Douluo: from Internal Boxing to Fa Tian Xiang Di

Overall, it seems a bit too ambitious. Even the original body is only seven years old now. It is not as good as Dou Er or Dou San. The specific cultivation method, even if it is awesome at Erchuang, is a bit outrageous. Personally, I think 900 or 800 years are both suitable. What about you? Unlike other big forces with money and resources, it is very poisonous to rush for the first ring of the millennium now. Even in Dou San, they were promoted through the life platform. If you give the protagonist the first ring of the millennium now, it seems very poisonous. Later, you will become more and more drifting, and it is easy to fall into the street.

I quite don't understand. Douluo is not a world where one needs the courage to become a god. It's not like Zhetian, a world where one can suppress ten thousand paths. Why do you have to work so hard to improve the first few soul rings? You said it can give you a very big improvement, so I'll tolerate it, but it's really not that much of an improvement. It's great to add more soul power and fight a little fiercer in the early stage. The result is that you will be exposed to the big forces and cause some unnecessary trouble. If you say that you can't improve later, forget it. In the end, a divine test will give you a fight to a hundred thousand years or more. Is it necessary to work hard to improve in the early stage? Although the world view of the Third Young Master of the Tang family is a bit low, the difficulty of becoming a god is not that serious. It doesn't matter whether you take the divine test or collect your own beliefs. If you are like Zhetian, you can become a Taoist by yourself. But the result is not that, you have to work hard to get yourself in front of the big forces.

The author's daily updates may not be accurate, but there must be endless typos in each chapter 😅

No, at least make sure your introduction is correct🙄

Even if your martial soul awakens four times, you still can't defeat Shura God and Dragon God. Douluo talks about background.

The plot of Chapter 5 is still too awkward. I don't know what the author is thinking. There are really too many useless speculations and nonsense, which are completely useless for the development of the plot. Pure water! There is also a problem with your timeline. The protagonist is only three years old and his body is not fully developed yet, yet he can be called knowledgeable. There are various theories popping up. What is even more outrageous is that this pure conjecture has been successfully realized by others. This plot and setting are too nonsense. Wouldn't it be more reasonable if the protagonist succeeded in practicing hard by relying on his own talent, and then later modified and simplified it into skills that ordinary people can do with hard work? The current three-year-old protagonist doesn't even have a real sense of the extraordinary system of this world (just looking at the original work, there is a hammer, which at most has a prophetic advantage. Just talking about soul power, can you imagine what its specific form is? What are its characteristics and what What can and can't be done? It's the same as electricity. How much can you understand by just reading the textbook without trying it?

You can write the second ring of Su Yuntao's Millennium

Not to mention other things, the second ring of Bai Lai Zhang, not to mention becoming a god, how long will it take for you to wait until you reach the equal sign? 🤔 Your pace is comparable to that of the Chen Clan's Immortal Clan. I really don't have the patience to say goodbye. 🙂

Two master clowns, the protagonist is even more brainless than Yu Xiaogang. At least Yu Xiaogang can't use his power of thinking, and the protagonist has become brainless. One Xun thinks everything is wrong, and the other Xun thinks everything is right! 😥

The reasonable development of the main martial soul is to follow the path of strength. It is really stiff to play poison without death. I will write the full text just to tell everyone that the power of strength is so powerful that you should be afraid of the blood shield method.

This book couldn't be written by a woman, right? Recently, after the female videos have been released, many male videos have come to beg.

Don't take the soul core? Take the route of developing martial arts? Not going both ways? The author's IQ is on the same level as Xiaogang's

My answer is that your amazing power is not as good as that of a blond lion mastiff. This thing's ten-thousand-year power is comparable to that of a 500,000-year-old Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear.

If you want to write a novel with a different setting, you must be consistent with the setting of the original work. You can find loopholes in the setting of the original work to create a second creation. But your logic must make sense. Even if you say that the left foot steps on the right foot to reach the sky, you have to show that the left foot steps on the right foot. You cannot rely purely on mental evidence. Even if you set it up that it is not easy to directly write cheats and rely on cheating to crush the original settings, there must be some logic. After reading a little, I feel that it is purely relying on mental evidence, and the arguments and arguments are not rigorous.

