Isn't This Common Sense?

I'm confused and confused. Don't know what the protagonist is doing? All I know is that the protagonist has a cheat that can modify data. Unlimited copying of items, storage space, modification of own attributes {but detailed data is required}, and the protagonist's cheat finger has the upper limit of unlimited copying, causing the backpack to be full and exploded. Items spilled.

In the early stage, that is, before the protagonist's system is set up, it feels like reading an instruction manual. (You can skip reading) In the mid-term, the system framework is initially completed. After experiencing Hunter World, it is equivalent to a classic cool article. In the later stage, the protagonist's ability is equivalent to that of becoming a god, and he begins more of his spiritual pursuit, looking for self-achievement, and satirizing reality by describing other worlds. Overall, this is a good book.

Are you writing a manual? It's over, it's over. I couldn't stand the first three chapters. The setting was all thrown at me at once, and I couldn't remember it. My head hurt.

I thought I was the only one who couldn't stand it, but it turned out that they were all, how could a new book with potential be included in it? Are these editors pulling the strings?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, let me comment: Is this the author's first time writing a novel? The whole article is an explanation of the settings (Tower of the Heavens, own abilities, dungeon world), nothing like a novel or a story. And I just explained whatever came to my mind, I was really dizzy. 😅😅 The novel must be interesting and easy to understand, and it must be step-by-step. The protagonist cannot be like a narrator who only throws away settings and fights. Alas, the imagination is there but it doesn't feel as good as it should.

The BOSS in the game: super long health bar, abnormal resistance, diverse and powerful skills, the top level that breaks the version limit, gorgeous multiple transformations, a large number of cannon fodder boys... The BOSS in the novel: ceiling-level power and combat power, evil-doing subordinates, the inexplicable strategy of queuing up to kill people, the iron will with negative resistance to verbal abuse The BOSS in reality: meetings, working overtime, deducting money, hanging street lights...

I didn't understand it after reading it for a long time. I remember I was reading a novel...

To put it nicely: it's obvious that it's not a studio article, at least it was written by a real person To put it harshly: Brother, you are really not suitable for writing stories, just learn more studio articles, at least they know how to speak in an easy-to-understand way, if you don't know how to improve, you deserve a lifetime lv1

I'm really speechless. Some things don't need to be written in such detail. Listening to this novel, I was confused and even a little dizzy. Also talking about settings, there are too many. It's not that we don't talk about setting. We either write it briefly or write one or two chapters, otherwise it's really boring. Also, don't talk about setting again. I've said it before and I'll say it again later. Really speechless. I hate this kind of repetition the most. It will make me think that Rory is rude.

Brothers, I like novels with many settings, good development skills, and big imagination. Can you recommend a few more books to me? No one will be turned away.

I don't know why, why do you have to explain so much? I just read novels to relieve my boredom, but you just waste money. Are you going to let me make a system for myself after reading your novel? You told me so many reasons why! But I really don't want to see why! I think it's enough for you to tell your story well. You don't have to explain to me how your story came about, what power and ideas he used, what direction he communicated with, what words he said, and what tone he used. Why did he use this tone? Who is the person opposite you when you say this and use this tone? What impact will it have on him? Should you change your tone to talk to him? Should you do pre-communication before speaking? Will it affect your tone of conversation with him after the communication? Oh my god! Why are you telling me this? Everyone is here to listen to your story! You are wrong!

After reading the introduction, I knew I couldn't watch it. . . . The introduction gave me a headache. . . .

WOC, what is written, not only the sentences are not fluent, but also the preface and the follower are often inconsistent. I feel emo

Ju Shui's plot progresses in leaps and bounds at the same time, skipping several times in the first 10 chapters. The protagonists Bai Ye and Zhang Min were chatting, and there was no time travel. In the next chapter, people will go directly to the world of full-time hunters, and then the author started to talk about the setting. While talking about settings, two people suddenly appeared directly at the hunter examination room. Before starting the exam, you can modify the settings of the protagonist's golden finger, and then read the ability in the attribute panel. As a result, during the long-distance running test, a slug appeared out of nowhere and could trade lives. It can be said that apart from the various settings in the chapters, there is no way to smoothly connect the fragmented plots. No wonder I wrote a million-word work, but it's still Level 1, and it can't be put on the shelves even after 150 chapters.

Record physical status and update if there are any questions? Doesn't this directly cause memory loss? Do you really think that the body is clothing? The soul records memories, and the physical brain is just a decoration, right?

