Douluo: I Clicked on Defense Because I Was Afraid of Death.

Why did 🍬wen like Tianmu invade Qidian?

The martial spirit was awakened in Chapter 28. If you can't speed up the progress of the world in the sky and allow the protagonist to participate in the plot of Douluo Continent in the main world, you will abandon the book immediately, and the data will not be uploaded. It is obvious that the fan fiction cares about the characters in the original work. If you write like this, you will have created your own Douluo Continent, and you are the kind of person who sells the dog's meat. Look at how many people are interested now. If you don't change faster later, you will lose the data, which is scary enough. Moreover, if there are too many dialogues in the Tianmu, it's so long-winded that I skipped and watched it. The first two chapters were pretty good, but the later chapters made me tired. They were always dialogues, and the protagonist's progress was too slow. He must be involved in Dou Yi's plot, otherwise the fanfic would lose its meaning.

It's too watery and never enters the protagonist's perspective.

Why do all Douluo fans make the villains so stupid? Even if you treat Tang San as a villain, you should still look like a human being. I can accept Tang San as a villain, but villains also need to have IQ. How can a villain without IQ bring out the excellence of the protagonist! Every fanfic makes Tang San and Yu Xiaogang look like stupid pigs!

It's too slow, bro, it's 56 chapters, and the protagonist is still 4 years old. Brother, you need to eat. If you keep writing like this, what will you do if the plot doesn't advance? There are some things that can be ignored. You think you have to write the plot in such detail, with dialogue under the canopy, and the tossing back and forth between the two worlds. Think about it, you normally write a drama plot, three to four hundred chapters, and finish it in one to two million words. If you add dialogue under the canopy, add Dou Yi's real world, and add Chen Yu's world, if you write it in such detail, it will take you five to six million words to complete it. A fan fiction has more than 1 million words. If it is less than 2 million words, it is very detailed. Any more would be superfluous.

The title of the book is illogical. After reading the introduction, I found that it is useless. I am afraid of the dead point of defense. Can you defend it for a lifetime or something? Can't you just defend yourself and still not be able to escape? He couldn't run even if he wanted to because of his speed. Since he was afraid of death, shouldn't he use speed and defense in parallel?

Silly kids, run away, it's poisonous.

🍬B Extremely, it's my fault for not reading the introduction carefully, it's so disgusting

The plot does not follow the protagonist, but follows the sky screen, and the plot of the sky screen is really funny, it is purely plot. It is not as good as "Four Lanterns", written by "Duluo: Pioneer of the Era, Gods Parallel".

Be careful that no one reads the Tianmu text. Immediately change your name to trick people into entering the pig killing plate.

Pure sugar man😰

There is no distinction between primary and secondary, and I don't know what to write. Just writing that kind of meaningless barrage would take up a lot of space. Whether it's from a tweet or you've seen it yourself, I advise you not to read this stuff.

I don't understand how Douluo fans like to write Little Life comics skills so much

Cultivation is also very awkward. I just hit a tree and expose my hands... As a modern person, shouldn't I tie animal skins to the tree first? The protagonist didn't know about that kind of repair ability before. Even if he knew, wouldn't it be this kind of self-mutilation training method? There's no logic at all... If you just add defense, isn't that like standing still and beating people? I'm really afraid that the defensive acceleration is so useless... Not only that, but all kinds of violations have slipped away anyway.

You are moving too slowly this time, it is almost 1:1. There are still 10 years left until the end of Dou 1. Are you planning to become a god at the age of 14?

It's time to form a team during the academy period, and the seven monsters are starting to attack Yu Xiaogang?

I thought it was like in anime, because I was afraid of pain, so I put all my defense on it, but when I saw the first chapter, there was a sky screen, something that was completely finished. The author's book is set 20,000 years ago in the Tang San era, but there is no sky screen and there is nothing to write about.

At that time, Tang San's thinking was Tangmen>Tang Hao>Yu Xiaogang.

Can we write about Poseidon and the protagonist going on an Antarctic adventure within a month?

I've read Chapter 115. When will I come into contact with the main plane? As a fan novel, there are over 100 chapters. The protagonist has not yet come into contact with the original character. It is too easy to persuade him to quit.

The author is invincible. To describe a clown character when he is angry, he can only use 8 words to describe his eyes red and his breath like an ox. After reading more than 110 chapters, 8 words can already make up half a chapter. You can just change the words and make the veins bulge.

After reading the novel for so long, I feel itchy and want to try writing something. I have been thinking about writing a short article for a long time. Can I ask my friends to help me read it? Whether it is an opinion or a criticism, I hope you can help me by pointing it out in the comment area so that I can have a chance to correct it*^_^* Title of the book: Double-panel descends into the abyss, is it turned on or off?

Build the Spirit Transferring Tower, condense the souls and teach the faith of both human beings, and become the God King level. After death, the spirit remains, and the spirit can be passed down to all generations

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