Regarding the strength of the original martial spirit, I will give an accurate judgment here. Here I tell you that most of the main body martial arts are not strong, and even many are very weak. Here we only talk about the strength of the main body martial soul, and do not involve secret methods. First, about the awakening of the main body martial soul The main body martial soul awakens again. This is also a kind of the main body secret method. It appeared for the first time. In Dou Er, it was proposed by the noumenon sect and successfully practiced. The main body has a secret method that greatly improves the awakening of the main body martial soul and ensures the survival rate. The awakening of the original martial soul is divided into three levels: bronze, silver, and gold. It is undeniable that a large part of the strength of the main body's martial soul is supported by the secret method of awakening the main body's martial soul. In terms of the strength of the martial soul alone, without the secret method of awakening in the main body, the strength of the martial soul will undoubtedly drop a lot. Second, other secret methods about the Noumenon Martial Spirit The Noumenon Sect has developed from the emergence of Dou Er to Dou San and Dou Four, and a large number of secret methods have appeared in the system. Dou Er's unity of heaven and man, Dou San's leak-free golden body, etc., There are other secret techniques that I won't give examples here one by one. Without the blessing of the secret technique, the strength of the original martial spirit would drop even further. Third, about Huo Yuhao, the protagonist of Dou Er who has the original martial spirit When you watched Dou Er, did you really feel that Huo Yuhao's spiritual eye martial spirit was very strong? First of all, the original text clearly states that the Spirit Eyes Martial Soul is composed of eyes and brain and belongs to the spiritual body Martial Soul. A large part of the power of spiritual martial arts comes from the strength of your own spiritual sea. Huo Yuhao's spiritual sea. One day, I dreamed of millions of hidden treasures, which were always warm and nourished. The first soul ring is one million years old, the second soul ring is one thousand years old, and the third soul ring is 15,000 years old. These are just a few examples, I won't give them all up to the 7th ring. What I mean is that Huo Yuhao took so many opportunities, but did not produce the power that these opportunities should produce. Moreover, he also has a second martial spirit. The second martial spirit also absorbed a lot of soul rings, which greatly strengthened his physical fitness. He also awakened the gold-level martial soul and ate fairy grass, but he did not achieve the results he should have. Take Long Aotian as an example. Long Aotian is a rare genius in a century. If Long Aotian and Huo Yuhao have equal opportunities, do you think Huo Yuhao is Long Aotian's opponent? Huo Yuhao felt that the strength of his own martial spirit had really been reduced. He had a gold-level awakening, multiple soul bones, a million-year soul ring, and had skipped levels many times to absorb other soul rings. He had also skipped a lot of years and had eaten fairy grass. The second martial soul also absorbed the soul ring and enhanced a lot of physical fitness. These opportunities are placed on other people in the same period of Dou Er, and they feel that their expressiveness is much stronger than that of Huo Gua. 4. Regarding comparison In Douyi, the Clear Sky Hammer was rated as the best martial spirit in the world. Is the acquired hammer strong? Strong, but where is the strength? Is it more important to be strong or to be strong? If you look at the large number of martial arts spirits that appeared in Douyi, many of them are no worse than the Clear Sky Hammer. But why is the Clear Sky Hammer rated as the best martial spirit in the world? Because they are based on real results, the Clear Sky Hammer Secret Technique, and the Chaotic Cloak Hammer Technique. The Big Sumeru Hammer, Haotian Nine Jue, explodes the ring. Do you think the other forces in Dou Yi have any secret methods? It seems that the Qibao Glazed Tile Sect is distracted and controlled one by one, and there is no secret method. Secret methods appear in large numbers in the Clear Sky Sect, which greatly increases the power of the Clear Sky Hammer. Have Tang Hao and Tang San ever used the Clear Sky Hammer's soul skill? When Tang Hao and Tang San fought, they didn't use the Clear Sky Hammer's soul skill at all. This thing was not easy to use at all, and it was not as easy to use as the Clear Sky Sect's secret method. Tang Hao's level 98 nine-ring explosion could block the god's flat a, which was enough for him to be proud of. He was known as the first person under the gods and had no problem. Everyone thinks that most of the source of the strength of the Noumenon Spirit comes from Dou Er, Dou Three and Dou Four. However, Noumenon Sect has been developing for so long, and there are no fewer secrets in the article than Haotian Sect. The reason for the rise of Noumenon Spirit is entirely because the first generation Douluo figured out the secret recipe for the Noumenon Spirit to be refreshed again, and founded the Noumenon Sect. That is why it rose in Dou Er and has continued ever since. Fifth, it is about the secret method of the main body In fact, the secret method of the main body can not only be used by the main body martial soul, but some of its martial arts spirits may have better effects than the main body martial soul. The protagonist Tang Wulin in Dou San, his martial spirit is Blue Silver Grass, he has also used the secret method of the body, and the effect is much more exaggerated than Dou Er. There is only one reason why he was favored by the Noumenon Sect and taught the Noumenon secret method, and that is because he has strong Qi and blood and a strong body. As a result, he practiced the secret method of the body, and the effect was amazing. Of course, the reason for his strong Qi and blood and strong physical body was brought by the Golden Dragon King. But it is enough to show that other people with strong Qi, blood and strong body can also practice the secret method of the body. Final Summary The strength of most of the main body martial souls is just on the roadside, which is completely supported by the main body secret method. If there is no main body secret method, the incomplete main body martial soul will be weak. The more complete the main body martial soul is, the stronger it is. Without the main body secret method, it will still be weakened to a large extent. It was completely the first generation Douluo who developed the method of the second awakening of the original spirit, and the strength of the original spirit was supported. In the Dou Yi era without secret techniques, the original spirit was too difficult.

