People in the Heavens, Male Partners on the Ground

When you write a novel, you will know from the introduction that if you don't even understand the readers' love for Mrs. Wang, Dao Baifeng, Gan Baobao and eating rice bowls, and the romantic and happy daily life, how can you stand out and be ignored by everyone?

Song Qingshu wouldn't spend so much money anyway, right? ? Are the attributes so rubbish? ? ? Not to mention peerless, at least you need to be a genius, right? ? ? Is the luck of 1 real? ? With such bad luck, can he become the first person in the third generation of Wudang? ? ?

You are xx, you are xx, will you still know who you are later?

What good does it do you to write such trash for the protagonist?🙂

The progress is too fast, Zhu Tianwen, it's almost a hundred chapters and the protagonist is nothing. Looking at the world that was foreshadowed in the early stages, you can't write hundreds of chapters? How much do you plan to write in the entire book? Lifetime series?

I only read the first chapter of this book, and I didn't finish it. It gave me the feeling that this was the author's self-pleasure, and he had no idea what the readers wanted to read.

Looking at the titles of the latest chapters, why are you still talking about cultivating immortals? Can someone like Zhang Sanfeng, who is over a hundred years old and in the same realm as Zhang Wuji, who is twenty-two, Yang Guo, who is thirty-six, and Guo Jing, who is fifty-six, really be considered a cultivator?

There is no martial arts flavor at all. If you like middle school so much, go write anime. Don't write about martial arts. It's too dramatic.

The main character is still such a waste even after it's released

Tianlongjourney to the West? Have you forgotten the dilemma in the previous book?

Yang Kang: Brother Guo, your girlfriend is so scary. Unlike me, I only feel sorry for my brother.

There are too many miscellaneous plots, the main plot is not advanced at all, and it is highly suspected of money fraud.

This book is okay, but the setting of Golden Finger is not good, it feels like it's too fancy and superfluous.

Don't understand that so many people see this kind of identity change?

By the way, the society at that time believed in three wives and four concubines, so why did Jin Yong write about one wife?

In Chapter 6, the Wudang Changquan's grasping the bird's tail and moving the block and beating gave me the same feeling as the monkey stealing the peach in Jade Girl's Sword Art...

More points

First of all, the title says "Zhu Tian Wen", and I have already read the twenty-one chapter of the main text, but there is still only one world, and there is no relevant content about other worlds. Whether it is a possible chat group or a foggy space, there is not even the slightest bit of relevant content. Even the system is only said to be an emotional system, which currently has no connection with the male matching system in the universe in the introduction of the novel. It is a trick to kill. Secondly, it's very watery. I specially ordered a few chapters to see if the style would change after paying, but it didn't. Even though the protagonist can kill someone with just one or two moves, he still has to write about the content of the fight in a long paragraph or even a whole chapter. And because the protagonist's strength is overwhelming at this time, the description format of the fight is basically based on the opponent's moves, coupled with the protagonist's easy and freehand dodge and block, it can be said that it is copied and pasted. I don't know whether I have read more than ten chapters of the novel, or whether I have read one chapter of the novel more than ten times. Maybe it was written this way specifically to cooperate with the system.

The pace is too slow. It took me more than 20 photos to meet Zhou Zhiruo. According to your progress. To slay the dragon you have to write 200 pieces a day.

Will extra experience points be added when a single item is completed, or will it be added to several items? Alas, it would be best to publish a single chapter to explain the situation at the front, and why there is only one Shenfa item. What is the situation?

After reading the introduction, I already understand that there is one world and one identity, a fusion novel. This world is filled with other people's identities and then changed. Aren't you smart?

Tianlong is too long, go to the next world quickly.

Did the author write about Zhang Sanfeng based on the idea of ​​the Heavenly Master under one person?

It's a bit early to get dressed, and I feel like it would be better to wait for the plot to start in the next two worlds.

It's not a big deal if you have a golden finger. It's not the kind of game where you're invincible after only 20 or 30 chapters. The protagonist is very vicious. Also thick-skinned. If you look for novels and read negative reviews, you can also click into the novel and read five or six chapters. After all, everyone has different reading points and preferences.

It can't be too refined.

I have read the first 40 chapters of the novel, and I have to say that it is really well written, and I have a sense of martial arts. The writing is really good and the pictures are lifelike. This novel is really suitable for being remade into a TV series. If it is made into a martial arts drama, it will definitely be popular all over the country. There is really a lack of this kind of martial arts drama in China. There has not been a classic martial arts drama for more than ten years. After the novel is completed, if the quality can be maintained, if it is remade into a TV series, it will be popular all over the country. There is too little of classic martial arts dramas in China