Haven't you noticed that the author has never been on VIP? As long as you are happy when you write, you should be honing your writing skills all the time. The creativity is very good. Come on, author💪

What kind of dog are you writing here? This is the manual, right? It makes me dizzy to read it.

I don't even want this plug-in given to me. Why the hell do you have to follow the law of conservation of energy, and you don't even understand what the extracted energy is. If it is a possibility in the future, the future that you can choose will be gone, or if the structure of the universe is destroyed like a parallel world and the universe is destroyed like an avalanche, then GG. They also forced me to explain the plug-in, and I was speechless. I could just use the black box. The more I explained, the more bugs there would be and I still don't understand?

The imaginary setting of the world view you wrote is very in line with my taste. It can be said that in terms of imaginative thinking, it has surpassed most authors from Qidian. My suggestion is that you open a small account and write a few cool stories based on studio routines. Don't add any imaginative settings. Just write according to the most orthodox urban dragon king, fantasy and cool stories, and practice your writing. Your ability to write stories is so poor. The entire story is all about setting up the world view, and there is almost no plot at all. And the plot you wrote seems very boring, not as good as the Urban Dragon King, so practice your writing quickly and write the story first before working on these ideas.

I guess this book was not written by a human. It was most likely written by a programmer just like "The Flash Student in the Giant School of the Universe"!

It doesn't cost money. How can a novel about prostitution be so demanding? Novels are meant to kill time.

Certain cognitions that people take for granted but are not scientific Internet text inequality: one plus one is greater than two For example, when frightened, does the pupil dilate or contract? For example, when menstruation is coming, drink brown sugar water to replenish blood For example, quilts can keep warm but not warm (cover popsicles) For example, eye drops are dropped on the eyeballs For example, the power of self-destruction is extremely powerful - even if the blue is empty at that time For example, efforts must be rewarded For example, good people will always be good people and will not be greedy to do bad things, and bad people will always be bad people and will not be merciful and do good things For example, bronze is green copper For example, there is no business without sharp points and there is no business without treachery For example, if people do not do for themselves (four tones) and others do not do for themselves (two tones) for themselves For example, it is better to be a chicken head than to be a cow queen For example, the world is unkind For example, the person who prepares poison must be sure There is an antidote (I used snake venom, mineral poison, but I don't have serum, and I don't know how to solve the toxicity. The protagonist dies and the whole play ends) For example, most people believe that the truth is in the hands of a few people, and they also believe that the eyes of the masses are sharp For example, failure is the mother of success, and who is the father? For example, meat is more expensive than scraps - foie gras, fish roe, chicken heart, chicken feet, duck intestines... Sticks in the work can also be used For example, various magic weapon rankings are indispensable, but in reality swords are more used as ritual objects br>For example, if you are a sword, you are a sword, energy is also a sword, and the world is also a sword For example, the bullets in the gambling ghost swallow's double eagle gun For example, peppers, corns, sweet potatoes and other crops that often travel through time and space For example, a political system that does not conform to the basic laws of development - fire Movie names For example, an army of 100,000 is 100,000 soldiers For example, the president is the actual person in charge of the company For example, amnesia in a car accident is much greater than a broken bone For example, a hero who can always take out hundreds of kilograms of silver from his sleeve Compared For example, after time travel, you will never have enough physical strength, you will not need any unnecessary food, clothing, housing and transportation, and you will not be able to excretory You can also mention the things in this book, but we are talking about infinite flow first, and the hook for the protagonist is [common sense]. Most of the non-flawed problems will not be changed.

Chapter 4 What's going on? How did you accomplish your achievement? One second I was walking on the road, and in the next paragraph the first blood achievement and the confession achievement popped up. ? ? ? Did I miss the plot?

Haven't watched it yet. But I looked through the catalog. . . . Can you write down the title? . . . .

Withdrawn, the plot that should be foreshadowed is not foreshadowed, it is just thrown out or skipped for you, which makes you feel a little confused.

My evaluation of the beginning is that it is too realistic

How come the more I read, the more it looks like the plots of many books? With the author's touch-up

Zhang Min in the book Actor Zhang Min

I haven't read the novel, but ce can write your own scripts and create additional rules. When I was in school, I even used ce to create a game editor for non-open source games. I used ce to customize games and improve functions. However, I have not been able to work in related industries after graduation and have almost forgotten about it. It probably doesn't meet my personal expectations, so I don't dare to watch it.

No one left? After all, it's a book with a different taste.