Pindaoqiu Chuji

Brother, your writing is quite satisfactory. I think it is a qualified book, but there is no passion or desire. You haven't changed the map yet, unless your readers are targeting new readers. Anyone who has read the novel in the past three to five years, you will be a little bored. I have read too many books of the same type. You are too obsessed with Jin Yong's world. And it has no practical meaning.

It feels like the protagonist has always wanted to take shortcuts. With the Vajra Indestructible Magic, Qi Ti Origin, Zhouxu Liuyou Gong, he didn't think about practicing Kung Fu to reach the peak of martial arts. He always thought about the quick success method of absorbing Kung Fu, Black Sky Kung Fu, but the author also wrote the protagonist as a person with great ambitions, and a Taoist priest, which is very confusing, giving people a feeling of being too high-minded and too high-minded.

There are a bunch of settings that are against the public. They just want to justify themselves and drive away other audiences. They just want to refine them without becoming famous. . .

In the first few chapters, it feels like nonsense. There are cheats and exercises. There is no place in the world that I can't go to. Why do I have to work as a coolie for others? A dignified time traveler, why did Mao insist on becoming a disciple of Wang Chongyang?

Awesome, I was silenced in the first chapter. Quanzhen Qiu Chuji was beaten to death for five days in a melee with a Quanzhen Pyrotechnician in order to get treatment for workers, and then the protagonist came back to life through time travel! I don't know how to spit it out! I can't stand this without thinking!

As far as the titles of the books in the past two years are concerned, people don't even have the desire to click on them. Alas, the writing is not bad, but the pattern is getting smaller and smaller. When will the feeling of freedom and freedom in the world come back?

Waste Paper has returned to the familiar track. In fact, there is really no need to insist on innovative world views. There is pressure in life. Many big guys only stop writing fan fiction and write their own original books after ensuring that they have enough food and clothing. My thoughts on this book, not to mention the writing, waste paper is still guaranteed, but there are two points. One is the golden finger. I feel that there is no need to write out the follow-up abilities. At the beginning, the fishing technique in the heavens is enough, and the functions are gradually developed to become more suspenseful. Then the protagonist talks about Journey to the West. The old problem here is how to remember the original text. It is best to apply a patch, or have a super memory, or increase in mental power, or simply come with a golden finger that can not forget the past life. I'm just talking about my personal opinion. I'll use up my waste paper and try to write another hit like Zhang Sanfeng.

I feel like there are some things in this book that I can't accept. I chose Qiu Chuji as the protagonist. I thought there would be some difference, but it turned out to be Qiu Chuji who never became a disciple. In fact, it seems that there is no difference if you choose a beggar as the protagonist. Moreover, the time travel begins with Qiu Chuji being beaten to death. If you choose a beggar as the protagonist and gets beaten to death at the beginning, I find it acceptable. However, if you choose Qiu Chuji, who was originally alive in the plot line, to be beaten to death and travel through the game, I feel confused and a bit uncomfortable. Why did someone who was not dead die in the first place (the reason is not explained), I think it is unacceptable. Then there are plug-ins that can acquire skills from other worlds, so why do you insist on becoming a disciple of Wang Chongyang in order to learn Taoism? Or do you want to learn the basics of martial arts and don't know where to go? It's still because of Wang Chongyang's innate skills, which is a bit difficult to understand, and then there is the process of apprenticeship. I don't know how Qiu Chuji succeeded in becoming an apprentice, but the work is set up that Wang Chongyang took the initiative to let the Taoist mess around, and then the protagonist came up to accuse the Taoist Taoist Pyrotechnics, and then Wang Chongyang was optimistic about the protagonist. How did this idea of being accepted as a scholar come about? Since the original person who did not die (the author's Yuan Qiu Chuji) is dead, how can we be sure that this Wang Chongyang conforms to the original work? If there is no martial arts provided by the plug-in, taking the risk to become a disciple can be said to be to survive in troubled times, but there are martial arts. I can't accept it. Now comes the more difficult part. The protagonist doesn't want to be a book boy, so he openly refuses, and then tells Wang Chongyang about Journey to the West. I'm so speechless at this point, because the protagonist can tell the complete story of Journey to the West. It's so outrageous. Maybe it's because I don't have much education. I feel that although I watched the TV series Journey to the West when I was a child, I couldn't even explain the Eighty-one Difficulties in full.

