has been talking about the setting from the perspective of a monologue from the sidelines. It is also a setting that other Douluo fans have failed to explain. It is very funny to the audience.

The writing is good, the introduction is very detailed, and the pace at which the protagonist becomes stronger is very clear. I like it very much. I hope it can be completed and the author can stick to it. Those who read fast food articles may not be able to stand it. They just want to see the theory of the protagonist and directly complete the upgrade to rape Tang San and accept the girl into a god. They don't want to read this.

I'm really convinced. It's a thesis-style novel. Just one story about Plants vs. Zombies requires a thesis. I don't recommend reading it.

I can't stand it after just two pictures! Nonsense literature

I feel that it is a mistake to spend money to subscribe. The whole article is nonsense. There are only one or two points in one chapter that promote the plot and useful points, and the remaining seven or eight points are all nonsense.

It's too watery, most of it is talking to itself, there are various explanations, and the plot is almost non-existent, 💩💩💩

The essay-style novel created a new genre.

Three chapters to persuade you to quit! Nonsense! If you don't run away, when will you run away?

Many of the settings of the original work have been overturned, and a lot of useless things are verbose, which is very discouraging. Douluo fandom is just for fun, but as a result, you do this and people have no desire to watch it.

What the hell is Plants vs. Zombies? 🙂 Not only are you wordy and have too many settings, but you're also fucking messy 🙂

Deeply explore the Wuhun system and write a large theory Most of the Douluo fandoms are not popular Those who are not good at writing seem to be pretentious in ancient times Those who have imagination are basically subjective conjectures. I have the power of thinking The author has this kind of imagination, it is better to write original ideas and be more pleasing to the eye.

I've read twenty or thirty chapters, and 80 to 90 percent of them are basically theories, settings, etc. I won't talk about the plot progression 🙂

The Infinite Chapter is also copied from another book. It is exactly the same as the other book. Basically, a few words have not been changed.

Water, the author should be less watery, I can't stand it anymore, Chapter 19

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