Wearing the Same Clothes, Everyone Has a Golden Finger

I have read it, but I don't like it. There are too many explanations and analyses, and I have no desire to read any more.

There are too many explanatory analyzes in the Douluo chapter. The number of words is not that low either.

It's quite weird. The protagonist is serious in a comedy world, and he also says some high-sounding words, accusing Hu Yifei and Zeng Xiaoxian of messing around on their wedding day. Don't you think you are too arrogant? Not everyone's wedding will be the same, especially in the world of comedy. Perhaps Wang Tiezhu and Tian Erniu just wanted a noisy wedding, so they invited Hu Yifei and Zeng Xiaoxian. They didn't understand the whole incident and just used their own three views to criticize them in large numbers. Isn't it the style of modern keyboard warriors?

There are too many character plots in iPartment, and most of them have nothing to do with the protagonist.

Why are they all surnamed Bai? Bai Ye's name is also in the same dimension as Long Aotian

After reading more than 20 chapters, to put it simply, the overall design and golden fingers of each world are quite good, but the author doesn't know if this is his first time encountering the cross-current genre, so he always unconsciously elaborates some very simple and unnecessary plots (referred to as: water), such as the location numbers of the books in the Harry Potter library, which can be detailed Write out one or two hundred words carefully... The 99 series itself has to write stories about many worlds, but you are trying your best to write some completely unnecessary things in one world story. This not only affects reading, but also increases other people's rebellious psychology, making people less and less interested in continuing to read. This is obviously not right. Of course, the above is just my personal feeling after reading nearly thirty chapters, and it is just my personal opinion. We apologize for the inconvenience caused to everyone.

Bro is trying to find logic for sitcoms. As a viewer, haven't you noticed that TV dramas just brush over these aspects? I feel that my setting is so rigorous that I don't know what the world is when I write it.

3% Plot, 97% theory. And it's still a self-righteous theory. I bit the bullet and saw Douluo and couldn't stand it anymore. I saved 200 chapters and wanted to continue reading, but found that the later chapters were even more rubbish.

Among a lot of setting instructions, I found a little plot. . Gif

There are too many plots that use the protagonist to export the author's own values, and it is usually in a sarcastic way. Even if he has some points of view that he agrees with but his sarcastic way will make him feel uncomfortable, let alone the points of view that he does not agree with. In the early stage of the development of the protagonist, it is not obvious, but in the later stage, it feels a bit incomprehensible.

Don't create so many secondary designs for Tongchuanliu. The power system is already confusing enough, and you still want to create secondary designs? Not verbose? Just to make up the word count, right? Boring(=_=)

Before starting the time travel, I commented on a bunch of foreign facts, but I don't know what the point is. After the time travel, there was another brainstorming session and a lot of analysis. As a result, the system came in three minutes later, the memory was loaded, and the previous analysis was useless. After the system came, there was another analysis, listing some detailed terms, and then quoting scriptures (a certain system holder of the same model), analyzing the practical application, and discussing several chapters. Then I entered the plot and saw the scene of selling counterfeit medicine. I thought it was Lu Ziqiao, but it didn't look like him. I analyzed various plot changes and the possibility of integrating the world, and thought about the pros and cons of changing the plot. I seemed to be thinking about the outcome, but I found that it was not Lu Ziqiao at all. I almost vomited when I saw this. Latecomers should be careful to avoid pitfalls.

Are you an encyclopedia or a novel? Is writing so much useless stuff a waste of words?

Your long explanations feel like a junior high school student writing a light novel, with a lot of settings. Each world is full of chatter, but after finishing the actual content, there is nothing. The plot advancement is like a synopsis stuck in my face. I'm here to read the novel. If you have so many assumptions about the original works and want to share them, why don't you go to the Tieba forum to chat with people? Can't you beat them?

You should change your name to Tongchuan: My power of self-thinking, you write a novel and the plot will take up a small part, the rest is all your self-talk, self-thinking, and brainstorming, and no one else

I feel that the author likes to write large sections of settings throughout the whole article, and the story does not account for much 😥

The settings, examples, and certifications throughout Douluo World~ You are not writing a fanfic. The settings are numerous and dense, and it feels like the plot is inserted into an advertisement.

Although there are a few book reviews that are really not pleasant to listen to, it is a miracle that an old author like you can write such a virtuous book.

As soon as the plot is over, the protagonist has been explaining his knowledge and principles, inventing insights, and analyzing and analyzing. If you don't become stronger and don't participate in the plot, if you change the plot, you will have no sense of participation. You will always feel about yourself. It's disgusting.

I suddenly understood today that you, the author, do not advance the plot at all. Why do I feel that it is not as good as the previous love apartment? Is it because the plot in the love apartment has advanced? The other worlds are all in the water, and the plot has not progressed.

It's a bit watery. In each chapter, the author has to talk about his own opinions (at least one-third of the chapter). I hope the author can talk less about himself, is it okay?

Unbelievable, this is the first time I see this kind of novel. The author is also very good. I don't know if it was directed by AI. A small plot was thrown into the whole vat of nonsense, settings, and interpretations, stirred and stirred, and it actually ended up writing a million words.

Does the author still remember that this book is a novel?

The extremely long setting is mixed with a small amount of plot. The author's setting instructions are too many, and the plot is weak. It feels like reading an instruction manual.

Seeing as the author has written so many books, doesn't he really want to improve himself slowly by looking at readers' comments?

It's all about settings, introduction, and comparison. There is too little plot. It's smelly, long, and boring to watch.

What the hell, is it a completely different book now? There are no traces of simultaneous travel, and hundreds of consecutive chapters are completely separate and pure infinite flow of the main god space.

Of the 2,200-word plot, only the first 100 and the last 100 are plots. The rest are set by the author through popular science. It is not easy for the author. An armored warrior can come up with so many settings. I am afraid he has not watched every season several times. What does this count? Is the hand weak but the will strong?

My evaluation is that cheats must be concise. It has been three chapters and I have only introduced a little bit about cheats. I will probably introduce a few more in the future. No buddy, it's not a problem for you to take out the cheat introduction sheet and open a hundred chapters.

Xieyue and Hu Liena were lovers and this was the first time they met. Huo Yuhao first went to the far north to obtain the Ice Emperor when he was around 7 years old. . . . .