In the first chapter, he was persuaded to quit. He had just traveled through time and was regarded as a corpse and was about to be buried. He was tied up and couldn't move, and he threatened two little Taoist boys? They won't be able to survive if you don't help you? If someone has a bad temper, I'll bury you alive. Anyway, in the eyes of the people above you, you are a "private person". They are not in any trouble at all. Who gave you the courage to threaten people in this situation? Liang Jingru? ? ?

To be honest, the waste paper feels like it was born at the wrong time. Unlimited Myth, Myth Native Species, and even Myth Martial Arts, if it is called Mythology Trilogy, each book is very creative and quite capable now. The writing and plot are online. The "Projection of the Heavens" is a small tribute. I don't know what happened to the current works. It just lacks the appeal of the past. Although Zhang Sanfeng's book has returned to the light, but now it is in the dilemma of lack of appeal. Wang Zhi wants to break out of his comfort zone but also needs to be right. This is a complete dilemma. He just writes in the most popular and attractive way. His writing and imagination are obviously above the standard, but he is almost like an unknown person.

It's a bit like the unrestricted myth of the time.

The more I read, the more I want to complain. The characters written by the author are all rotten fish and shrimps. The protagonist is like a small street vendor with no real skills and system. Pretending to be cool in front of those plot characters is like playing tricks. I am speechless. You are not as good as an industrialized writer like Wenzhao Gong. I don't want to read it if I don't want to read it for free.

I didn't want to read it when I saw that the protagonist has a golden finger and can get everything, and he takes the initiative and can't wait to become a disciple... This is also an old author, and he still likes to write such vulgar old routine plots. I am speechless😅

I just don't have any more apples and I'm clearing them out for you.

Didn't the real facts already fall on their knees before the Mongols?

I still think Zhao Zhijing is the most awesome, and Bian Fuhao is also awesome.

To be honest, I feel like the author is 100% sold.

Is the author out of inspiration? Why is it that the more you write, the more you go back? You just write in vernacular, and it's fun. What's the point of stressing the protagonist, and what kind of emotional progression. It's fun to write, and it's fun to read. What's the use of making such mess in the first copy? It won't attract people, but makes people unhappy. Can Wang Chongyang in your novel still use the three words "Grand Master"? If you know clearly that a villain is violating discipline but do nothing, why should you cultivate bad temper? Is that called fostering bad temper? That's called creating antagonism

The competitive performance is good, not because you wrote Zhang Sanfeng, but because the previous plots were very interesting, but now it is about Yue Buqun and Qiu Chuji, and I have no desire to read anymore.

Has the author changed? Why doesn't it smell like a waste paper bridge?

The second setting of Idiot can be seen as a story about a person with the same name as Qiu Chuji. It doesn't touch the original work at all. Why don't you create an original protagonist? After reading a few pages of the first chapter, I feel full of contradictions. Please open comment restrictions, otherwise your book review area will be full of curses.

Assets surged. And you. Several authors are not at their previous level. The style has changed drastically, becoming more and more the same, and the more you watch it, the more boring it becomes. Even if I set a template around my most popular novel in the past, I believe there will be many readers who will pay for it. If you don't reply, it will be replaced by default.

Why do I feel like the author sucked it up? I was addicted to this book in the first three chapters.

What kind of garbage says that Ouyang Feng has become a reborn person? Inexplicable!

After the appraisal is completed, this is definitely not written by a waste paper bridge. It seems that the number has really been sold 😭

The plot couldn't be found to be outstanding! ! The more I watch, the more boring I become

What is the name of the other vest in Waste Paper Bridge? It's the book about the one where his heart is taken away at the beginning, but he can still travel between two worlds. I forgot the name of that book, and where did his vest name come from? Who knows?

I feel like I could have started writing slowly, but towards the end it became more urgent and ended in a hurry. The quality is not as good as other books!

I'll order them all, you suck, good job

I found that many novels have been removed from the shelves, who knows what happened