Yitian Draws Sword

I just finished reading Chapter 24 and would like to share my personal views. Getting the innate power first is too deliberate and unnecessary. Internal skills are not martial arts moves. The more you practice, the better. If the internal skills are not inherited from the same origin, there will be conflicts if practiced in too many types. Moreover, Zixia Kung Fu is not bad, at least it is a first-class upper level Kung Fu. And the protagonist's character image is of superior understanding. In this case, why not write about the protagonist practicing Zixia Gong, revising Zixia Gong, and then deducing Zixia Gong into a super magical power that is not inferior to the "Yi Jin Jing"? This is not inconsistent with the character of the protagonist (the swordsmanship of Jade Girl is also unnecessary). Also, the protagonist learned the Kunlun Sect's Zhen Sect swordsmanship just once after watching a fight between the Kunlun leader and his wife. This is too exaggerated and unreasonable. The moves of a sect are just the skin, and the inner workings are the foundation. Otherwise, each sect would have no secrets. Actually, I think that even if you get the secrets to master the magic skills of various sects, you should not be able to practice them. Each family should have its own set of code words, either passed down orally, or like a password, so as to ensure that the magical skills of the family will not be leaked (just like Swordsman, the Demon Sect has Wudang's "Tai Chi Sword", but no one has practiced it). Of course, if you are a martial arts master, it is another matter. Nonsense, welcome to discuss. . .

The cheats are too harsh. I feel like I have learned all the essence of Huashan in three years, and then you still have to give the protagonist another trick that makes you think too much. Moreover, Linghu Chong's method of discovering the cave is similar to that of Swordsman. You really don't know what to say. I feel that this plot can be completely removed. It is too redundant.

Internal strength still needs to be integrated into one. How can you be so messy and want to practice everything? It's not martial arts.

In fact, Gu Long's martial arts skills are quite interesting when he beats Jin Yong.

Writing about Yitian seems like he wants to rebel and take over the world. Otherwise, it would be a shame for Zhu Chongba. Because Lao Zhu is too good at killing donkeys. Few of the founding heroes died well. There are a lot of Yi people🔨

The Ruyi Demon has come out. Since he has such a heaven-defying talent, he should be able to deduce the ancient dragon series of secrets! Otherwise, there will only be a few types of Jin Yong's martial arts secrets that come and go, and no matter how much you write, you won't be able to make fun of them.

Generally speaking, the writing is okay, but I like to add settings randomly, and it is very unreasonable, so I gave up.

The front is fine, but the back is getting more and more boring. I'm learning other martial arts here and there, but it's too much but not perfect. I don't study in depth, so I just rely on pig's feet to understand, okay? Then you wrote that pig's feet are now invincible! There is little progress in the main plot of the story. After learning martial arts, I went to show my sage in front of others.

Tomb Raider, dancing in yellow

Yitian and the proud Huashan sect should not be from the same family, right?

There is a righteous hero in front of you, but if you insist on using poison to control others 😐, the character you wrote will collapse.

The sword comes out of Huashan, and the immortals fly from the sky

Chapter 1: I'm going to talk about some messy things and smooth them out.

Smelly foot wraps, smelly and long,

Guo Xiang is definitely not comparable to Mie Mie. If he can use the incomplete Nine Yangs to create the Emei Nine Yang Skill, his rank is more than one level higher than Mie Mie.

The writing is very good, and the illustrations are also very nice

Is there any Shennong🙂🙂

This heroine is a failure. I feel like it's almost boring. It can't be better without a heroine. It's a bit redundant.

After reading dozens of chapters, I'm still a kid and it's not interesting.

The single heroine is great, you don't even need to watch it

Well, it's not bad. For this single heroine, it's not just Zhou Zhiruo or Zhao Min, but she is actually the descendant of Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu. I feel comfortable. I've turned to the last page and I can follow it, but I just don't know if the author is Old Man Gong...

Sure enough, he started to create his own internal strength again.

Haven't started reading yet, put it on the bookshelf first. The title of the book smells of old people reborn from the dirty soil😁

It's well written, and my personal opinion is good.

The protagonist's name is too straightforward: Bai Prostitution 😠

The leader of the demon sect, the demon sword slaying the dragon

The protagonist's second master "Cai Zhi" was renamed "He Zhi". Book friend "Taikoo Shengdi" reminded that the original work contained such a passage [Ban Shuxian was furious, jumped into the arena, pointed at Old Man Gao and said: "Your Excellency, what is your surname?" Old Man Gao said: "My surname is also He, and Mrs. He invited me." These two sentences clearly showed a ready advantage. Many people nearby laughed. This is because the author is not rigorous enough in reading, and because he cannot frequently revise and publish chapters, he can only revise them one after another. If there are any inconsistencies and inconvenient reading, we hereby apologize.

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1. Ancient Tomb Sect inheritance: Lin Chaoying's original martial arts + Jade Girl Heart Sutra. 2. Quanzhen Sect inheritance: the martial arts moves carved by Wang Chongyang in the ancient tomb + the mental formulas brought by Yang Guo. 3. Jiuyin Scripture (a small part): Wang Chongyang carved it in the secret room of the ancient tomb. 4. Western Poison inheritance: Toad Kung Fu + Nine Yin False Sutra + Snake Staff Technique 5. Dongxie inheritance: Jade Flute Sword Technique + Finger Snap Magical Power 6. Northern Beggar inheritance: Dog Beating Stick Technique (Hong Qigong's moves + Huang Rong mouth formula) 7. Sword Demon inheritance: heavy sword swordsmanship + wooden sword swordsmanship (inspired by the divine eagle + self-enlightenment) 8. Self-created: Sad Ecstasy Palm (Completely based on impressions, is there anything missing?)

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