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Poseidon and Angel God are husband and wife, how did you do it? Which husband has shattered the godhood of his wife's heir?

It's a bit poisonous. He does whatever he has the strength to do. What I see is that the protagonist has the strength of an ordinary soul saint at most, but he keeps doing all kinds of things. Your introduction says that the protagonist has the character of Gou, so why is he so arrogant?

1. Too much nonsense, 2. The protagonist is a spirit beast, or an ugly spirit beast like Shrek. I don't want to read it after three chapters 😅

Write more, manual, manual, please write more

After reading Chapter 11, I discovered a problem. The author is always analyzing this and that. My protagonist didn't even see much of it.

There are too many plots describing settings, and the plot doesn't advance much.

Don't write novels, go write essays. There's no plot, no characterization, and I guess I don't even have an outline. Just write a chapter of whatever setting comes to mind. If you make these novels your main business, you'll starve yourself to death.

The author must be a newbie, and what he writes is very boring. But the creativity is good, I can barely take a look at it

He is almost becoming an Analyst Emperor, and there is almost no progress!

After reading a few chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. 80% Of one chapter is nonsense. After a glance, it's still the same. The author should take his time and enjoy himself.

Why are there so many useless words in front of you? Are you screening readers?

Brother, are you writing a novel or a chronicle? How many analyzes of this and that are there in one chapter? Where is the protagonist?

It's all about setting and commentary on the original work. I don't really like this type. . . Someone in the comment area commented that it was "instructions", which is probably what it feels like.

Is this an explanatory article or a cool article? ? ?

I saw it. The author is very detailed about Dou Yi. I didn't notice many of them.

I think the writing is pretty good, at least I can read it.

Isn't the author updating? I really like reading your book, but my writing skills need practice. You can still read the front part, but the back part is a bit unbearable. See ahead. Basically, I looked at about 150 pictures, and then I went straight to the last one. Your setting and imagination are really good. If you practice your writing well, you might become a master. I appreciate your book not because of your writing style, but because of your setting and imagination.

The first 10 chapters were all nonsense. I just couldn't stand it and gave up.

Is this book still updated? Why do you feel like you haven't updated in two days?

How to invest in this book? 🥺

The update is too slow, so I can't sign a contract like this.

After reading the previous article, it seems too trivial and verbose. Could you try writing about dragons or Harry Potter fans in this style? The fandom audience of Douluo Dalu will most likely not be compatible with your style. I don't mean to say that the author's writing is bad, but it's just that it's really tiring to read. If the author changes his style later, please kick me and I will continue reading.

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