Even the name is borrowed from Tang San. I'm really convinced.

I agree that a soul master can change soul rings and soul skills with his own thoughts, but it is outrageous that a random soul beast can have whatever he wants. I really can't accept it. In the article, the protagonist group absorbs soul beasts' soul rings at will and customizes them. It all depends on what soul skills the author wants to give them. Tang San is the Shura god's mechanical deity, and your protagonist is the author's mechanical deity.

The setting is outrageous. Su Yuntao's talent, which is already a white ring, is set by you to play for 600 years after one year of training. What else can you say? Don't break through the protagonist. He will start after practicing for a few years and ten thousand years.

My personal favorite of the main body martial spirit is the feeling of hitting the flesh with full defense, full damage, full output, and full speed. You can add a little elemental enchantment. But the most important thing is the power of blood, and elemental enchantment is not the main thing. This kind of body martial spirit is my favorite. Rather than the elemental output main body martial souls that are decorated in various fan fictions.

The answer to the main body martial soul is never the version. Well, the answer to the Dou 2 version is the spiritual attribute. If you change to a top-level martial soul with spiritual attributes, you can follow Huo Yuhao's route even if it doesn't have to be super. Huo Yuhao is powerful not because the main body is not the main body. Even if the configuration is low-level martial souls and useless martial souls, as long as the attributes are correct and everything else is fine, Tianmeng doesn't care. These, as long as the mental attribute is so poor, Xiao Huo, who is 12 years old and level 10, can accept it Only the mental attribute can get Tianmeng. Huo Yuhao changes his attributes, even if the whole body's martial soul is golden awakened, it will be useless. You can't get the energy from Tianmeng to increase the number of years of the soul ring. There is no second martial soul, no ice emperor and snow emperor, and no sacrifice to lead to Elek. Si, without spiritual attributes and auspicious beast power, Huo Yuhao's talent is much better than that of Poisonous Brother, even Mu En can't compare Your main body martial soul is just Poisonous Death. Among Douluo's main souls, the most is T1, and T0 is never the main soul, let alone the version answer. I don't know where to start blowing the main body soul every day It's not like Zhe Tian, who has a bunch of divine bodies, holy bodies, and royal bodies. It's just an ordinary mortal body. Do you think your body is Ye Fan's mortal body? How can an ordinary body be transformed into a martial spirit? In Douluo, it is not much better. Unless you have a physique from other novels and become a martial spirit, otherwise don't talk nonsense about how the original martial spirit is.

It's so weird. It seems to be very deep, interesting, and innovative, but after watching it for a while, I couldn't swallow it. This is an indescribable feeling.

I just want to know how this crappy book was updated to have more than 500 chapters?

Just two words: garbage

Just make the first few soul rings normal. If you want to cheat the protagonist, get a high-end soul beast soul ring, such as the soul ring of the blond lion mastiff. Use the blond lion mastiff to add the ultimate power attribute to the protagonist.

Douluo fanfics can have female protagonists, but if there are multiple female protagonists, forget it, because basically no Douluo fanfics with multiple female protagonists will fail.

Chapter 19 is very weirdly written. Can't the damn ring explosion be used only once? It takes a month to recover.

One can become a god even with level three innate soul power. It's really funny

I just want to read a book with a single heroine or no heroine. What kind of book is this?

Tell me your opinion. First of all, the author's basic writing quality must be good, otherwise it would not be possible to have so many modifications. Of course, AI polishing cannot be ruled out. It's just that the plot is designed to make people feel nonsensical, and they can't understand the main line and where it's written. I think it might not be a good idea to cut the number of words in this book by two-thirds, but cutting it in half is not a big problem. Then, the author wanted to write something of his own, his own understanding, such as those inexplicable conceptual settings that are related to the martial arts flow, but the result was that the writing was quite good. Disregarding the rigor of the plot and the contradiction with the setting in the original work, the characterization is also relatively mechanical. Hey, forget it, it's not easy at all. I really feel bad about it. I wish the author good luck and write better next time.

Why did the name of this book change to "Neijia"? In terms of whether Chinese martial arts is internal or external, is there anything else besides internal and external?